Somewhere in that last scene in the elevator I have hoped that Ueda would take Ryo-chan instead of Nakamaru after all, but... argh! >o<
Nakamaru sounds so serious and adult-like in your fanfiction, it's very unusual. And like always, he's too nice, even if he does it for Ueda's and for his own sake, too.
Since you know about your typos I won't point them out. XD I can't wait for the next chapter. ^__^
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Date: 2009-05-02 03:17 pm (UTC)Nakamaru sounds so serious and adult-like in your fanfiction, it's very unusual. And like always, he's too nice, even if he does it for Ueda's and for his own sake, too.
Since you know about your typos I won't point them out. XD
I can't wait for the next chapter. ^__^