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Title: Practice makes perfect
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: NC 17
Summary: Ueda grooms his skills, so when the right time comes … I actually think, this might be my first ever PWP. Written for my![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
je_prompts table, prompt no.46 : Practice.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
A/N: This is for my dear “sister in fandom”![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
creamy_amande for keeping me company while I wrote all the requests; she listened to my ramblings and cheered me on.
No beta
This fic was moved to my writing communitypillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: Ueda thinks it is almost perfect and could get there if repeated often enough
Right ...I wrote smut, ehmmm… someone (points at Riiisa) said my hormones are acting up, seriously I don´t know anymore. Dear Amandine, I hope you like this at least a little, if not I reserve the right to write you another one to make up for the lameness of this. And yeah this is how you forget about awful human stories I get to hear at work. I know I am sick.
Few reminders, the prompt table in progress for which this was written is here. Theryoda_continuum is still alive and rocking, 4 chapters are up, go check it out and consider writing…
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: NC 17
Summary: Ueda grooms his skills, so when the right time comes … I actually think, this might be my first ever PWP. Written for my
je_prompts table, prompt no.46 : Practice. Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
A/N: This is for my dear “sister in fandom”
creamy_amande for keeping me company while I wrote all the requests; she listened to my ramblings and cheered me on. No beta
This fic was moved to my writing community
pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: Ueda thinks it is almost perfect and could get there if repeated often enough Right ...I wrote smut, ehmmm… someone (points at Riiisa) said my hormones are acting up, seriously I don´t know anymore. Dear Amandine, I hope you like this at least a little, if not I reserve the right to write you another one to make up for the lameness of this. And yeah this is how you forget about awful human stories I get to hear at work. I know I am sick.
Few reminders, the prompt table in progress for which this was written is here. The
ryoda_continuum is still alive and rocking, 4 chapters are up, go check it out and consider writing…
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Date: 2009-07-29 09:22 pm (UTC)Of course I have to be first I'm so lucky today!
Will read once I finished opening all new tabs...
Love you sis'!
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Date: 2009-07-29 09:28 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 01:06 am (UTC)I want to say it sucks so you write another but I really can't. It didn't suck, I LOVED it! It was a beautiful smut, if I can say so. I mean no "thrust", cock" and other things like that you find in a smut. ANd I much rather this way since it's beautifully written as usual.
And owhhnwyahoud!!!
LOL practice makes perfect...indeed!!!
Love you Sister Baka!
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Date: 2009-07-30 12:23 pm (UTC)And owhhnwyahoud!!! ??? sorry I am at work, maybe my brain is fried but am I missing something?
other than that, glad you liked it my dearXD
(I´d do some hearts about now, but I have no idea where the and sign is on this impossibly old czech keyborad ... )
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Date: 2009-07-30 05:50 pm (UTC)Yeah sorry the " owhhnwyahoud!!! " was just some incoherent babble over bliss.
Aha ha h no hearts then but I know they're there...
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Date: 2009-07-30 12:26 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-29 09:53 pm (UTC)This was so good, girl!!!! Guess what I will dream about tonight ;)
Wonderful as usual, keep wiritng <3<3<3<3<3<3
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Date: 2009-07-29 09:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-29 09:57 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-29 10:30 pm (UTC)XDDD why do you make me imagine these things?
In the process, Ueda learns that Nakamaru is surprisingly the best and the most willing buddy for this.
ohmygod, you just made me like Maruda.
Let´s face the truth no one is completely straight in Johhny´s. Well, ok, maybe someone like Nagase....
again, XD!
And so now, when everyone else has left already, here they are, knocking things around, pulling and pushing, stumbling over each other, trying to get to the NEWS dressing room couch, but not succeeding.
the imagery... its beautiful!
okay so idk why I had to point out all that stuff but let me just say....OH MY GOD THIS IS THE BEST PWP I HAVE EVER READ and YOU WRITE RYODA SO WELL IT MAKES ME WANT TO CRY WITH HAPPINESS.
lol long comment is REALLY long, I'm going to end it here. hope my comment didn't scare you.
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Date: 2009-07-29 10:38 pm (UTC)lol so it IS official, this is PWP ... can´t believe that ...
and Maruda is great and Nagase is somehow manly in my eyes ... and ...
glad you like my Ryoda:) and i am always happy to oblige when it comes to making people imagine things:)
anyway thank you for reading and commenting (oh so good)
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Date: 2009-07-29 10:40 pm (UTC)I think you're perfectly okay.
Being a tad twisted like a common fangirl is still considered as.. healthy? *cough*
Plus, this is not lame. XD
Well, it's at least an exemplary smut. And smut barely has any storyline, so it's really okay. xD
Practice makes perfect, right?
I like your style of writing in present time, it's making the story dynamic. Most of the time I see only scattered thoughts, making whatsoever no sense. And that's a difficult thing to do, to made up a plot from them..
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Date: 2009-07-29 10:47 pm (UTC)and yeah ... practice, pracitce, practice ... (Komenský might have been almost proud:)
It is getting easier to write in present time, but i still feel insecure about it ...
about the last two sentences, do they refere to my fic? or fics written in present time in general? I am confused, because if it is a concrit than i would try to do something about it but you might need to elaborate ...
anway omg you read my NC 17 fics, really girl you should know better ...
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Date: 2009-07-29 11:20 pm (UTC)That thing about fics in present time being confusing and uncomposed considered such fics in general, what you've written is not any near to be like that. Sorry for the confusion.
...Gimme a break, I read everything that comes to my fpage. xD
But oh well, I can stop if you don't want me to X"D
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Date: 2009-07-30 12:26 pm (UTC)right, sure i want you to stop .. (ehm THIS IS ME BEEING IRONIC)
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Date: 2009-07-30 12:45 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 12:28 pm (UTC)you are welcome, thanks for reading ...
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Date: 2009-07-30 05:15 am (UTC)I think you might have gotten better at writing. XD
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Date: 2009-07-30 12:32 pm (UTC)Also why the hell do you chose this fic (ou of all i have written lately) to read, when there is no plot ... admit it, you wanted smut!
*___* at you coming back, that would be ... you know, good ...
and *blushes* at you thinking i am improving:) i might just love you for it:) I can¨t do stupid hearts at work, no idea where the and sign is!!!!
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Date: 2009-07-30 04:29 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 10:23 am (UTC)i love how tatchan is all "impatient" and ryo who doesn't really know how to do it to make it GOOD XD XD XD
haha at least he'll have to "practice" with the princess :P and i'm sur the hime will be glad to do it for him <3 <3
aaaah i loved it!!!
thank you for sharing ~
I have a question :P
you know we are "mutual friend" on LJ ahah but i don't know your name u_u
don't know if you know mine but then i'll present myself :P
so I'm Cindy :p (nickname Hikari-chan)
yoroshikuuu ~
if you want, you can call me "floppy" like a certain someone hahaha
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Date: 2009-07-30 12:36 pm (UTC)anyway to the fic ... thank you for reading and liking:) imagine what all kinds of things ryo can be taught ...
about the name: My name is Alexandra, so with foreing people i go with Alex, in my country they call mye sasha, Sashka and all kinds of crazy squishes of that, so for example sash as in the nick here is perfectly fine as well ... you choose ... you have so many options ...
and nice to meet you Cindy:)
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Date: 2009-07-30 05:53 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-07-30 06:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-31 09:07 am (UTC)I MISS YOU.
AND YOUR WRITINGS!! T___T This is hella good! O:
something to make me relax >.< *tomorrows my college exam you see*
waaa *___*
I miss RyoDa lust so so so much <3
:)
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Date: 2009-07-31 03:18 pm (UTC)Anyway glad you like it and I hope you do well tomorrow ... Good LUCK!
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Date: 2009-08-01 12:10 am (UTC)I had some free time yesterday thats why I was able to read some updated fanfictions... :)
thank you :)
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Date: 2009-08-01 05:18 pm (UTC)Fighto-O!
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Date: 2009-08-02 12:22 am (UTC)Yeey my Exam are over~! *dances*
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Date: 2009-07-31 06:38 pm (UTC)thanks ^^
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Date: 2009-07-31 10:26 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-08-01 05:30 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-01 09:52 am (UTC)i saw this days ago but i only had time to read it now,
simply love it
RyoDa is cute and sexy and HOT
sankyou~~~
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Date: 2009-08-01 05:31 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-02 03:47 am (UTC)I haven't read RyoDa for a loong time and I'm hooked up with yours! ^^
Somehow I find the fic cute O.O;
Thanks for sharing~♥
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Date: 2009-08-02 07:36 pm (UTC)Thank you for reading:)
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Date: 2009-08-02 08:19 am (UTC)normally these days theres not much ryoda smut ne
thank u so much for this! n now ladies, lesson of the day, practise make perfect(hehehe~)
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Date: 2009-08-02 07:38 pm (UTC)And i am glad to here you are alive and even kicking:)) Can´t wait for your glorious return
And thank you so much for reading and commenting ...
♥
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Date: 2009-08-04 08:50 pm (UTC)I can´believe it
and she is saying it´s lame ..
WHICH IS NOT
I really like this one actually...
first of all- my favourite present tense yaaaaaaaaaay
then....gosh I really liked the idea...
lastly ------ heck, a good smut is good
well done dear sister .... keep it up ...I will request some more of it later XD
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Date: 2009-08-04 09:04 pm (UTC)is not? *relieved* cause you would tell me if it sucked, or i hope so ...
Yeah I tried present tense it is FREAKING hard for me to stay in it though ...
(and i tell you the secret i like the idea too:)
eeeeeeeeeeeehhhhh you will what???? request??? omg!!! dear sister you are killing me:)
Naah thank you for finally looking at it after I pestered you about it unbearably!