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Title: Pink (part 5/5)
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: PG 13
Summary: What comes a morning after? And a day after? Or after that?

Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta




This fic was moved to my writing community [livejournal.com profile] pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: only few hours until he has to wake up and face Kame



I don´t know if this is any good. I knew they would solve it but I didn´t want them to be too mushy, so … sorry if this is not the end you wanted. I might, MIGHT, write an epilogue to this, just because I was thinking of using one more thing in this fic and didn´t at the end. But I make no promises and in fact, given all the plans for next few weeks, you might see less of me. Whatever that means …

Thanks for reading this miniseries despite the fact it has changed terribly after like part two …

Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.

Date: 2009-08-16 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] creamy-amande.livejournal.com
Stalker is back.
Read it tomorrow, promise.

I don't think it was too mushy though.
Odd as it can be, and somehow weird how everything happens in this chapter, it all seemed natural too.

I think I have a thing for weird happenings. They're so much more!
I really liked how Ueda is trying here and how Kato is needy of the song but only will get a new one, maybe less good though. Ha ha
And Ryo to ask where he stands...that was the mushy part, but there's not so much in this chappie/end.

Ah thank you for finishing this.
Edited Date: 2009-08-18 09:08 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-08-17 12:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keena-keena.livejournal.com
hihihihi

love the ending! finally! hehehe

thanks muchoooooooo!

Date: 2009-08-17 01:05 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] badbatazz.livejournal.com
finally they stop playing... thanks. and ya i think you might kill me for saying this but i just love your ryoda fics.

Date: 2009-08-17 01:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dayenniez.livejournal.com
this is real good dear~

an epilogue is a bonus for me,
coz I really love this miniseries..

"I am a man, Japanese at that, I don´t talk about my emotions… "
this is really differed from others story.. more manly for tatchan..

Thanks for sharing!!

Date: 2009-08-17 03:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grashiya01.livejournal.com
oh wow.. so what's the tittle of the song?? :D haha

love this mini series.. (from "to woo" down to this one.. it's really "believable" :))

thanks for sharing the love~~

Date: 2009-08-17 05:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resha-ueda.livejournal.com
ahahha this WIN SO HARD. ♥

GREAT JOB! *confetti showaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa*

Date: 2009-08-17 07:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raixas.livejournal.com
i like the ending~ ^^
guys shouldn't be mushy, doncha think so? :D

thank you very much for this mini series! ^^

Date: 2009-08-17 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alaruber.livejournal.com
WOW.... it ended... O.O
mmm i didnt expect this ending, a good surprise :)))
i guess shige got something unexpected out from it ne XDDD

thanks much for the fic XD
<3s

Date: 2009-08-17 08:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geroevnet.livejournal.com
It's so cute and warm! :)
Thank you so much! :)

Date: 2009-08-17 10:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ramadiii.livejournal.com
Absolutely wonderful!!!!! A great ending to this mini-series ;)

Thank you so much for writing and posting it <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

Date: 2009-08-17 02:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blaue-lucifer.livejournal.com
awwww XD they made up~

poor shige! XDDD he is SO clueless =D

thx for this~

Date: 2009-08-17 03:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] allboutp.livejournal.com
this is sure fun ^^
shige being the victim here lol, poor him ne~
n i lk this one,it felt lk they r trying to understand each other,n somehow they manage to do it, yay!
thank u so much for this!

Date: 2009-08-17 04:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fyad7.livejournal.com
i really enjoyed this. thanks!!!

Date: 2009-08-17 04:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snow-meow.livejournal.com
I like the ending. I like how things worked out in the end.

I love Ueda's peace offering to poor confused Shige.

Date: 2009-11-10 10:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] middlight.livejournal.com
Hey,
I read all your Ryoda fanfictions.
So I guess I'm a stalker? :D
Well, you can't blame me for being a die-hard Ryoda fan can you?
I decided to comment because I realised even though I read so many of your fanfictions, I didn't comment. LOL.
Anyways, I must say KUDOS to you!
Your fanfictions are awesome ~
Thank you for writing such awesome Ryoda stuff, for the world needs more Ryoda fanfic writers. XD
xoxo,
Middlight.

Date: 2009-12-09 12:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shiroiamy.livejournal.com
Yay, I found it.^^
That was a good RyoDa fanfic, thanks for sharing it.
Did you write that epilogue? But I think this ending was perfect too. :D I loved their personality here.

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