higure: (Ryo wants his desert)
higure ([personal profile] higure) wrote2009-08-17 01:20 am
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Miniseries: Pink (part 5)

Title: Pink (part 5/5)
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: PG 13
Summary: What comes a morning after? And a day after? Or after that?

Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta




This fic was moved to my writing community [livejournal.com profile] pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: only few hours until he has to wake up and face Kame



I don´t know if this is any good. I knew they would solve it but I didn´t want them to be too mushy, so … sorry if this is not the end you wanted. I might, MIGHT, write an epilogue to this, just because I was thinking of using one more thing in this fic and didn´t at the end. But I make no promises and in fact, given all the plans for next few weeks, you might see less of me. Whatever that means …

Thanks for reading this miniseries despite the fact it has changed terribly after like part two …

Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.

[identity profile] creamy-amande.livejournal.com 2009-08-16 11:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Stalker is back.
Read it tomorrow, promise.

I don't think it was too mushy though.
Odd as it can be, and somehow weird how everything happens in this chapter, it all seemed natural too.

I think I have a thing for weird happenings. They're so much more!
I really liked how Ueda is trying here and how Kato is needy of the song but only will get a new one, maybe less good though. Ha ha
And Ryo to ask where he stands...that was the mushy part, but there's not so much in this chappie/end.

Ah thank you for finishing this.
Edited 2009-08-18 21:08 (UTC)

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-23 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah maybe a little rush, this one was ... anyway I like them being a little odd, and yeah Ryo just needed some things to be straighten out:)
Anyway thank you for comming back to it and stalking me through this series ...

[identity profile] keena-keena.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
hihihihi

love the ending! finally! hehehe

thanks muchoooooooo!

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:28 am (UTC)(link)
lol glad you like it!
thanks for reading this miniseries and always commenting ...
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[identity profile] badbatazz.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 01:05 am (UTC)(link)
finally they stop playing... thanks. and ya i think you might kill me for saying this but i just love your ryoda fics.

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:30 am (UTC)(link)
why would I kill you for saying you love my fics? I mean really WHY?
I am happy you like them, makes my ego boosts into inappropriate manners ...
thank you for sticking with me through the entire series:)
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[identity profile] badbatazz.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 12:42 pm (UTC)(link)
because i love your fics more than you.. hahahah.....

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 12:48 pm (UTC)(link)
well you don´t know me so that´s ok!

[identity profile] dayenniez.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 01:40 am (UTC)(link)
this is real good dear~

an epilogue is a bonus for me,
coz I really love this miniseries..

"I am a man, Japanese at that, I don´t talk about my emotions… "
this is really differed from others story.. more manly for tatchan..

Thanks for sharing!!

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:31 am (UTC)(link)
thanks for reading and commenting:)
And yes Tat-chan is more ... I guess you can call it manly in here ... still if you could enjoy the series, then it is not a bad thing:)

[identity profile] grashiya01.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
oh wow.. so what's the tittle of the song?? :D haha

love this mini series.. (from "to woo" down to this one.. it's really "believable" :))

thanks for sharing the love~~

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:33 am (UTC)(link)
you are welcome, thanks for reading and always commenting:)

the title of the song?
Hmmm do you want to give it a title? Just in case I´d need it in the maybe coming maybe not epilogue?

[identity profile] resha-ueda.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 05:07 am (UTC)(link)
ahahha this WIN SO HARD. ♥

GREAT JOB! *confetti showaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa*

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:35 am (UTC)(link)
wuaaaaaaaaaaaa at the confetti ... *feels good...

thanks a lot I am blushing at my fic beeing liked:)

[identity profile] raixas.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 07:51 am (UTC)(link)
i like the ending~ ^^
guys shouldn't be mushy, doncha think so? :D

thank you very much for this mini series! ^^

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:36 am (UTC)(link)
I´d like mine to be a little more open though:) and I want to hear what he feels at least sometimes :)

Anyway thank you for reading and commenting on this miniseries:)

[identity profile] alaruber.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:00 am (UTC)(link)
WOW.... it ended... O.O
mmm i didnt expect this ending, a good surprise :)))
i guess shige got something unexpected out from it ne XDDD

thanks much for the fic XD
<3s

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:37 am (UTC)(link)
nah you should know me better by now to expect a somehow darker ending ... and I said I don´t want a full multichap out of this, so ...

Anyway thanks for always reading and commenting:)

[identity profile] geroevnet.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:10 am (UTC)(link)
It's so cute and warm! :)
Thank you so much! :)

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:38 am (UTC)(link)
you are welcome, on the other hand I thank you for reading:)

[identity profile] ramadiii.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 10:00 am (UTC)(link)
Absolutely wonderful!!!!! A great ending to this mini-series ;)

Thank you so much for writing and posting it <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 12:49 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you so much for reading:) Glad you think it was good

[identity profile] blaue-lucifer.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 02:31 pm (UTC)(link)
awwww XD they made up~

poor shige! XDDD he is SO clueless =D

thx for this~

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:08 pm (UTC)(link)
well shige came out of this with few good songs, so ...

Thanks for reading:)

[identity profile] allboutp.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
this is sure fun ^^
shige being the victim here lol, poor him ne~
n i lk this one,it felt lk they r trying to understand each other,n somehow they manage to do it, yay!
thank u so much for this!

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:09 pm (UTC)(link)
yeah in a way they tried this time:)

anyway thank you for liking and sticking with me throughout the series ...

[identity profile] fyad7.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 04:08 pm (UTC)(link)
i really enjoyed this. thanks!!!

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:09 pm (UTC)(link)
that makes me happy ... thank you for reading and letting me know:)

[identity profile] snow-meow.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the ending. I like how things worked out in the end.

I love Ueda's peace offering to poor confused Shige.

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 08:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it, thanks for reading:)

[identity profile] middlight.livejournal.com 2009-11-10 10:42 am (UTC)(link)
Hey,
I read all your Ryoda fanfictions.
So I guess I'm a stalker? :D
Well, you can't blame me for being a die-hard Ryoda fan can you?
I decided to comment because I realised even though I read so many of your fanfictions, I didn't comment. LOL.
Anyways, I must say KUDOS to you!
Your fanfictions are awesome ~
Thank you for writing such awesome Ryoda stuff, for the world needs more Ryoda fanfic writers. XD
xoxo,
Middlight.

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-11-11 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
lol I am really happy you decided to comment, it makes my day to hear about someone working down my ficlist (that reminds me I have to update it)! I don´t blame you I like Ryoda very much.

I should apologize for you dealing with loads of typos and word mess ups lately though, I can usually see them later on but hardly ever fix them ... so sorry for making you suffer

well anyway thank you very much for using your time to read my fics and for telling me about it. I hope I can provide you with few more of them in the future!

[identity profile] middlight.livejournal.com 2009-11-16 01:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh right!
And other thing, mind if I friend you? (:

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-11-16 02:02 pm (UTC)(link)
lol I even friends you back:)

[identity profile] shiroiamy.livejournal.com 2009-12-09 12:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, I found it.^^
That was a good RyoDa fanfic, thanks for sharing it.
Did you write that epilogue? But I think this ending was perfect too. :D I loved their personality here.

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-12-09 01:36 pm (UTC)(link)
♥ thanks for liking this, I am glad you found it ...

And unfortunately no I didn´t write the epilogue .. I still could probably but I guess I might have lost the touch of the fic ... well you never know, but I wouldn´t hold my breath for it