Oneshot: Shirts in common

[higure]

Title: Shirts in common
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: PG
Summary: Ueda likes this shirt but doesn´t know where to buy one.
A/N: There´s too much of a dialog here. Forgive me the ping-pong style. This is written with the T-shirt prompt for ryoda_love challenge and I took the “obvious” approach. I fail at creativity lately, it´s good thing I was modding the challenge and not writing for it after all.




This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: you woke me up just for that?


So how many candies did you find in your boots/sneakers/heels this morning?

Comments

[badbatazz.livejournal.com]

kawaiiiiiii..... they are so adorable... mmmm where can i actually buy the shirt???? lol....

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

no idea, but if you find out get back to me, I actually like the shirt and said so before the challenge even started! The black one for me please!

btw thanks!

[raixas.livejournal.com]

cuutee~
I hope I can buy one of the shirts too~ hehehe

anyway, thank you very much for the fic!^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thank you very much for reading and commenting!

[museelo.livejournal.com]

Haha this was fun ^^

Thank you for this =3

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

<3 you are welcome

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

so since you wanted to write one and couldn't challenge it, you posted one on your own lj after?
nice thinking!

sorry for lateness

Well you know me, if there's more to read, I'll read! Plus it's ending as romance. Oh but either way I would read anyway. Of course I liked it, but you jumped into how many days/Weeks/months after the dinner deal? cauase if the shirts are ripped and greyish, for Ryo's one, how many of time had passed since then so they date finally?

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I think I jumped several years ahead ... how long it actually took them tom get to that stage is up to you, but I am thinking at least 5 years ... well it really is up to your imagination only!
♥

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

hey you know, I just wanted to know since you wrote it, and I needed some clarification and you ask for critique and all so...ah but this wasn't a critique! just me being more interested well you know, me, aka the stalker....XP

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

yeha I didn´t take it as a critique or anything XD I know you were just curious, so no problem, don´t worry. I just tried to explain myself and me being vague in setting the time XD

And even if you did say something critical, I would actually appreciate it, you know. I don´t mind I find it productive XD

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

I know. I just am scared to say useless and unwanted things, I'm such a kuki yomenai somehow...

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

you should speak your opinion freely around me! don´t worry I am not easily offended, besides we are friends, friends are not for flattery, friends are for giving an honest opinion XDDDD

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

Yes but you know my unconfident being!

Ah well....ANYWAY. Fic= nice. Comment=done. ^_^

[space-sick.livejournal.com]

So I fail at not realising they were wearing the same shirt in the two pictures you posted for the community challenge. But this was SO CUTE. Well...the omake was the cutest XD And I like how you wrote both of them.
Great job ♥ ♥ ♥

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

well that is a fail indeed, albeit a funny one XDDDDD

and thanks ♥

[tokeruyouna.livejournal.com]

This was absolutely adorable, especially the Ryo sleeping part. I have no idea why you were going on about the dialogue part; I really enjoyed that aspect of it! This was fun, sentimental, cheesy, and heartwarming all at the same time. ::is impressed::

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I like the Ryo sleeping part, I should have stopped there ... or used it in another fic XD

Lol I won´t force my opinion on you, I am glad you actually found it enjoyable, just to me sometimes it felt like one of those dialogues when nothing happens and you just get annoyed (you know: Hi °Hi ° How are you ° good, how about you ° good ° let´s talk ° ok ° about ° IDK °me neither °....)


But thank you for liking this cheesy, bubbly attempt of a fic! ♥

[kamenajin.livejournal.com]

so cuteeeee~
i love this^^
thank you for this^^
*hugs*

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

you are welcome, thanks to you for reading *hugs back*

[natsuki-suzu.livejournal.com]

aww this is sweet.. esp the omake..
ohh and long omake is <3! xD

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I am glad you enjoyed it! <2

[middlight.livejournal.com]

No words needed to express how awesome all your Ryoda fanfics are.
♥

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

♥ thanks for your nice words ... I am not sure if I agree but I am glad you find my works enjoyable