He knew - chapter 7

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 7
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta


This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: the cliché in elevator doesn´t stirr clear of our story


I was stucked with this. Ok, the update is still out in two days, so not really. But I had to reread the whole fic. It has over 14 000 words without this chapter. I felt I was gonna forget something important if I do not read through it. I found so many typos and mistakes. Sorry about them.

I obviously love elevators and rooftops lately. Awh, the cliché. I still feel like I failed. In my planner there were only two things written. Ryoda moment, Ryo needs a ride. I know I had a sweet Ryoda moment in mind at first and look what it turned into. I hope I am not chasing you away the same way Ryo tried in this on.

Comments

[kat-tunatic.livejournal.com]

omg! thanks for updating..

both ryo and ueda are hurting ne!..
i hope this will get better..

will be waiting for more!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading, it is getting pretty dramatic, I hope I will get in mood for something fluffy soon:)

[dayenniez.livejournal.com]

I can feel my heart's breaking along with them..
*sobs*
*sobs*

this is good, but I hope Ryo will get better and fight for that love..

Thanks for this, and waiting for next!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading, hope the wait won´t be too long ...

[alaruber.livejournal.com]

AHHHH~~!!!
SWEETNESS!!~!!!
omg... i really wonder what is going to happen next... X-x

thanks much for the update :D its so fast :)))))

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

lol i am back to my fast pace I know:) thanks for reading ...

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

hh lol ...I liked this one ..XD it was dramatic XD hh
but I was afraid that ueda would do something ....harsh XD

also ....I found some mistakes ...but then you wrote you are aware of them ...so next time just send it to me and I will check it, you can use me for beta at least for typos and such ...

and wow ...if you need only 2 days for struggling with the stucked muse ... I admire you hh

well, I am going back to my phonetics& phonology

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

It wasn´t a block in the right sense of it, or maybe it was because it turned out so diferently ...
Aren´t you just glad the doors opened? But you did want more drama ...
I can use you for a beta, but can you stand my pace (especially when I write at 2 am and want to finish before I go to sleep ?) XD I will "use "you we you are not bussy, out of the mood and if it is right time of the day ...
How´s kanji doing *wink* and thanks with the help deciphering:)

[meikoxlove.livejournal.com]

Somewhere in that last scene in the elevator I have hoped that Ueda would take Ryo-chan instead of Nakamaru after all, but... argh! >o<

Nakamaru sounds so serious and adult-like in your fanfiction, it's very unusual. And like always, he's too nice, even if he does it for Ueda's and for his own sake, too.

Since you know about your typos I won't point them out. XD
I can't wait for the next chapter. ^__^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Hmmm ... what should I say, it was tempting in that elevator ... Nakamru is like that because for some reason I have that image of him: adult like, serious and gentle ... to some extend ...
Thanks for readin:) Even with the gramatical mistakes ...

[pleu16.livejournal.com]

And I just had to read that part when they meet twice. It was just so beautiful.

Yay update. :)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

&heart; really? then thank you twice for reading:)

[miruiki.livejournal.com]

I LOVE HOW YOU INSERTED MASSU HERE. I SWEAR I DO.
JUST WHEN I SAW "MASUDA" minna ga iru sekai wo hitotsu ni ai wo motto give and take shimashou played!! XDD coincidence much?--even though ryo and ueda want to beat massu up-- XDDDD WAHAHAHHAHA <3

“I love you” he heard him saying. “I beg you, leave me alone so I won´t hurt you again. I know you want me to give up on you.” -- :c CRUSHED MY VOLATILE HEART. :c

OMG :(
NUUUUU. RYO. YES. U MUST FIGHT. FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!! >O

[miruiki.livejournal.com]

DDD: my whole comment couldnt be posted in one shot >.< so i'll continue here. XD

UEDA gdfbgdslglgdfgf HE'S BEING INDENIAL. WAI!? O:

great update dear :) as said, there were some errors, typos and some gramar cases, but all in all it's LOVE.

please do continue! :)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

ehhh my grammar sucks lately ... sorry about that ... but other than that your comment was ♥ thanks a lot it cheared me up ... and cracked me up too, the Massu part ... i think he was forgoten by the end of the night though ...
again thanks a lot for reading ♥

[miruiki.livejournal.com]

it's ok if Massu was forgotten. XD ahahaha~ I remember in my 1st multi-chap i really wanted massu to just pop outta no where hahah~
I'll be waiting for more hon ;)

[inkdah.livejournal.com]

this is good...heartbreaking, but good.

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading ... sorry about the heartbreak

[resha-hime.livejournal.com]

Gosh, this wasn't any better than the previous chapter. Are you trying to ruin my heart? T___T

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I swear I wanted this to be fluffy ... I planed a sweet chapter, I haven´t realized I am in such an angsty mood until I wrote it. And sooo sorry but given the story line next one up will not be any better. What is happening here? I like fluffy and cheesy!!!
Sorry about that, but with your last comment and with this one, i really did realize I am a bit heartbreaking in a moment.
♥ Thank you for reading even though it´s killing you XO

[shobe12.livejournal.com]

ry0 should definitely fight back.
he should get his tat-chan back..
parts of it was heartbreaking..:)

cant wait for the next chapter..:)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Well as this is a love triangle one heart (at least) will be broken ... soory just a little of musing overcoming me here.
Thanks for reading and waiting:)

[yamapi-konkon.livejournal.com]

YEAY FOR A FORGETFUL MASSU!!! \:D/ *gives Massu some Gyoza*


Aww.. I feel sorry for both of them. :(


Thanks for sharing. :]

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Yeay I hope he enjoied the gyoza while he could :)
thanks for reading:)

[isodia.livejournal.com]

Hear my heart break... T_____T
Gawd, this is just so sad and heartbreaking... but I still love you for it! ^_^;; *sighs*
Hope something better would come soon for RyoDa. But well Maru~ :( I'm so torn...

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I am too ... I guess that´s why the last two chapters are so heartbreaking, I can make them solve this easily:)
Thanks for reading :)

[jindaluver.livejournal.com]

*sigh*
my heart is crashing along with ryoda.
hope they'll be fine again.
ryo should fight his feeling or atleast ueda should stop being in denial.
love this chapter.
will be waiting for next ^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

... but you know I do understand Ueda a lot, his need to clench to Maru ... Ok I will stop now:)
thanks for reading:)

[brown-cinnamon.livejournal.com]

♥

Ah, I wish I can comment more, but I've been bad with words lately ><

Thanks for the update :))

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

♥ thanks for reading and commenting XD I hope you get better with words soon for sake of your awsome fanficions:)

[floppy-snoopi.livejournal.com]

aaaaaaaaaaaaargh ryoooooooooo T_T *sobs with him* don't be like that!! you have to fight for your hime >_< take him back for god sake!! >_<

and that hime, you stupid hime >_< *kicks him* why does he choose the security? >_< although he knows that whith ryo he'll be more happy >_<

huuuuuuuu please, update soon ne? i wanna know what will they do next >_<

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

... will try to be fast until than thanks for reading :)

[kazuya-love.livejournal.com]

finally i got a chance to read this one before going to sleep...i've been waiting for this for so long... wah my heart is in pain... huhuhu! why is it they have to deny that they still love each other.. what will happen next? how about maruda? will maru give up tat-chan or he will fight for his love? wah poor ryo!

*off to bed, oyasumi -_-'zzzzzzzzz*

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

good night to you too:) and thanks for reading ... what will happen next ... I can´t tell can I? I will update soon:)

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

Hmmm ME.LATE.SORRY.
I'll run off to read next chapter then. But first-->
What can I say? I like this tory more and more. Of course you have the rooftop cliché but who cares? I mean, I said this to another already and I'll say it again here. A story made of cliche is bad. A story with a few cliche only, is good. You get it?

So, MaruDa stay strong here, and Ryo can only watch for now. I'm actually glad ueda fought the urge to kiss Ryo or do something else intimate at the end. Cause MaruDa has to fight too right?
I can't believe you made Masu a partner in crime! Lol...someone must have bribed him with gyoza...^_^

Okay I'll go read chapter 8

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

late? you call this late? again no reason to be sorry:)
Massu - gyoza? As you probably can see I like the man, so I had to squish him in:)
Thanks for liking this and forgiving the cliché:)

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

Well Masu il all about gyoza so............he just loves them so much he talks about gyoza all the time! It's like Masu=gyoza=buta! He puts lots of buta emoji in his nikki by the way....

[oxokawaiiox.livejournal.com]

aweh geez.........i really loved this chapter.......
but the thing is, that the ending was so..sad??
i started crying. I have no idea why, but....*wipes tears* wahhhhhh TT_____TT so touching!

also i LOVE massu!!! awehhh! whatta cutiee, haha and he let tat-chan drive ryo.
but oh no what is tat-chan going to do?!
thanks~~ on to next chapter ^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading and liking it, sorry to make you cry ... This one was pretty intense though ... And I am sorry but there probably is some more angsting ahead:)