higure: (Ryo wants his desert)
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Title: Pink (part 3/no more than five?)
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: PG 13
Summary: And the miniseries goes on. This might be a slight filler, slightly dramatic as well. The song is written but where do these two stand, now there is nothing to pay back for? Or is there?

Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta



This fic was moved to my writing community [livejournal.com profile] pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: He closes his eyes, admits the defeat and falls asleep


Ryo decided to play along one more time, but really I so do not approve. Oh boys … And Ueda should face his pink apron.

I have played as a big girl today and I don´t like it at all. Let´s stay kids for a little longer, ok?

Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.

Date: 2009-08-12 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ramadiii.livejournal.com
This was great!!!! I'm so excited to see how this ends xD
Ryo is so cute in this ;)

Date: 2009-08-12 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
You are so so faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaast ....

I myself am curious about how this ends ...

Thanks for reading and commenting

Date: 2009-08-12 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geroevnet.livejournal.com
It was hot!..
Thank you! ^)

Date: 2009-08-13 11:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
you are welcome, on the other hand thank you ...

Date: 2009-08-13 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fyad7.livejournal.com
i really can't wait to find out what happens next!!! thanks for updating!

Date: 2009-08-13 11:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
thanks for keeping up with me:) We will see how this evolves ...

Date: 2009-08-13 05:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mizzakachan.livejournal.com
I LOVE IT???? hahahha.... so happy to know they are not done playing yet.. let them play a lil' longer...

thanks for sharing ne?

Date: 2009-08-13 11:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
thanks for loving it, but are you sure you want them just to play around?

Date: 2009-08-13 07:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dayenniez.livejournal.com
OMG! this is freaking HOT!
my heart also doesn't want to calm down.. hahaha~

I'm really excited to know the next..
Can't wait!

"You looked hot today, I like your hair in a ponytail, like that, it makes me want to pull at them hard, take the elastic away and watch them fall down"
Yeah!! That's clear true!

Thanks for sharing dear~
This miniseries is great!!

Date: 2009-08-13 11:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
thanks for reading and liking it ... this miniseries is fun to write ...

Date: 2009-08-13 08:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grashiya01.livejournal.com
damn! hime is right.. osakan "accent" is freakin' HOT!!!

haha so it's the sexy osaka man's turn to play around huh??

love this fic!!!

thanks for sharing!~~

Date: 2009-08-13 11:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
well yes maybe ... thanks for reading and commenting:)

Date: 2009-08-13 10:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raixas.livejournal.com
yaaaayy!! XD
another gift certificate~
whatever this series will lead to, i'll patiently wait for the next one~

thank you very much for sharing!^^

Date: 2009-08-13 11:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
isn´t it getting a little uninovative? maaa ... it is miniseries, so it should lead to something pretty soon ...

thanks for reading and commenting

Date: 2009-08-13 11:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keena-keena.livejournal.com
yay! sooooo angsty! hahahaa

i really thought they're gonna fight! haha weird.. but loololoolololooove it!

Date: 2009-08-13 11:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
in a way it was a battle:)

thanks for living it:)

Date: 2009-08-13 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] allboutp.livejournal.com
lol...a bit angsty n moody they r ne??
ryo is confused, n tatchan doesnt say much, thats y
the end is hawt, its lk flaring up for the coming event.
this only make me couldnt wait for next, oh my gosh!
thank u so much for updating, will wait patiently for next ^^

Date: 2009-08-13 02:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blaue-lucifer.livejournal.com
lol for the mom thing... really... =D
but (i say this AGAIN) love the gift certificate thingy!!! XDD

thx for the update!

Date: 2009-08-13 05:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
you are welcome!
... I know right, ueda´s mom is fun to write!

glad you like this, thanks for commenting

Date: 2009-08-13 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] creamy-amande.livejournal.com
You played as a big girl? Well yes you should not! I mean should and shouldn't.
RYo wants to play but maybe that's because he hasn't figured Ueda out yet, he doesn't know really if the other wants to stillp lay or going more adulte like. Thout Ueda bough a new apronw for him, he should soon see it for himself!
Ueda won't hold back? What's that? Sex? Or is he just ending boxing?
AH I understand; they met at the parking lot but they will go to the posh restaurant on friday right? Okay now that made sense.

Well let's keep going okay? I mean as writer(you)/reader(us). We'll see what happens.

Date: 2009-08-13 05:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
I did, I will have to from now on ... time to time ...

anyway Ryo is opting for the sure option, I guess ...

I might not have been clean about the apron, Ueda bought the new one for his mom, because he doesn´t want her to wear the pink one anymore, that one is for ...

Sorry for confusing you:)

yeah on verra ...

Date: 2009-08-13 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] creamy-amande.livejournal.com
You meant "clear" not "clean"? Ha ha ha

The color yellow was confusing yeah, I tought you did that on purpose!

Vilaine!

Date: 2009-08-14 03:04 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] badbatazz.livejournal.com
i am really loving this series. thanks

Date: 2009-08-14 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
thanks to you :) you have done some heavy reading today ... did you have a day off?

Date: 2009-08-15 01:35 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] badbatazz.livejournal.com
nope... the series is too good to be ignored. *winks*

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