He knew - chapter 9
May. 7th, 2009 10:03 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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Title: He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 9
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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chivakaza for consulting some problems with me.
I had some grammar issues, because once again I kept going back and forth in time. I hope I didn´t confuse you too much.
Also, this chapter should have had another encounter in it, but the first part turned out longer than I planned so I will split it. But you can expect the next chapter sometimes tomorrow ´cause it´s one of those I have a pretty clear image about. This one on the other hand changed completely. Sorry for the violent Tat-chan.
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 9
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta
This fic was moved to my writing community
pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: beaten up, you set on the road
Thanks to
chivakaza for consulting some problems with me. I had some grammar issues, because once again I kept going back and forth in time. I hope I didn´t confuse you too much.
Also, this chapter should have had another encounter in it, but the first part turned out longer than I planned so I will split it. But you can expect the next chapter sometimes tomorrow ´cause it´s one of those I have a pretty clear image about. This one on the other hand changed completely. Sorry for the violent Tat-chan.
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Date: 2009-05-07 09:48 pm (UTC)I have no idea where this came from, but the moment I wrote the last chapter, it started bugging me and I tried to write the originaly planned version, but ... How can a fiction live a life of its own? Ignoring it´s author?
Thanks for reading and help:)
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Date: 2009-05-07 09:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-07 09:52 pm (UTC)the beating part was great XD I didn´t expect that much XD hh now i don´t really mind them getting hooked up together XD
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Date: 2009-05-07 10:42 pm (UTC)About changes - they are mostly good, you know, the fic becomes better, maybe more original, maybe more dramatic (totaly angsty in my case) just something new and sparkly:)
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Date: 2009-05-08 12:18 am (UTC)Thank you~
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Date: 2009-05-08 07:39 am (UTC)Thanks a lot for reading:)
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Date: 2009-05-08 01:23 am (UTC)looking forward to the next one~
thanks for the update~
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Date: 2009-05-08 07:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-08 04:35 am (UTC)Great chappie~!
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Date: 2009-05-08 07:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-08 05:36 am (UTC)THanks for sharing ne...........;)
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Date: 2009-05-08 07:41 am (UTC)Oh, almost forgot, thanks for reading ...
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Date: 2009-05-08 06:18 am (UTC)i m looking forward to a ryoda ending too... XDDDD
thanks much for the update :DD
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Date: 2009-05-08 07:42 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-08 06:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-08 07:45 am (UTC)Thanks for reading:)
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Date: 2009-05-08 06:37 am (UTC)ueda doesn't know that ryo didn't read the notebook..
ry0 should use his chance..:)
cant wait for more..:)
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Date: 2009-05-08 07:46 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-08 08:15 am (UTC)i..just..CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!
*waiting impatiently* XD
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Date: 2009-05-08 08:35 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-08 03:09 pm (UTC)and again. I LOVE THE WAY u inserted massu here~! *glompage*
heehee~~
massu honey you dont need ryo to buy you dinner.. I'll make you dinner if u want 8D everynight~~*hits self* XDWOAH. massu~! he sounds so.. serious. but he's protecting a bestfriend. I understand
mymassu's feelings~~i can't wait for the next!!!
I hope hUeda just feels so damn useless and lonely that when he saw Ryo he wanted compassion and love and hot stuff to happen^ please ignore. xD
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Date: 2009-05-08 05:06 pm (UTC)And I think I kind of disapointed you in the next chapter, as no hot stuff happened. Sorry about that:)
But thanks for reading and commenting like this. You are awsome!!!!
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Date: 2009-05-08 05:30 pm (UTC)just keep writing ok? ^^
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Date: 2009-05-08 05:38 pm (UTC)btw I ´ve been thinking, we both write and seem to like Massu, so may I friend you? It could be fun:) Let´s be friends:)
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Date: 2009-05-08 05:56 pm (UTC)i was actually going to ask you if I could add you as a friend :)
I guess we were on the same track, huh? XD
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Date: 2009-05-08 06:15 pm (UTC)Once again: Nice to meet you:)
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Date: 2009-05-08 06:21 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-12 12:57 am (UTC)I'm glad you even added the little explanation about how they cuold stay pro at concerts but, I'm still sad over MaruDa...but you had to.....
Finally Ryo gets to wonder about Tatsuya's weird act, okay not yet but I think he's soon gonna learn. Yes Ryo he loved you, so how are you gonna bring that back? And are you gonna fight or just let it be?
He was pretty beaten up here, thank god he hasn't got anything broken!
/runs off to read next chapter\
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Date: 2009-05-13 09:56 am (UTC)And yeah Ryo got it really hard from tat-chan ... I was thinking he might get a rib broken, but considering all the cirmcumstances ..
anyway, I am trying to repent for breaking MaruDa up, since I too was sad about it and I hope it will be worth it:)
Thanks for getting back to me and i hope I didn´t kind of push you into it ´cause that was not the intetnion ...
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Date: 2009-05-13 12:11 pm (UTC)It depends on the things I'm on at the moment but I had finally put some time to it
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Date: 2009-05-13 10:48 pm (UTC)*throws tantrum* AGHHHHHHHH DRAMAM!!!!!...........it's so gooddd~~ xDDD
he shoulda stayed to listen to ryo! and massu!!! LOL whatta cutie xDDD just poping out of no where like in arashi concerts =P
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Date: 2009-05-13 10:51 pm (UTC)Anyway lol good you are throwing tantrums and not crying anymore:) and thanks again for reding and liking ... it makes it all worth while:)