Miniseries: Pink (part 2)

[higure]

Title: Pink (part 2/no more than five?)
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: PG 13
Summary: And the miniseries goes on. What will Ryo do with his gift certificate?
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta


A/N: To sum the previous happenings up, meet Ryo-chan! He is perfect!

Now we have that covered, enjoy the next part and I am sorry!


This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: How is the accent working for you?



Well I am not telling you much about how these guys feel, I am trying for you to feel it from the atmosphere and their action. Is that alright with you?

Comments are love constructive criticism even more.

Comments

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

Damn it another one!
*goes reading*

Darn it, in the end they didn't do anything AGAIN!
Darn it you torture my hormones Alex! XP

BUt then, like you say, I can feel the slow and nice atmosphere around them.

I lol-ed when Ryo realized what he said about Jin telling Pi and Pi telling Ryo...he should have understood right away!

Keep going

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Yeah I think they have missed a train of easy sex with no strings atached ...
Sorry for torturing you and glad I made you laugh!
And you have a neck for me updating even without me telling you I see!

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

Well it's because I didn't come home too late and you updated while I was still not blurried eyes!
hah ahahah

[ramadiii.livejournal.com]

Absolutely wonderful!!!!!! Can't wait to see what happens :P

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Thanks!!!
Hmmm ... I am not sure myself ... will see where this leads me

[geroevnet.livejournal.com]

It's brilliant! The fic's atmosphere and all... Thank you so much! :)
Waiting for soon update! :)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thank you:) I´ll try to be quick but I will see

[keena-keena.livejournal.com]

ooooh shooooot! i can't wait ofr the next one! this so sweeeeeeeeeettttttttttt!!!! lovin' it!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

oh thank, I hope i won´t make you wait to long, in the meantime thanks for reading and commenting

[resha-ueda.livejournal.com]

I.... YOU... THIS. ♥

I really really like this~ its quite refreshing to read actually. Both of them wanting to do it but end up being too tired and wanting do it right is alksfalskjdlaskjdl


will wait for more~

sorry for not commenting on previous chapters *bows*

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

♥ glad you find it refreshing ...
and no need to appologize "au contraire" I thank you for letting me know ...

[snow-meow.livejournal.com]

I love this sequel.

It's really an interesting date.

I love the messages that they write to each other. I think the words and way you use them are brilliant.

I am so curious as to what song was it that Ryo was working on. Do you have any idea? ^_~

I think Kame, Ryo, Ueda are really sadistic to Pi. But I love how adorable and cute Pi is in wanting to know everything. I guess being Ryo's best bud has something to do with it.

Jin is really a baka to believe Kame and Ueda's converstation.

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thank you, about the song, no I am not thinking about anything in particular, it is set in present days, so i can´t really tell ...
anyway glad you like my side characters as well:)
thanks again for liking, reading and commenting

[grashiya01.livejournal.com]

yey!!!~ more to come!! :))

ohh, so the deal is done?? hmm.. haha i am waiting for the "dirty-talking-while-having-sex part.. lol XD

thanks for sharing the love~~

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

damn it! Everybody is, will I actually have to make Ryo talk dirty?
Anyway yeah the deal is done! Good observation there!
Thanks for reading and commenting

[allboutp.livejournal.com]

uwaah im loving it!
the series seems to be fun ^^
n i think i missed the 2 parts earlier, will go n read it ^___^
thank u so much for this!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

lol at you reading this first and then going back, I personally think it was more fun at the begining and now it starts to get a bit serious ... anyway thanks for "loving it"

[fyad7.livejournal.com]

so cute!! i love how comfortable they are with each other. can't wait for the next part! thanks for updating!!!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading, I hope not to let you wait for too long ...

[raixas.livejournal.com]

the art, is soooo CUTE! *squeals*
no dessert...again??? *sighs*

thank you for sharing the 2nd part!^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

no desert ... i think Ryo might not want it anymore
the art is awesome, right! Not my work, :( I can´t draw at all ...
thanks for reading ...

[blaue-lucifer.livejournal.com]

ehhhh??? that was ... wasted... =D
but im pretty sure that ryo's gonna go after him XD

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

was it? well it was his choice ... he knew he is waisting it ....

Thanks for reading

[badbatazz.livejournal.com]

they both must be pretty tired if they keep falling asleep on each other.
ryo being upset of tat chan not liking is accent is funny... and i think they are beginning to feel comfortable around each other

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I think it is not just about being tired, and yes being comfortable with each other is a part of it, but ...
Anyway thank you for reading ...

[naoryuu.livejournal.com]

when he suddenly fell asleep again, it felt like a moment from a dorama. xD

I love the teasing atmosphere in this.
Looking forward to next one <3

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

are you really sure he fell asleep? I mean, are you?
Ok I am weird that way, I am aparently not saying enough and not making it clear enough either, I fail!

anyway thanks:) and hmmm ... the teasing is getting harder and harder, I would say the atmosphere changed a lot in this one, didn´t it?

[naoryuu.livejournal.com]

... am I? XD
That's why I called it a dorama-moment. xD
Noone falls asleep so easily. xD

yes, it changed. I am curious about what are you going to come up with next.