Miniseries: Pink (part 5)
Aug. 17th, 2009 01:20 amTitle: Pink (part 5/5)
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: PG 13
Summary: What comes a morning after? And a day after? Or after that?
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: only few hours until he has to wake up and face Kame
I don´t know if this is any good. I knew they would solve it but I didn´t want them to be too mushy, so … sorry if this is not the end you wanted. I might, MIGHT, write an epilogue to this, just because I was thinking of using one more thing in this fic and didn´t at the end. But I make no promises and in fact, given all the plans for next few weeks, you might see less of me. Whatever that means …
Thanks for reading this miniseries despite the fact it has changed terribly after like part two …
Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: PG 13
Summary: What comes a morning after? And a day after? Or after that?
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta
This fic was moved to my writing community
I don´t know if this is any good. I knew they would solve it but I didn´t want them to be too mushy, so … sorry if this is not the end you wanted. I might, MIGHT, write an epilogue to this, just because I was thinking of using one more thing in this fic and didn´t at the end. But I make no promises and in fact, given all the plans for next few weeks, you might see less of me. Whatever that means …
Thanks for reading this miniseries despite the fact it has changed terribly after like part two …
Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.
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Date: 2009-08-16 11:56 pm (UTC)Read it tomorrow, promise.
I don't think it was too mushy though.
Odd as it can be, and somehow weird how everything happens in this chapter, it all seemed natural too.
I think I have a thing for weird happenings. They're so much more!
I really liked how Ueda is trying here and how Kato is needy of the song but only will get a new one, maybe less good though. Ha ha
And Ryo to ask where he stands...that was the mushy part, but there's not so much in this chappie/end.
Ah thank you for finishing this.
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Date: 2009-08-17 12:56 am (UTC)love the ending! finally! hehehe
thanks muchoooooooo!
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Date: 2009-08-17 01:05 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-17 01:40 am (UTC)an epilogue is a bonus for me,
coz I really love this miniseries..
"I am a man, Japanese at that, I don´t talk about my emotions… "
this is really differed from others story.. more manly for tatchan..
Thanks for sharing!!
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Date: 2009-08-17 03:13 am (UTC)love this mini series.. (from "to woo" down to this one.. it's really "believable" :))
thanks for sharing the love~~
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Date: 2009-08-17 05:07 am (UTC)GREAT JOB! *confetti showaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa*
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Date: 2009-08-17 07:51 am (UTC)guys shouldn't be mushy, doncha think so? :D
thank you very much for this mini series! ^^
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:00 am (UTC)mmm i didnt expect this ending, a good surprise :)))
i guess shige got something unexpected out from it ne XDDD
thanks much for the fic XD
<3s
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:10 am (UTC)Thank you so much! :)
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:28 am (UTC)thanks for reading this miniseries and always commenting ...
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:30 am (UTC)I am happy you like them, makes my ego boosts into inappropriate manners ...
thank you for sticking with me through the entire series:)
♥
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:31 am (UTC)And yes Tat-chan is more ... I guess you can call it manly in here ... still if you could enjoy the series, then it is not a bad thing:)
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:33 am (UTC)the title of the song?
Hmmm do you want to give it a title? Just in case I´d need it in the maybe coming maybe not epilogue?
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:35 am (UTC)thanks a lot I am blushing at my fic beeing liked:)
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:36 am (UTC)Anyway thank you for reading and commenting on this miniseries:)
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:37 am (UTC)Anyway thanks for always reading and commenting:)
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:38 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-17 10:00 am (UTC)Thank you so much for writing and posting it <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
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Date: 2009-08-17 12:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-17 12:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-17 12:49 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-17 02:31 pm (UTC)poor shige! XDDD he is SO clueless =D
thx for this~
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Date: 2009-08-17 03:03 pm (UTC)shige being the victim here lol, poor him ne~
n i lk this one,it felt lk they r trying to understand each other,n somehow they manage to do it, yay!
thank u so much for this!
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Date: 2009-08-17 04:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-17 04:50 pm (UTC)I love Ueda's peace offering to poor confused Shige.
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:08 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading:)
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:09 pm (UTC)anyway thank you for liking and sticking with me throughout the series ...
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Date: 2009-08-17 08:09 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-17 08:10 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-23 08:25 pm (UTC)Anyway thank you for comming back to it and stalking me through this series ...
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Date: 2009-11-10 10:42 am (UTC)I read all your Ryoda fanfictions.
So I guess I'm a stalker? :D
Well, you can't blame me for being a die-hard Ryoda fan can you?
I decided to comment because I realised even though I read so many of your fanfictions, I didn't comment. LOL.
Anyways, I must say KUDOS to you!
Your fanfictions are awesome ~
Thank you for writing such awesome Ryoda stuff, for the world needs more Ryoda fanfic writers. XD
xoxo,
Middlight.
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Date: 2009-11-11 02:02 am (UTC)♥
I should apologize for you dealing with loads of typos and word mess ups lately though, I can usually see them later on but hardly ever fix them ... so sorry for making you suffer
well anyway thank you very much for using your time to read my fics and for telling me about it. I hope I can provide you with few more of them in the future!
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Date: 2009-11-16 01:35 pm (UTC)And other thing, mind if I friend you? (:
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Date: 2009-11-16 02:02 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-09 12:46 pm (UTC)That was a good RyoDa fanfic, thanks for sharing it.
Did you write that epilogue? But I think this ending was perfect too. :D I loved their personality here.
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Date: 2009-12-09 01:36 pm (UTC)And unfortunately no I didn´t write the epilogue .. I still could probably but I guess I might have lost the touch of the fic ... well you never know, but I wouldn´t hold my breath for it