Oneshot: Misfortunes
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Title: Misfortunes
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: PG 13 (I guess)
Summary: This is one of the fics that I still had to write for my request post. Prompt was “Man has to suffer. When he has no real afflictions, he invents some.”
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
A/N: I should say I tried to make put some humor in as I was asked to. But I might have failed. Dear![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
naoryuu I hope you will like it a little. It is not in comment boxes because I was too lazy to calculate how to split it.
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pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: His life was hard
Yes I know I am out of my mind ...
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: PG 13 (I guess)
Summary: This is one of the fics that I still had to write for my request post. Prompt was “Man has to suffer. When he has no real afflictions, he invents some.”
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
A/N: I should say I tried to make put some humor in as I was asked to. But I might have failed. Dear
naoryuu I hope you will like it a little. It is not in comment boxes because I was too lazy to calculate how to split it. This fic was moved to my writing community
pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: His life was hard
Yes I know I am out of my mind ...
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Date: 2009-07-20 11:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-21 05:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-20 11:45 pm (UTC)I think I'm in love with your writing and imagination. I mean you come second after you-know-who-because-that's-obvious.
But that was "digne des plus grands classics RyoDa!"
The LOL, the Eito's crazyness, and Pi being there and I think that was one of my best protraying of Ueda being dominatrix and totally overruling Ryo. SO priceless, so WIN, I love this Ueda and this Ryo being somewhat scared of the princess but in a way OH MY GOODNESS so "énorme"! Enorme as in "génialissime!
I can't believe how amazing your mind works when you're given prompt or just want to write, and imagine things like that! I mean, situations and dialogues but also the vocabulary! You write so neat! That's one of the things I envy so much from you and the other "A" from our "AAA" club
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Date: 2009-07-21 02:39 am (UTC)I love this fic.
I think poor Ryo is just too stress that he thinks the whole world is conspiring against him.
I love how sadistic is Ueda and Ryo being in denial.
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Date: 2009-07-21 05:14 pm (UTC)thanky for reading, loving and commenting ... and telling em you laughed, it seemed it was a little funny
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Date: 2009-07-21 05:13 pm (UTC)But I so love it, when you switch to french:)
You know, I always just want to write, I can have a prompt but if there is no will to write ... and the prompt needs to be good, and this was an awesome prompt:)
Glad you liked it:) Although, me neat? really? lol the vocab is a simple trick of an open thesaurus :)
anyway THANK YOU ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
and OMG WE HAVE A CLUB!!!! but you have no reason for envy:)
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Date: 2009-07-21 12:12 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-21 05:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-21 02:22 am (UTC)It really made me laugh like crazy! [more than crazy if my mother came personally to shut me up XD]
awww almost feel pity for Ryo and the frikkin' conspiratorial world...
key word: almost XDWuuhuu you go Tat-chan! it makes me really happy when I read him being so.. so... so... in 'dictator' mode XD
'...there was no way he was fucking Ueda Tatsuya wearing his socks' best final line ever!...[thanks Yasu for making that happen...XD]
Big Kisses&Hugs!!!
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Date: 2009-07-21 05:16 pm (UTC)lol at the socks phrase, I almost deleted it:) Glad it was a good final for you:)
Thank you for reading and leaving an awesome comment *hugs*
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Date: 2009-07-21 08:14 am (UTC)thank you for sharing!^^
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Date: 2009-07-21 05:16 pm (UTC)lol thanks for reading ...
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Date: 2009-07-21 10:30 am (UTC)Ryo is so cute when in denial xD
Great job with it <3<3<3<3<3<3<3
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Date: 2009-07-21 05:17 pm (UTC)thanks for always keeping up with me, reading and commenting:)
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Date: 2009-07-21 05:19 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-21 05:30 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-21 05:44 pm (UTC)Thanks once again!!!! Chuu*
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Date: 2009-07-21 11:55 am (UTC)XDDDDDDDDDDD
I should be cleaning up at the moment, but I just couldn't help it and read it.
YEY.
A sole post, I feel honored 8D
Stop worrying. This was really amusing. X"DDD
Oh, I don't know what to say, it was brilliant.
I loved all the expressions of his misfortune.
Especially the one with heavens falling on his head.
And the colorful toenails were the best ending ever.
If you're out of your mind, so am I, because I loved it. xD
Endless thanks. 8D
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Date: 2009-07-21 05:24 pm (UTC)anyway i thought you might be up yesterday when I posted, at the end you didn´t find it before others did, sorry about that ...
You liked the exresions, good, I was sweating blood avoiding a word suffer :) anyway I know it is not subttle as you like it at all, but I blame your totally awesome prompt ... and I just realized you might have no idea who Yassu is. Do you remember when we talked about this ? that is Yassu ...
Anyway SOOOO HAAAAAPPPPPPPYYYYYYYYYYYY you liked it, including the nail line:)
You are welcome and sorry it took so long ...
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Date: 2009-07-21 08:49 pm (UTC)It's okay. I was up, I just was not online xD
And I loved it the way it is. Thank you very much xD
I hope you had fun with the prompt, but considering the final product, you enjoyed writing it.8D
Well, I just presumed who he might me, since you spesified their dress rooms.
OF COURSE I REMEMBER THAT SCREENSHOT LOL HAHAHAH XDDDD
It was really perfect, I can't decide which one I like better.
Stairs, or this one.. Oh well.. both.
Nails nailed it. BD
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Date: 2009-07-21 08:52 pm (UTC)*specified
... I am probably going blind, lol. -_-"
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Date: 2009-07-23 12:46 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-21 12:28 pm (UTC)best ever ...one of my faves by you XDDDD
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Date: 2009-07-21 05:25 pm (UTC)thanks sis for letting me know:)
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Date: 2009-07-21 02:27 pm (UTC)tat chan in control XDDD!!! yay!
lurv this...alot!
thx for this!
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Date: 2009-07-21 05:26 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-22 04:11 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-23 12:47 pm (UTC)thank you for reading and commenting, that made my day for a change:)
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Date: 2009-07-24 09:48 am (UTC)I know I'm late, but still want to leave this comment.
can't stop laughing, seriously I love this kind of story..
so, write more dear~
really adore your writing!
thanks for always sharing..
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Date: 2009-07-24 11:22 am (UTC)I am glad you likd this.
And you are not late, one can be never late in reading and leaving me comment ... I love reading them.
I´ll try to write more, it is nice to knowpeople like my stories:)
Thanks for reading and commenting :D
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Date: 2009-07-27 08:06 pm (UTC)Can I translate it into Hungarian? I need to share this with Hungary. :D PLS PLS C:
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Date: 2009-07-27 08:11 pm (UTC)So yeah thanks again for reading and let me know how it went:)
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Date: 2009-07-28 03:19 pm (UTC)