One shot: Bend the truth

[higure]

Title: Bend the truth
Pairing: Nakamaru/ Massu (I will once make the entire fandom call them Nakama, because I think it is fun and fitting name squish:)
Rating: PG
Summary: Written for my prompt table, prompt no. 043: Bend:  Nakamaru centric tale about his “special power” to reason some of his action …
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.



This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: his physical boundaries were pretty broad


Ok, it is official, today I suck, even with the summary! Also, hello!!! There is only like one line of dialog. This turned out to be even weirder than when I tried for the first time. Anyway the rest of the stuff written for je_prompts  is actually pretty nice and I like it much more, so if you are interested, the whole table is here. I wanted to say (but I am not sure about it anymore, ´cause this just sucks) that this is for my sister chivakaza  to coax her into patiently waiting while I write her request. Also she had a name day, so happy name day, sis!!! I know I am late :(

Comments and constructive criticism are love.

Comments

[akillarian.livejournal.com]

NakaMa is cute :) Massu is smart to make the move or it will take forever for Maru to initiate anything since he's too busy thinking and making excuses in his head. Maru staring at Massu's butts xD

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

well don´t you think he has a good one? I mean butt ... anyway thanks for reading and commenting:) you are FAAAAAAAAAST:)

[akillarian.livejournal.com]

I'm not sure since I don't think I have stare at Massu's behind. Your question prompts me to check his behind the next time I see Massu on video :D

I keep refreshing my friends page while waiting for my next class to start. Your fic pops up, I jump to read since there's not much Nakamaru + Massu fic floating around. There's no angst too so it's a bonus. I don't want to read angst between classes.

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

lol chceck it out then, I think it is one of the best in J&A, just damn those impossibly wide trousers he wears sometimes ... ok, I sound like a but perv now ...
and hmmm ... for me angst is (almost) never good, between or after classes. so you are on the right address with that:)I hope classes were OK ...

[zelpet001.livejournal.com]

*saves spot*
this time i will back and read after working hours XD

[zelpet001.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwww, this was cute
they are really cute together, i loved it
sankyou~~~~~
*hands you ichigos*
chu~~~~~

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

ahh ... strawberries sound great about now ... anyway glad you thought it was cute:)
and thank you very much for commenting, now i know at least someone has read and liked it:) you are the best:)

[woaiweier.livejournal.com]

*speechless*

So I was just randomly comm-hopping and I saw this and I ♥ the both of them together and then after I read it and OMG!!! I really don't know what to say. But it's just so shdfkjsdkjfhs and I LOVE IT! *adding to memories*

*squishes you for writing such a skjhfsdhfkj NakaMa* <-- this reminds me of Koyama though. -.- LOL.

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

lol I am pleased you liked it, not many people seemed to even read it, Anyway i like this pairing so I might write it again:) And it is an honnor to be in someone´s memms:)
Thank you for reading and commenting, I can see comm-hopping is good. ♥

[woaiweier.livejournal.com]

I guess they're just less popular, that's why. ^^" But I think they're just so cute together. :D

& yes! It is good! I've been trying to find nice Massu/Maru fics but they're just so rare. :X If I wasn't comm-hopping I wouldn't have found this! ^^

♥♥♥

[swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com]

Okay, so this is like a kinda late comment but I just had to tell you that I really, really like this!

I don't know how I could've missed out on reading this before...

So anyway, great work and I would love it if you wrote more stories with this pairing ^^ they are just adorable together!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Lol how did you even find this so late:) But late comments make me happy:) Glad you enjoyed this, I like Maru and Massu together so I might write them again.
Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment:)