He knew - chapter 7

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 7
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: the cliché in elevator doesn´t stirr clear of our story


I was stucked with this. Ok, the update is still out in two days, so not really. But I had to reread the whole fic. It has over 14 000 words without this chapter. I felt I was gonna forget something important if I do not read through it. I found so many typos and mistakes. Sorry about them.

I obviously love elevators and rooftops lately. Awh, the cliché. I still feel like I failed. In my planner there were only two things written. Ryoda moment, Ryo needs a ride. I know I had a sweet Ryoda moment in mind at first and look what it turned into. I hope I am not chasing you away the same way Ryo tried in this on.

Comments

[meikoxlove.livejournal.com]

Somewhere in that last scene in the elevator I have hoped that Ueda would take Ryo-chan instead of Nakamaru after all, but... argh! >o<

Nakamaru sounds so serious and adult-like in your fanfiction, it's very unusual. And like always, he's too nice, even if he does it for Ueda's and for his own sake, too.

Since you know about your typos I won't point them out. XD
I can't wait for the next chapter. ^__^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Hmmm ... what should I say, it was tempting in that elevator ... Nakamru is like that because for some reason I have that image of him: adult like, serious and gentle ... to some extend ...
Thanks for readin:) Even with the gramatical mistakes ...