Drabble: No expectations

[higure]

Title: No expectations
Pairing: Ryoda (after a very long time)
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Written for my je_prompts table, prompt no. 24: Away and I couldn´t be more obvious using it, since this is about Ueda wanting to get away. He is also quite OOC.

Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.



This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: It´s just one of those weird associations




I have come back to my prompt table after a long time trying to get over this little block I have. I still feel very dubious about this attempt but chivakaza says it is a pass so I am posting it.

Also can any of you reck me to a good Massu centric fic? Or RyoPi for that matter? I kind of want to read some for references. Anyone?

Comments

[meikoxlove.livejournal.com]

Nice one! X3 I love the atmosphere of the story, the way Ryo-chan and Ueda treat each other, how they just let everything happen without questioning it.

P.S. There are a few mistakes but I'm sure you'd catch them if you read it again. ^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Actualy would you mind pointing them out, pls. I have read this like milion times, I practicaly know this fic by heart and can´t see any more mistakes in it because in my mind it is all right ... so if you still see them, please do me a favor and say where they are

I am glad though you enjoyed it even with gramatic imperfections

[meikoxlove.livejournal.com]

Okay, then. ^^

He turns on his heels, gets two beers out of his fridge and brings pillow, some blankets, sweatpants and a T-shirt with him. He throws it at Ueda.
[...] and brings a pillow, [...]. He throws them at Ueda.

Bathroom is second door on the left; there is clean towel ready for you.
Bathroom is the second door on the left; there is a clean towel ready for you.

He mumbles something and that moment Ryo´s voice chases last pieces of his dreams away.
[...] and at that moment Ryo's voice chases the last pieces [...].

We are still no best friends, but if you are choosing place then I am paying tonight.
We are still not best friends, but if you are choosing the/a place [...].

Two weeks later Ryo shows up on Ueda´s door steps with bottle of whiskey and hard look on.
[...] with a bottle of whiskey and a hard look on.

That's it, I think. Basically you just forgot a few words. ;) (I'd like good stories to be with as few mistakes as possible so I tell the author if there are any so they can correct them. ♥)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

basically I suck at articles (obviously since my language doesn´t have them) ... thanks for pointing things out, will fix it when I feel like hitting edit button!