He knew - chapter 13 (FINAL)
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Title: He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 13 (final)
Rating: Safe/PG 13
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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So was this classical enough? Actually I did not plan to end this on my birthday, but the faith was in working here. MY first multi chapter is over and I think no. 13 is a good number to stop at.
A BIG thanks goes to all of you, who kept on reading. Another BIG one goes to all of you who commented at some point. You have given me so much support, encouragement and love. And at the beginning, although you might not know it, you have influenced the flow of events very much. It was fun to meet and talk to all of you. Once again thank you.
The exam period is coming. I might write less but knowing myself I doubt it. I actually have a proposition for you, if you have a prompt you want me to write or an idea, you want to read about, let me know. I won´t promise I´ll write it, but if I like it, or a muse strikes me, I just might. Because some people just give great prompts to write about. Although, you guys know me by now. I write RyoDa. In order to be a bit organized, go and cooment writing your ideas here so I can easily look through them.
THANK YOU again and for the last time in “He knew” history: comments are love, constructive criticism even more.
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 13 (final)
Rating: Safe/PG 13
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta
This fic was moved to my writing community
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So was this classical enough? Actually I did not plan to end this on my birthday, but the faith was in working here. MY first multi chapter is over and I think no. 13 is a good number to stop at.
A BIG thanks goes to all of you, who kept on reading. Another BIG one goes to all of you who commented at some point. You have given me so much support, encouragement and love. And at the beginning, although you might not know it, you have influenced the flow of events very much. It was fun to meet and talk to all of you. Once again thank you.
The exam period is coming. I might write less but knowing myself I doubt it. I actually have a proposition for you, if you have a prompt you want me to write or an idea, you want to read about, let me know. I won´t promise I´ll write it, but if I like it, or a muse strikes me, I just might. Because some people just give great prompts to write about. Although, you guys know me by now. I write RyoDa. In order to be a bit organized, go and cooment writing your ideas here so I can easily look through them.
THANK YOU again and for the last time in “He knew” history: comments are love, constructive criticism even more.
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Date: 2009-05-17 10:49 pm (UTC)WHAT A GREAT ENDING!!! LOL!
I LOVE UUU~~~~~~~~
LOL!
OMEDETOU FOR FINISHING THIS FIC..
*throws confetti and gives cookies*
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Date: 2009-05-18 07:21 pm (UTC)and i am happy you liked it:)
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Date: 2009-05-17 10:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-18 08:40 pm (UTC)Anyway glad you liked it and thanks again:)
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Date: 2009-05-18 12:24 am (UTC)Yay!I'm happy they get together (^____^)
I'm so gonna miss this fics!
i can't believe Tat-chan took the initiative first.
Ryo sure is slow ne~
is today your bday?
Hepi Bday then!!! And Omedetou
*hugs*!
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Date: 2009-05-18 08:44 pm (UTC)Well Tat-chan seems to be quite active when he knows what he wants:) And just maybe the writer felt like Ryo deserved it:)
anyway also thank yo for wishing me for birthday ... *hugs you back*
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Date: 2009-05-18 12:34 am (UTC)XDDD MASSU, WTF?! O_O XDDD
THAT WAS THE BEST!!! But awww the series is ending. D:
*showers you with sweets*
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Date: 2009-05-18 08:48 pm (UTC)*runs of to collect the sweets*
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Date: 2009-05-18 12:44 am (UTC)And I bet Ryo was too embrassed to kill the juniors! *w*
THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS ^w^
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Date: 2009-05-18 08:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-18 01:36 am (UTC)This is surely one of the fics that I'll be reading again and again~
♥
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Date: 2009-05-18 08:54 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-18 01:50 am (UTC)congrats for finishing this fic~~~
*throws confetti*
uwaa!!!
i can't believe it's finished already...i'm kinda sad...
but this chapter is soooo much love!!!
it's so cute and sweet and really make me smile and laugh all the way~~~
i love it very much!!!
finally tat-chan do the right thing ne~~~
i'm so happy with this classical ending!!!
lastly, thanks ne for sharing this wonderful fic with all of us~~~
congrats for finishing it~
and again, happy birthday dear~~~
*hugs and chuus*
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Date: 2009-05-18 09:18 pm (UTC)I am happy you liked this and we had fun, didn´t we:) everything has to end in the best ... so:)
See you next time when you or I write something ...
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Date: 2009-05-18 02:02 am (UTC)I think it was perfect that Ueda took the initiative as he is the one who practically told Ryo to back off.
It is good that everything work out in the end.
I am so happy that Maru has Massu as a friend who realizes what is going on and try to make him happy again.
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Date: 2009-05-18 09:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-18 03:31 am (UTC)im on crack !!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDD
RYODA ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 2009-05-18 09:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-18 04:16 am (UTC)i love the ending... its not really classic like the i love u please be with me... then the YES~!
hahahahha
i m late... but happy birthday :D may it be a wonderful year ahead :D
thanks much for the whole fic :D
it was wonderful :D
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Date: 2009-05-18 09:33 pm (UTC)and thanks for reading until the end ... sorry it´s not classical enough ... good you loved it though ...
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Date: 2009-05-18 05:04 am (UTC)Finally it's a happy ending.
I love the whole story so much!!
*hands you a birthday cake*
Happy birthday dear~
I want more Ryoda!
8D
Thanks for sharing.
This is awesome!
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Date: 2009-05-18 09:37 pm (UTC)I want some too!!! I mean Ryoda:) Thanks for always reading and commenting ...
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Date: 2009-05-18 05:38 am (UTC)Otanjoubi Omedetou! and Ganbatte to your exam.. ^^,
*showering flower confetti*
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Date: 2009-05-18 09:41 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-18 06:10 am (UTC)Thank you so much for finishing this...
i love the ending and i totally love the story....
looking forward to your next fics....
good luck....;)
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Date: 2009-05-18 09:42 pm (UTC)and thank you for always supporting me and commenting ...
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Date: 2009-05-18 07:01 am (UTC)*SPARKLES*
GOOD JOB!!!
♥♥♥♥♥
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Date: 2009-05-18 09:43 pm (UTC)thank you ... *marvels in sparkles*
thanks for all the support
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Date: 2009-05-18 07:06 am (UTC)Oh, and I've added you on Skype, I'm sort of hesitating to add you on FB cos then you'll have access to embarassing stuff on me. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
In any case, I'll be seeing you around, one way or another. Cheers!
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Date: 2009-05-18 09:49 pm (UTC)Thanks for supporting me while I wrote this and I am glad you enjoyed the progresss:)
facebook ... embarassing ? oh well would I even understand?
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Date: 2009-05-18 08:14 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-18 09:50 pm (UTC)thank you anyway ...
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Date: 2009-05-18 08:27 am (UTC)omedettou for finishing this wonderful fic n for your birthday!
its a great time reading this mchap!
thank you very much!
p/s: sorry i missed commenting some of the previous chapters~
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Date: 2009-05-18 11:39 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-18 11:34 am (UTC)and
they're very happy.:)
ry0 is really sl0w..
i find tat-chan really cute taking the initiative..
l0ve this fic very much
congratulations on finishing..:)
and belated happy birthday..:)
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Date: 2009-05-18 11:40 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2009-05-18 01:08 pm (UTC)Sorry, I want to give a long review, but somehow I just lost my words.. DD:
Anyhow, congratz for finishing this and looking forward for your future projects :))
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Date: 2009-05-18 11:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-18 01:19 pm (UTC)IT'S YOUR BDAY~!!!! O:
HAPPY BDAY~!
I as suppose to make u somthing sash demo i ddint have time coz I had cram school >_<
AHAHAH I LOVE IT.
MASSU <3 "idiots" IKR? :x XDDDD
WHAT?!?!? MASSU MET A GIRL!?
i bet that was meXD *i'm so weird. i'm paying more attention to massu's lines than the cute giddyness that RyoDa is showing. Im so weird XDDDD“You know, you are so slow, so I will break it down for you.
I am selfish, spoiled brat and I am always first. I don´t give out explanation too much and I expect them all the time. I am restless at times; I ignore people when I write at times. My daily regime is upside down and I won´t change it. I won´t stop boxing even if you beg me. I want you to always pay attention to me, always spoil me, always surprise me, always be there for me. I might compare you to Yuichi, because that man was one hell of a perfect boyfriend. If you cheat on me, I will kill you and then torture the other person to death. And you are not allowed to leave me! Ever!”
--- I LOVE U FOR WRITING THIS gkjrbsdbfkjbfsbnjk HEEHEE. SELFISH UEDA= GOOD >3 Seme >3 XDDDD
And suddenly they were kissing. Ryo was not gentle, he just bit Ueda´s lip. He had been dying to do that for ages now. Ueda gasped and Ryo´s tongue was suddenly in his mouth, slowly moving deeper.
Ueda gripped him tightly, pulling at his shirt, pulling Ryo closer, as his mouth swallowed him and his tongue joined on the battle.
-- OMG PURE LOVE bsdjknbvsjkvbkj LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!! <333
I LOVE IT. THE ENDING.
nees smut sewuelKIDDING O:THAT WAS SOO GOOD.
I CANT BELIEVE IT ENDED :(
nlsknblksb~!
Happy birthday again sash :)
i hope you had a great day~~~ ^^
if there's anything you want from me
ANYTHING at all.
i'll give it you you~ :DD
for some reason i feel obliged to give u something for your bdayXD---- and I guess this is the longes comment i have ever posted in your LJ huh? XD
weee~ <3
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Date: 2009-05-18 11:51 pm (UTC)Anyway you seemed to like it, so I am proud of myself ... ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I think I placed them totally wrong, I mean those hearts ...
you don´t need to give me anything, it will be enough if you make sense out of this comment ... and I appreciate you wishing me happy birthday ... so don´t worry
And yeah ... you liked my cheesy part, I wish it was that easy to make everything clear in real life...
I actually think this should have a smut epilogue but I do not know how to write smut, it is still out of my reach ... so this is how far i can get ...
Anyway thank you for reading, always commenting and giving me all the love and care ...
By the way , what IKR stands for, I tried to guess and I usually figure out the meaning of all those abreviations but not this time, and I had read this comment when sober as well, so I don´t think it´s because I am dizzy I don´t get it ...
ah whatever ... ♥
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Date: 2009-05-18 01:33 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-18 11:52 pm (UTC)LOL thank you:)
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Date: 2009-05-18 03:35 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-18 11:53 pm (UTC)thanks for always reading ...
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Date: 2009-05-18 04:57 pm (UTC)Good job! :D
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Date: 2009-05-18 11:53 pm (UTC)*runs of to get all the cookies*
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Date: 2009-05-18 06:18 pm (UTC)i loveeeeeeee this chapter!! the end was beautifully written!!
i like how tatchan is confused being the one taking the lead XD
and ryo is soooooooo cute i love the elevator scene and of course the kissing part *_*
thank you for writing this ~
will be looking forward for you next fic ^_^
keep up the good work ~
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Date: 2009-05-18 11:55 pm (UTC)Anyway thank you for always reading and commenting even when you don´t like MaruDa ...
YAY back ...
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Date: 2009-05-20 12:38 am (UTC)*hugs tightly* yeyeyeyeyeyeyyy!!! that was sucha good series!!
awehhh! this is just great! one of my favorite fics nowwwwwwww : )
and its only your first multi!! like wow! its so good!
LOL massu popped out of now where again! hehe! also maru moved on neee???
*sighs happily* this is so cute keke!
thanks! and congrats on finishing this series BONZAIII~~~
also happy belated beeday to you ^^;
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Date: 2009-05-20 07:40 pm (UTC)ad 2nd - thank you and *hugs back*
ad 3rd- really? *blushes* thank you for telling me :)
ad 4th- yeah, and it started like a one shot around chapter 5:) It surprised me the most, and again thank you:)
ad 5th- massu is my secret weapon
ad 6th- *smiles and blushes again* and thank you
ad 7th - you are welcome and yeah huray!!!
ad 8th - thank you for wishing me:)
Anyway just so you know how much I love and apprecite your comments and I just thought may I add you? we talked a lot ... and so I thought ...
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