He knew - chapter 13 (FINAL)

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 13 (final)
Rating: Safe/PG 13
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: when all else fails, lip balm and elevator take the stage


So was this classical enough? Actually I did not plan to end this on my birthday, but the faith was in working here. MY first multi chapter is over and I think no. 13 is a good number to stop at.

A BIG thanks goes to all of you, who kept on reading. Another BIG one goes to all of you who commented at some point. You have given me so much support, encouragement and love. And at the beginning, although you might not know it, you have influenced the flow of events very much. It was fun to meet and talk to all of you. Once again thank you.

The exam period is coming. I might write less but knowing myself I doubt it. I actually have a proposition for you, if you have a prompt you want me to write or an idea, you want to read about, let me know. I won´t promise I´ll write it, but if I like it, or a muse strikes me, I just might. Because some people just give great prompts to write about. Although, you guys know me by now. I write RyoDa. In order to be a bit organized, go and cooment writing your ideas here so I can easily look through them.

THANK YOU again and for the last time in “He knew” history: comments are love, constructive criticism even more.

Comments

[zelpet001.livejournal.com]

GREEEAAAT, XD i really liked it, sorry to hear that its over but still it was a really nice ending.
i liked the part where Ueda barged in the room and said all those things :D and then the ip balm, really nice way to tell him to make the next step.

thanks for your hard work, and good luck with your exams
v(^.^)v

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

I don't think I'm gonna be original in saying it was an awesome ending and very classical RyoDa. But it is, so yeah.
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I thought Maru was a bit bitter or somehow well it's normal he'd feel this way while observing them, but can't be helped right?

Ah the bickering...nothing new, but always works, and over food, truly Ueda XP

You had to include some Pin bakaness, it's obvious. Pin to the rescue always! But what makes it better is that you didn't add Pin to matchmaking RyoDa, as they just ended the evening content, not forcefully together as in "date".

I think the best thing here is the confession from Ueda in NewS's room. Like beyond greatness and really awesome.
Specially the lip balm! <3<3<3
But the elevator scene was nice too, when they finally kiss, after years of wanting to be together, actually kissing and be together. AH~bliss...

I really am glad you continued after the 11, after your poll, or we wouldn't have had aw awesome confession from Ueda.

[badbatazz.livejournal.com]

just read all. the feeling were so raw that my heart really goes out to the three of them. it is really very well written. thanks

[grashiya01.livejournal.com]

Oh my freakin' gackt!!

i just finished reading the entire 13 chapters of this fic..
(sorry i only commented on the last one, coz i can't seem to stop reading it till the very end)

this fic entails a lot of lessons regarding relationship, about loving and letting go, about being slefish and following what your heart says.. i really cna't think of a certain word to describe this.. gosh, i love ryoda so much, but then i felt a deep kind of "admiration" towards yuichi here in this fic.. a love like that is rare and one of kind..

and dear, you are indeed a talented writer! keep on wrinting beautiful fics coz it inspires and uplifts people..

thank you for sharing the love~~~

[grashiya01.livejournal.com]

and yeah, tomorrow is yuichi's birthday..
i wish him happiness!! :DD

>///< SO GREAT!!!

[kikyome-chan.livejournal.com]

I couldn't stop myself from reading the whole fic!! (I'm actually pretty happy that I found it already finished) I really really really liked!!! I'm not used to soft fics, but this one actually got me pressed to the screen XD so cute and a great job, I loved every chapter and every little detail, and the end was so lovely I meant it and like it was fate, at the time of the kiss "ordinary" of Ryo started to play on mi itunes XD it was like "kyaaa ^///^" so I ended up with a big smile in my face and pretty much satisfied!! Thank you for your hard work!!

Hoping to read much more form you, take care! Bye

[yamasho.livejournal.com]

crying, smiling and.....
love it
thank you for such a good story

[tokeruyouna.livejournal.com]

So I wanted to read this after you kept talking about it in your fic meme and I realized that for some reason I did not know it existed. Forgive me for not quoting on the specifics of each chapter, but I practically read straight through the entire thing and did not want to break the flow.

This fic was amazing. All the emotional pull was just perfect to me. I really liked your take on their history, and I do not recall ever having seen it done better. For a while I was wondering if you were going to be able to pull off the RyoDa in the end without causing me to regret the loss of the MaruDa, but you did. The part that left the greatest impression on me was Ryo's letter, and I admit it even made me get very slightly emotional, which is a difficult feat.

Overall, I really loved this, and it definitely belongs on my list of must-read chaptered fics. ♥