He knew - chapter 3
Apr. 20th, 2009 12:46 amTitle: He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 3
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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So this is the longest chapter so far. And it is out even faster than I expected, even though I had actually done loads of school work today, watched a movie and had several visit:) I told you I am just super fast:)
I must say, this fic is changing so much as I write it down. Also you guys seem to see it in a different perspective, than I write it in. It´s interesting and I think in a way your feedbacks are influencing me.
Next chapter should have a very cool Tat-chan in it. Sorry to tease you so, but I like what I have planned, let´s hope it will not sound pathetic on the paper (your screen). Now, enough of my blabbing, I will go and hide now …
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 3
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta
This fic was moved to my writing community
So this is the longest chapter so far. And it is out even faster than I expected, even though I had actually done loads of school work today, watched a movie and had several visit:) I told you I am just super fast:)
I must say, this fic is changing so much as I write it down. Also you guys seem to see it in a different perspective, than I write it in. It´s interesting and I think in a way your feedbacks are influencing me.
Next chapter should have a very cool Tat-chan in it. Sorry to tease you so, but I like what I have planned, let´s hope it will not sound pathetic on the paper (your screen). Now, enough of my blabbing, I will go and hide now …
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Date: 2009-04-19 11:55 pm (UTC)I love reading updates, so thanks a lot for writing a new chapter! ^^
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Date: 2009-04-20 02:08 pm (UTC)Thanks...!!!
Date: 2009-04-20 12:16 am (UTC)Re: Thanks...!!!
Date: 2009-04-20 02:09 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-20 01:20 am (UTC)Yes, Ueda !! About time you stood up to that creep.
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Date: 2009-04-20 02:10 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading:)
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Date: 2009-04-20 01:29 am (UTC)i don't know whether to side for ryoda or maruda this time.
anyway, thanks for the fast updates and looking forward to the cool tat-chan~
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Date: 2009-04-20 02:11 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-20 04:27 am (UTC)And Maru being kind.. o__O
MaruDa vs. RyoDa!! *boxing bell rings* XDDDD
continue please its getting better~~ :]
*glomps you*
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Date: 2009-04-20 02:25 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-04-20 05:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-21 03:05 am (UTC)in the next?? I think Jin's usually the one to break the heavy moods.. so maybe if you have a scene there where maru and Ueda get all emo.. Jin suddenly comes and glomps Ueda. XDD ore something to that effect :)
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Date: 2009-04-21 08:21 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-21 12:16 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-20 05:00 am (UTC)Thanks for sharing...
Looking forward for next chapter ;)
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Date: 2009-04-20 02:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-20 05:55 am (UTC)this is interesting...
i m looking forward to seeing where this might end...
:D
thanks for the update :D
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Date: 2009-04-20 02:14 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading XD
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Date: 2009-04-20 02:00 pm (UTC)More ne? ♥ ^_^
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Date: 2009-04-20 02:15 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading, more´s to come ...
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Date: 2009-04-21 07:34 am (UTC)Well, this chapters is... I don't know what word(s) might describe this better. The more interactions explained, the more interesting this becomes. Maru and Ueda, Ueda and Ryo. It's definitely worth reading
a sweet word to bribe you updating this faster? :pThanks for the update :))
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Date: 2009-04-21 08:24 am (UTC)I will update pretty soon, hopefully, no wories about that:) Thank you for reading and beeing patient with me:)
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Date: 2009-04-29 07:49 pm (UTC)there is no man on this planet who could actually realize someone loving them ...like this ..XD lol ..
but its good ... and ryo is just stupid ..well, he seems more real hahah XD ok 4th one! I am coming !
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Date: 2009-04-29 08:00 pm (UTC)lol too much anyways ...
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Date: 2009-05-10 04:01 am (UTC)I've been out of it lately - for weeks. I had much asignmebts and projects and exams, it's been killing me like crazy. to be honest I only read a few one shots, just so then I could clean out my inbox a little bit since my inbox goes up to 90 messages a day x___X
also when I had time to read , I had many parties I had to attended. ughhhh I hate being so busy and not giving so much RyoDa love.
also when I have time to read, I don't feel like it. like I'm too lazy *bricked* >___< gomen ne?? *sighs*
please forgive me for being a "bad" reader and not following this series with every update *slaps self* but know that I'm supporting you all the way, b/c I enjoy reading your fics!
as fir this chapter : I love it very much!!! omg Tat-chan and Maru couldn't be any more lovey dovey ♥
I'm mad at ryo though, for some reason I want Maru and Tat-chan to not seperate ..
thanks!!! and sorry for the LONG comment!
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Date: 2009-05-10 09:20 am (UTC)Besides, it seems you had fine in RL so LJ can wait:) I haven´t been to a party for a loooong time, all of my friends are graduating in about a week, so they do nothing but study for finals:) But I can´t wait for the party after they are done with their college:)
Also I am sooo happy you enjoy my fics:) And yeah this chapter is sweet, but wait till you see the next one!
Anyway have fun reading, and stop hiding behind the tree XD I hope all those assignemnets went well:)
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Date: 2009-05-10 04:02 pm (UTC)oh really?? they're graduating.. hmms that sounds like fun lol. those parties are oh so fun ^^
but the parties I've been to were all family. I had I buy tons of gifts for my relatives, even this month cuz it's the month with the most birthdays x__x
haha, no problem : ) I really love your writing ^^ I always can't wait for more :D
LOL aight *walks away from the tree*