He knew - chapter 7

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 7
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: the cliché in elevator doesn´t stirr clear of our story


I was stucked with this. Ok, the update is still out in two days, so not really. But I had to reread the whole fic. It has over 14 000 words without this chapter. I felt I was gonna forget something important if I do not read through it. I found so many typos and mistakes. Sorry about them.

I obviously love elevators and rooftops lately. Awh, the cliché. I still feel like I failed. In my planner there were only two things written. Ryoda moment, Ryo needs a ride. I know I had a sweet Ryoda moment in mind at first and look what it turned into. I hope I am not chasing you away the same way Ryo tried in this on.

Comments

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

Hmmm ME.LATE.SORRY.
I'll run off to read next chapter then. But first-->
What can I say? I like this tory more and more. Of course you have the rooftop cliché but who cares? I mean, I said this to another already and I'll say it again here. A story made of cliche is bad. A story with a few cliche only, is good. You get it?

So, MaruDa stay strong here, and Ryo can only watch for now. I'm actually glad ueda fought the urge to kiss Ryo or do something else intimate at the end. Cause MaruDa has to fight too right?
I can't believe you made Masu a partner in crime! Lol...someone must have bribed him with gyoza...^_^

Okay I'll go read chapter 8

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

late? you call this late? again no reason to be sorry:)
Massu - gyoza? As you probably can see I like the man, so I had to squish him in:)
Thanks for liking this and forgiving the cliché:)

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

Well Masu il all about gyoza so............he just loves them so much he talks about gyoza all the time! It's like Masu=gyoza=buta! He puts lots of buta emoji in his nikki by the way....