The other half of the world
May. 31st, 2009 02:14 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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Title: The other half of the world
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: G
Summary: Sequel to Half of the world. Who was really behind all those messages?
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Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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So, how was it? Was it a sequel good enough? Was it believable? I hope so, although poor Ryo:)
Oh and by the way, don´t forget aboutryoda_continuum
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: G
Summary: Sequel to Half of the world. Who was really behind all those messages?
No beta
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
This fic was moved to my writing community
pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: no response, another circle
So, how was it? Was it a sequel good enough? Was it believable? I hope so, although poor Ryo:)
Oh and by the way, don´t forget about
ryoda_continuum , and don´t be afraid to write, we don´t bite and we want it to succeed!!!
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Date: 2009-05-31 12:36 am (UTC)i so love this one...
thanks for making a sequel!
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Date: 2009-05-31 12:37 am (UTC)and you are welcome
♥ thank you for reading, commenting and most of all liking:)
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Date: 2009-05-31 01:54 am (UTC)Very very nice and I'm just too lost for words to properly comment but ♥ ♥ ♥ ^___^
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Date: 2009-05-31 04:17 pm (UTC)thanky for reading and commenting:)
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Date: 2009-05-31 02:39 am (UTC)Thank you for the sequel, I really like it as usual.
Both didn't know the other was in love with each other and Ryo was really hurt, my heart was aching with his, when Tatsuya took it all away, but in the end, they finally explained and there was my happiness going with it and now, I can go to bed happy.
“You can have my world, all of it for all I care as long as we share it.” the best sentence of the whole thing, I mean for this part. Very beautiful.
We will never know what the message was with the flowers when he stepped on them? AH~shame it is, I couldn't figure it out. *whines*
Oh you're pimping your comm'......ha haa!
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Date: 2009-05-31 04:28 pm (UTC)about the message ... hmmm when i wrote the first part i thought it would be stand alone and i was not planning on sequel. So the setting was someone really leaving those messages for Ryo and probably tat-chan and most of them ...
So I actually know what the flower one said - originaly:)
Do you still want to know.
I think I like the first fic and it´s first meaning a lot, I don´t know why my mind went back to cruel reality where people just don´t stalk and leave messages like that ...
Anyway thanks for reading:)
And hell yeah I am pimping HA HA HA
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Date: 2009-05-31 02:48 am (UTC)and it made me cry..
the last sentence was just so sweet..
i l0ve the sequel..:)
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Date: 2009-05-31 06:21 pm (UTC)thank you:)
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Date: 2009-05-31 05:21 am (UTC)thats swweeet~
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Date: 2009-05-31 06:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-31 08:55 am (UTC)And the last line just made my heart go doki-doki! <33
Thank you very much for this! (^_^)
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Date: 2009-05-31 06:25 pm (UTC)Thanks for liking it:) ♥
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Date: 2009-05-31 09:00 am (UTC)i liked it very much
thanks for the sequel XD
*gives cupcakes*
v(^.^)v
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Date: 2009-05-31 06:26 pm (UTC)thank you for reading, liking and taking the time to comment:)
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Date: 2009-05-31 09:23 am (UTC)Thank you for sharing. :D
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Date: 2009-05-31 06:27 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading and commenting:)
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Date: 2009-05-31 12:30 pm (UTC)Too adorable, the last line is perfect!
I love this sequel~! ^_^
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Date: 2009-05-31 06:44 pm (UTC)glad you like it:)
thanks for reading and commenting:) ♥
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Date: 2009-05-31 03:09 pm (UTC)♥♥♥
And I didn't realize my nonsensical ramblings actually inspired you. XO Not that I'm complaining though. :D
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Date: 2009-05-31 06:47 pm (UTC)And yeah ... you know it´s usually stuff like that that triggers my imagination:) A sentence, a picture ... the momment I read you comment I was opening MS Word to type out the outline:)
So yeah thanks for inspiration and not complaining ...
♥ ♥ ♥
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Date: 2009-05-31 04:39 pm (UTC)Interesting how Tat-chan's first message was never intended for Ryo but Ryo took notice of it.
I like this sequel.
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Date: 2009-05-31 06:50 pm (UTC)I think even if Tat-chan didn´t admit it, he wrote the message in snow thinking of Ryo, he didn´t want him to see it, but he was the person he wanted to play with:)
Thanks for reading and commenting:)
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Date: 2009-06-01 03:28 am (UTC)i love it very much!!!
eventhough i'm kinda disappointed that all the messages are not from tat-chan, i still love it because of the sweet ending!!!
thanks ne for this sequel~
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Date: 2009-06-01 10:30 am (UTC)Anyway glad you still liked it:)
Thanks for reading:)
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Date: 2009-06-01 09:46 am (UTC)*sobs*
really beautiful..
thanks for this sequel.
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Date: 2009-06-01 10:31 am (UTC)Thanks for reading:)
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Date: 2009-06-01 05:32 pm (UTC)the last part is just awesome :)
thanks for the fic :)
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Date: 2009-06-01 09:01 pm (UTC)thanks for reading and commenting:)