Drabble: No expectations

[higure]

Title: No expectations
Pairing: Ryoda (after a very long time)
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Written for my je_prompts table, prompt no. 24: Away and I couldn´t be more obvious using it, since this is about Ueda wanting to get away. He is also quite OOC.

Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.



This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: It´s just one of those weird associations




I have come back to my prompt table after a long time trying to get over this little block I have. I still feel very dubious about this attempt but chivakaza says it is a pass so I am posting it.

Also can any of you reck me to a good Massu centric fic? Or RyoPi for that matter? I kind of want to read some for references. Anyone?

Comments

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

SO first since....yeah won't go there since we talked in msn already.

I've liked it so much because one : it's angsty at the beginning but not between them, just on their side and Ueda and Ryo have a sorta pact in the end, or even in the beginning since they accept each other without saying anything. Yeah, no expectations.

ANd the it happens again, but it's Ryo who shows up and then he's probably a bit drunk or he just has feelings already, but don't expect Ueda to actually thinks more of it and they can have more in the night, and that can lead to so much more but hey! Ijust realized sometimes the sequels kill original good stories, so I'll leave it now, and say it was a good one. As usual with you.

The Stalker...

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

don´t worry I am not writing a sequel for this one:)
thanks my faithfull stalker

[grashiya01.livejournal.com]

it's very "believable"~~
i can't think of a better word to describe it..

and yeah, no expectations at all.. it's cool that way, although kinda sad..

yay!! thanks for sharing the love~~~

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I have no idea how long no expectations stays cool or truth even, humans are traitors in that way ...
Thanks for liking:)

[dayenniez.livejournal.com]

I love this kind of story,
They just being themselves,
There's no fluffy thing in there *my thought*
and it's just something that goes naturally in the real world.. haha~ I hope you get what i'm saying..

Thanks for sharing, I LOVE this! XD

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

yeah I wonder where ma fluff has gone to ... still I am glad you enjoyed it

[fyad7.livejournal.com]

i liked this story a lot. thanks for sharing!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading and liking:)

[lunatic-wing.livejournal.com]

wow! wow! wow! what's happend in tacchan Away time? i really want to know.

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

hmmm .. not telling I guess, work your imagination:)
thanks for reading btw

[meikoxlove.livejournal.com]

Nice one! X3 I love the atmosphere of the story, the way Ryo-chan and Ueda treat each other, how they just let everything happen without questioning it.

P.S. There are a few mistakes but I'm sure you'd catch them if you read it again. ^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Actualy would you mind pointing them out, pls. I have read this like milion times, I practicaly know this fic by heart and can´t see any more mistakes in it because in my mind it is all right ... so if you still see them, please do me a favor and say where they are

I am glad though you enjoyed it even with gramatic imperfections

[meikoxlove.livejournal.com]

Okay, then. ^^

He turns on his heels, gets two beers out of his fridge and brings pillow, some blankets, sweatpants and a T-shirt with him. He throws it at Ueda.
[...] and brings a pillow, [...]. He throws them at Ueda.

Bathroom is second door on the left; there is clean towel ready for you.
Bathroom is the second door on the left; there is a clean towel ready for you.

He mumbles something and that moment Ryo´s voice chases last pieces of his dreams away.
[...] and at that moment Ryo's voice chases the last pieces [...].

We are still no best friends, but if you are choosing place then I am paying tonight.
We are still not best friends, but if you are choosing the/a place [...].

Two weeks later Ryo shows up on Ueda´s door steps with bottle of whiskey and hard look on.
[...] with a bottle of whiskey and a hard look on.

That's it, I think. Basically you just forgot a few words. ;) (I'd like good stories to be with as few mistakes as possible so I tell the author if there are any so they can correct them. ♥)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

basically I suck at articles (obviously since my language doesn´t have them) ... thanks for pointing things out, will fix it when I feel like hitting edit button!

[c-espoir.livejournal.com]

No expectation, ne.....
Would be nice to have that kind of thing....
(Sorry, I'm talking about myself....LOL)
It's beautiful^^
Enjoyed reading it very much~
Thanks for sharing...

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading, liking, commenting ... about wanting no expectations for yourself, I am not sure if it can work for a long time:)

[einji.livejournal.com]

*_______* *makes grabbing motions towards scene* i know, im weird :I
*stares at ryoda kissing* *______*
<33333

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

:) glad you liked this thanks