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higure ([personal profile] higure) wrote2009-08-08 02:52 am
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Miniseries: Pink (part 1)

Title: Pink
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: PG 13
Summary: A start to a miniseries (I am not calling this a multi-chapter just yet) that spins off the To woo. Ryo is ready for his reward for the bands he gave Ueda earlier, and Ueda is ready for him. Or is he?
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta




This fic was moved to my writing community [livejournal.com profile] pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: I want my desert!


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The story of this spin off: I went to bed, I couldn’t fall asleep because so many things are going on in my life it bugs me at night. I thought of your comments and a plot came to me. I got up, turned the computer on and wrote this. It might have loads of mistakes ´cause I can hardly see by now.

Do you want me to continue this miniseries? Because I like To woo as a standalone and this will turn into something completely different if I let my imagination work.

Comments and constructive criticism are love.

[identity profile] grashiya01.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 01:36 am (UTC)(link)
waaaaaaaa~~ i want a GC too!! :))

nice fic u got here.. love it!! thanks for sharing~~

[identity profile] twentyeytako.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
wooooo...a really different ueda in this series. and i LOVE ryo in here! kyaaaa~ he's soooooo cute. :D thanks again! :P

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 09:34 am (UTC)(link)
he is? He is his true slef in here, right! Our old good perv ... anyway thanks for reading!

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 09:33 am (UTC)(link)
thanks for reading! I mean I know I just thanked you, but ..

[identity profile] naoryuu.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
This was a pretty nice sequel, but if you don't want it to evolve into something undesirable, then just stop here and go for another idea.

The worst - when things from life can't stop intruding into one's sleep..
I can't sleep either.

Despise the fact that you was probably tired like Ueda, you've created a nice story.
And I just love you for putting things like this into one sentence ->
Ryo left him only his plate and silverware to wash, the food in the fridge looks delicious and Ueda is late for work.

It's fancy. xD
Giving your writing a characteristic fresh touch up :3

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 09:36 am (UTC)(link)
Oh you like my randomnes:) LOOOL and you call it fancy, well thank you:)
and hmmmm ... after I went to bed for the second time I had some more idea so I think I will continue, but keep the too woo a bit separte in my mind, it all starts with Pink I have decided!
Anyway thanks for reading again, but you really stayed up too late ...

[identity profile] blaue-lucifer.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 02:23 am (UTC)(link)
LOL HAHAHHAAHAH sooo cute i love the gift certificate thingy XDDD

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 09:38 am (UTC)(link)
thanks, I like the idea as well:)
thanks for commenitng btw ...

[identity profile] murasaki-hime13.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 03:52 am (UTC)(link)
So cute^^
Wonder how Ryo would use his gift cerificate....
Hahahahaha
Thanks for sharing~

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 09:39 am (UTC)(link)
hmmm ... me too I wonder if he would be as straight forward about it as Ueda

[identity profile] snow-meow.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
YES, YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS FIC!! *jumps up and down*

I like Ryo and Ueda's interaction. It's so cute and sweet. Who would have expected Ueda would be the forward kind of person?

I can imagine Pi stomping his feet and looking all cute and pouty because Ryo refuses to tell him what happen on the date. ^__^

I cannot wait to read more.

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 09:40 am (UTC)(link)
hmmm ... I will see how far this will get!
in the mean time thank you for wreading and commenting

[identity profile] raixas.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
can i say their interaction is cute...?? XD
i like the pervy, shy ryo together with the straight-forward ueda~
nice combination eh~ hehehe..

thank you very much for sharing and sleep well author-chan! ^^

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 09:41 am (UTC)(link)
you can say that! thank you for doing so!
and thank you for wishing me a good sleep and for commenting and all
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[identity profile] badbatazz.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
this is so cute, interesting and yes i would like a perfect ending for ryo & ueda....

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 09:43 am (UTC)(link)
let´s not talk about the definition of perfect here, but thank for reading and commenting, we will see where the faith will take them

[identity profile] alaruber.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 06:29 pm (UTC)(link)
ryo here is cute :)))

i hope you continue with it :))) its very cute
thanks for the fic :)

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 09:44 am (UTC)(link)
thanks for reading and commenting and lol at sudenly ryo being the cute one

[identity profile] creamy-amande.livejournal.com 2009-08-08 10:47 pm (UTC)(link)
You know me already...
And you made a follow-up, I love you for that.

Hmm okay, I will say one thing. Do what you want. I live both being alone but...well like I said, you know me.

Lovely!

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 09:45 am (UTC)(link)
lovely back at you!
Sorry I am spazing a bit, LJ was on strike in my household for some time now
But I think I wanna somehow continue this for a little while ...
Thanks dear!

[identity profile] ramadiii.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 09:21 am (UTC)(link)
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME job with this xD

You rock, sister ;)

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-09 09:46 am (UTC)(link)
WUAAA thank you!