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higure ([personal profile] higure) wrote2009-05-31 02:14 am
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The other half of the world

Title: The other half of the world
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: G
Summary: Sequel to Half of the world. Who was really behind all those messages?
No beta
Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.


This fic was moved to my writing community [livejournal.com profile] pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: no response, another circle



 
So, how was it? Was it a sequel good enough? Was it believable? I hope so, although poor Ryo:)

Oh and by the way, don´t forget about[livejournal.com profile] ryoda_continuum
 , and don´t be afraid to write, we don´t bite and we want it to succeed!!!
 

[identity profile] kat-tunatic.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 12:36 am (UTC)(link)
omg this is so good and sweet..
i so love this one...
thanks for making a sequel!

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
lol YOU ARE FAST
and you are welcome
♥ thank you for reading, commenting and most of all liking:)

[identity profile] isodia.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 01:54 am (UTC)(link)
“You can have my world, all of it for all I care as long as we share it.” *major keyboard smashing* I love it!!!
Very very nice and I'm just too lost for words to properly comment but ♥ ♥ ♥ ^___^

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
lol Glad you liked it ♥ it makes me happy that people like my cheesy - ness
thanky for reading and commenting:)

[identity profile] creamy-amande.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 02:39 am (UTC)(link)
AH I'm a sucker for romantic fics, even if in RL I don't believe in it.
Thank you for the sequel, I really like it as usual.

Both didn't know the other was in love with each other and Ryo was really hurt, my heart was aching with his, when Tatsuya took it all away, but in the end, they finally explained and there was my happiness going with it and now, I can go to bed happy.

“You can have my world, all of it for all I care as long as we share it.” the best sentence of the whole thing, I mean for this part. Very beautiful.

We will never know what the message was with the flowers when he stepped on them? AH~shame it is, I couldn't figure it out. *whines*

Oh you're pimping your comm'......ha haa!

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 04:28 pm (UTC)(link)
again yey for you liking my cheesy-ness ♥ I thought people will not like it ...

about the message ... hmmm when i wrote the first part i thought it would be stand alone and i was not planning on sequel. So the setting was someone really leaving those messages for Ryo and probably tat-chan and most of them ...
So I actually know what the flower one said - originaly:)
Do you still want to know.
I think I like the first fic and it´s first meaning a lot, I don´t know why my mind went back to cruel reality where people just don´t stalk and leave messages like that ...
Anyway thanks for reading:)

And hell yeah I am pimping HA HA HA

[identity profile] shobe12.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
that was really sweet..
and it made me cry..
the last sentence was just so sweet..

i l0ve the sequel..:)

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 06:21 pm (UTC)(link)
... don´t cry:) Everything went well:)
thank you:)

[identity profile] raixas.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 05:21 am (UTC)(link)
*sobs*
thats swweeet~

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 06:24 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks:)

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 08:55 am (UTC)(link)
I absolutely loved it!

And the last line just made my heart go doki-doki! <33

Thank you very much for this! (^_^)

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 06:25 pm (UTC)(link)
yeah the cheesy always does the trick:)
Thanks for liking it:) ♥

[identity profile] zelpet001.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 09:00 am (UTC)(link)
awwww, this was sweeeeeet,
i liked it very much
thanks for the sequel XD
*gives cupcakes*
v(^.^)v

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 06:26 pm (UTC)(link)
*munches on cupcakes* sweeeeeet XD

thank you for reading, liking and taking the time to comment:)

[identity profile] pleu16.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 09:23 am (UTC)(link)
It's been a while since I've read something like this. And it made me cry. LOL. It was romantic and fluffy and angsty and rawr. XD

Thank you for sharing. :D

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 06:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you enjoyed it ... if you want something sweet next time, i think this is a correct adress as I write that most of the time:)
Thanks for reading and commenting:)

[identity profile] ryunuka.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 12:30 pm (UTC)(link)
*__*
Too adorable, the last line is perfect!
I love this sequel~! ^_^

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 06:44 pm (UTC)(link)
is it? the cheesy and fluff rules:)

glad you like it:)
thanks for reading and commenting:) ♥

[identity profile] resha-hime.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I LOVE THE LAST LINE.

♥♥♥

And I didn't realize my nonsensical ramblings actually inspired you. XO Not that I'm complaining though. :D

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
lol the last line I thought I might have overdone it. Glad you think it was OK XD
And yeah ... you know it´s usually stuff like that that triggers my imagination:) A sentence, a picture ... the momment I read you comment I was opening MS Word to type out the outline:)

So yeah thanks for inspiration and not complaining ...
♥ ♥ ♥

[identity profile] snow-meow.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 04:39 pm (UTC)(link)
This sequel is interesting because it makes you realize that Ryo wanted to see those messages which is why he notices them. The reason why he noticed them was because he was lonely and wanted to be love. Wow, the power of suggestion is really great.

Interesting how Tat-chan's first message was never intended for Ryo but Ryo took notice of it.

I like this sequel.

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-05-31 06:50 pm (UTC)(link)
that´s what I was aiming for:) And yeah our mind is powerful (weapon) XD

I think even if Tat-chan didn´t admit it, he wrote the message in snow thinking of Ryo, he didn´t want him to see it, but he was the person he wanted to play with:)

Thanks for reading and commenting:)

[identity profile] messyboo.livejournal.com 2009-06-01 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
so sweet!!!
i love it very much!!!
eventhough i'm kinda disappointed that all the messages are not from tat-chan, i still love it because of the sweet ending!!!
thanks ne for this sequel~

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-06-01 10:30 am (UTC)(link)
I am disapointed about that too:) I really have no idea why I butchered the first part ... i think I will ignore this sequel and I will keep thinking of the first one as stand alone ... Why did I have to think of this? *smacks herself*
Anyway glad you still liked it:)
Thanks for reading:)

[identity profile] dayenniez.livejournal.com 2009-06-01 09:46 am (UTC)(link)
this is beautiful..
*sobs*
really beautiful..

thanks for this sequel.

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-06-01 10:31 am (UTC)(link)
you are welcome:)
Thanks for reading:)

[identity profile] alaruber.livejournal.com 2009-06-01 05:32 pm (UTC)(link)
this is too sweeett...
the last part is just awesome :)

thanks for the fic :)

[identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com 2009-06-01 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
glad you like my cheesy:)
thanks for reading and commenting:)