Time to take an action
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Title: Time to take an action
Pairing: Ryoda (again very Tatsuya centric)
Rating: G , save whatever you call it ... romance and fluff and cheesy
Summary: Sequel to No one to come home to, but I don´t think it is necessary to read it really if you don´t want to, you will be fine. In this one, Ueda wonders what is really going on and why is Ryo suddenly no where to find.
Disclaimer: Once again, created mostly during boring lectures, this time Social Security law, so they are not mine and the plot might not be as well ...
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The first Tuesday lecture was boring this week as well, and since really the plot was swirling around me for some time now, it is done sooner than I expected.
I had two ending scenes in mind however. The result was the same, just the setting was different and actualy the "awkward" line was stolen from the second ending ... I might write it as a drable in a future, at least I will be forced to make it short and snapy:)
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pillow_verse , to read follow the LINK: he was going to ask him, or maybe just jump him, next time he sees him...
Pairing: Ryoda (again very Tatsuya centric)
Rating: G , save whatever you call it ... romance and fluff and cheesy
Summary: Sequel to No one to come home to, but I don´t think it is necessary to read it really if you don´t want to, you will be fine. In this one, Ueda wonders what is really going on and why is Ryo suddenly no where to find.
Disclaimer: Once again, created mostly during boring lectures, this time Social Security law, so they are not mine and the plot might not be as well ...
No beta
The first Tuesday lecture was boring this week as well, and since really the plot was swirling around me for some time now, it is done sooner than I expected.
I had two ending scenes in mind however. The result was the same, just the setting was different and actualy the "awkward" line was stolen from the second ending ... I might write it as a drable in a future, at least I will be forced to make it short and snapy:)
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pillow_verse , to read follow the LINK: he was going to ask him, or maybe just jump him, next time he sees him... At first I had this let´s get together really fast idea, but ... I believe that it takes some time for two people to start a relationship even if they feel the same way about each other and so, I reprimended myself and tried to describe that evolution, Frankly I think I failed and the only thing I managed to do is to make it freaky long again.
Also I really suck at writing scenes when they get a bit intimate, so sorry for that and for the ending it so chessy with a kiss, again.
Oh Yeah, and I ignored Ryo´s driving incident, since he drove in the first one ... And I am sorry, I will give you peace of my mind, so just skip if you don´t want it. If police didn´t feel it is necessary to suspend his driving license, then he should continue driving, cause that is how you gain skills and you are more likely to prevent such things for happening again. I mean, driving really is something you get better at in time ... the way it was delat with is just really silly.
End of rant now ...
So I hope you are all save and good ...
And comments are love ... feel free to throw few tomatos at me for being completely cliché, cheesy and long again...
Also I really suck at writing scenes when they get a bit intimate, so sorry for that and for the ending it so chessy with a kiss, again.
Oh Yeah, and I ignored Ryo´s driving incident, since he drove in the first one ... And I am sorry, I will give you peace of my mind, so just skip if you don´t want it. If police didn´t feel it is necessary to suspend his driving license, then he should continue driving, cause that is how you gain skills and you are more likely to prevent such things for happening again. I mean, driving really is something you get better at in time ... the way it was delat with is just really silly.
End of rant now ...
So I hope you are all save and good ...
And comments are love ... feel free to throw few tomatos at me for being completely cliché, cheesy and long again...
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Date: 2009-03-04 08:43 pm (UTC)I'll come again and read it later but wanted to be first! I'm so happy you did it!
de rien, de rien ...
Date: 2009-03-04 09:01 pm (UTC)Re: de rien, de rien ...
Date: 2009-03-06 02:51 am (UTC)Second: Ryo's incident, well to my opinion, he was just too tired and maybe missed some seconds where he must have closed his eyes and BUMP! But we won't ever know for sure what happened. I think restricting himself from driving was a good decision, cause HE made the decision, so Johnny won't make an unfair decision himself, if you get my point...
Third: the fic. Well I'm happy and not disappointed as you thought I would be. It's good it's like a movie but still realistic. "Let's get together real fast" is just okay for one-shot I think and smut fic, ain't I right? And how much I LOL about Ueda thinking he might have pulled Ryo's arm too much! I always think the same! Pretty stupid move indeed.
Just one thing though: not much important but Ryo doesn't eat sweets, nor cakes. I don't think it would change the story much, just a note..But Ueda could eat his share! Muwahh
Re: de rien, de rien ...
Date: 2009-03-06 01:00 pm (UTC)Ryo and sweets: Thank for a trivia. I frankly watch more of their concerts and shows than read about them, so I sure am behind on stuff like this:) I will make a mental note of it, but you know I might make him eat cakes in the future, liberatly or not, these are works of fiction after all:) I just make them a little bit how I imagine them every time, ne:)
Thanks for reading, and I am glad you were not dissapointed:) And I am so excited that the pulling of a shoulder was such a succes:) LOL
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Date: 2009-03-04 09:51 pm (UTC)this was nice i'm glad they eventually got together.
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Date: 2009-03-04 10:40 pm (UTC)The enviromental law comes tomorrow, I wonder what will happen ... (you can really tell I just LOVE public law:)
Anyways, thank you for reading:)
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Date: 2009-03-05 10:43 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-05 11:08 pm (UTC)But today I actually started on a little project of mine ... so I haven´t writen anything solid ... I wonder if I can actually do it, but I will try. It won´t be Ryoda though and I can not tell you more, cause it might spoil the suprise:)
Ne anyway, I am glad you are enjoying my fics ... it makes me happy too ...
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Date: 2009-03-05 07:09 am (UTC)It's good.
Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2009-03-05 12:38 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-05 07:44 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-05 12:38 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-05 12:45 pm (UTC)sequel! thank you very much for this!
i love cheesy fics~ :DD
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Date: 2009-03-05 03:04 pm (UTC)loooong and clicheee and sappy and ...lol
*throws rotten potatoes*
was good I liked it Xd and the ending was really like from some movie haha ...never mind ... but I am jealous of your overproductiveness XD
keep it up XD
*throws the towel*
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Date: 2009-03-05 03:10 pm (UTC)Yeah... sorry about the ending, I think I wrote it that way only to voice mine (in the fic Ueda´s) thoughts on dislocating shoulders in those scenes ... gonna kill me for it?
You know, you have to have a bit fun writing these and I was grinning madly there ... almost forgot I am in the middle of romantic scene ...btw I really do suck at those, don´t you think?
And yeah, I wanted to ask the expert in our familly, did you find a lot of mistakes?
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Date: 2009-03-05 03:17 pm (UTC)it was irony from my side ..you know I liked it ..and I laughed a few times too ...to that scene with the dislocated arm as well...XD
nad I found just one mistake ... or I think so ....so its good ....mine are a lot worse than yours ...XD so dont worry XD