Title: The one with cliché and ponytails
Pairing: Jin/Ueda
Rating: PG -13
Summary: Jin wants to prove he looks just fine, despite people noticing the trails of his recent influenza. Most of all he needs to show Ueda just how fine he can be.
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pipsqueaks , I am kind of very late. I hope you´ll find it at least a bit enjoyable.
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Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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I am kind of presuming that CTKT is shot quite ahead and that they kind of shoot the episodes in one go even if it gets split in two weeks for the viewers. You know … And Jin practically asked for the ending. The screen cap from CTKT 139 has done it. Now, excuse me I am going to contemplate about how to really write a proper JinDa next time I attempt.
Pairing: Jin/Ueda
Rating: PG -13
Summary: Jin wants to prove he looks just fine, despite people noticing the trails of his recent influenza. Most of all he needs to show Ueda just how fine he can be.
Written for
No beta
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
This fic was moved to my writing community
I am kind of presuming that CTKT is shot quite ahead and that they kind of shoot the episodes in one go even if it gets split in two weeks for the viewers. You know … And Jin practically asked for the ending. The screen cap from CTKT 139 has done it. Now, excuse me I am going to contemplate about how to really write a proper JinDa next time I attempt.
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Date: 2009-12-09 10:33 pm (UTC)OH MY GOD
OH MY GOD
I had to like, stop reading halfway because I went BRIGHT RED and was like *_______________* and THEN SADISTIC LOVE CAME ON and I seriously overheated and Vix LAUGHED AT ME because I was like ICAN'TEVENSPEAK *________* OMGOMGOMG
BECAUSE
HAIR ANFDVMDTYFKCFYKCR6TFGN BOXING ERDIFCHVJ OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG EDRZSI34WRSUS43XEDRUJ~EZU54RIXKRJXDT7UGYIÊÎËÏÁÌÓØIKSJTDHSETREUDTFJHGÂËÔTIKHGMNHDTET HAVE YOU ANY IDEA yes you probably have since like, you know me and akk but ULDYFLKCYFGVBM OMG OMG OMG AND THE HAIR AND THE BOXING AND DTUKGFDJR5CTJ AND TRDYI7RYUTGHJETFIGKVM I CAN'T EVEN i think my cheeks are still burning OH MY GOD AND THEN BUTTERFLY CAME ON, WHAT IS THIS CONSPIRACY ITUNES DSFDIKUHJNBKLYSTFHGJVB¢¢∞¶ÂÊËYGHKJ6RTDR and UNF JIN'S HAIR TOO TDJFGJTUYGKJHM AND UEDA NOTICED BUT DIDN'T GIVE ANY HINT UNTIL AFTERWARDS AND THEN GLASSES AS WELL AND ETUSF65SRYJKFMGS5RT7RTSUXFID7TKYH
AE57US7TDIOKTYGUFICYUHVBOKTYFGH
RS5TIERSTJCGYHK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
srs you like... apologised for 'chickening out' PLEASE DON'T APOLOGISE, IF IT HAD BEEN ANY HOTTER THAN THAT I WOULD SERIOUSLY HAVE MELTED AND DIED AND IDEK I COULDN'T HAVE FINISHED MY HOLS, I KNOW THAT MUCH *____________* shit i should be writing I DON'T CARE, THIS WAS AMAZING, AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING THANK YOU SO SO MUCH
omg I think my face is still burning... *________*
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Date: 2009-12-09 10:58 pm (UTC)and K3U 2 lol
argh girl you made me all giddy and happy and blushing and asdfghaysfghnjmaffm,advbnabnyxcv
anyway
I am really glad you liked this, as i said already it might have something to do with us liking same things XDDDD
still THANK YOU
And I am off to steal that icon!*___*
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Date: 2009-12-10 12:12 am (UTC)KYAAAA~!!! JINDA JINDA JINDA!! I miss it so much!! How I love JinDa to bits!!! *flails* Thank you for sharing and I hope you write more of it!! *flails some more*
Very very nice and funny too! How I love those two competing against each other... now I wonder if Jin would do the fountain style to his hair lol!!! But I think only Tat-chan would be able to pull that off! XD XD and That screencap is ♥ ♥ ♥ and finally the first part of that camping is so much LOVE!!! jin's just so hyper there!!! XD
thank you and sorry for the length~ lol!!! *goes to read again* XD
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Date: 2009-12-10 04:27 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-10 05:38 am (UTC)I don't think I can give you constructive criticism. I think all your writing is amazing. I really liked the flow of this. The transitions between scenes was perfect and the way you wrote the boxing with such detail. Even the kiss, so little words but so much imagery. I like that you show through writing rather than just telling.
btw, I hope you don't mind if I add you? I'd like to receive updates on when you post fics and I want to read your personal entries too because I think you're awesome and we've talked other places and I think 'she is so nice, I should ask to friend her'. We have common interests (and mutual friends) so maybe be can friends? :3
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Date: 2009-12-10 09:00 am (UTC)And you write so well, as always. I wish I could write the way you do. D: *envy*
(About CTKT: It's shot way ahead. The VTRs probably more than a month ahead, the studio shooting 3 weeks to a month ahead. Split episodes are shot on the same day. That's what I observed anyway.)
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Date: 2009-12-10 01:11 pm (UTC)And I don´t mind long comments at all ♥
And yeah the camping trip was a great episode! and I like Jin with a ponytail the best XD
lol I will write jinda again ... maybe, is someone asks me XDDD
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Date: 2009-12-10 01:18 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-10 01:23 pm (UTC)glad I wrote this when you were in need and thank you for all those nice words *is blushing*
Anyway about friending you, sure no problem, am adding you as I type this XD I think we were "friends" when you had toastypineapple journal for a while ... so again, Hi! I´m Alex. Nice to meet you!
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Date: 2009-12-10 01:25 pm (UTC)Still thank you ♥
About CTKT. Yeah I think I agree with you and basically I wasn´t far from truth in assuming what I did XD
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Date: 2009-12-10 06:11 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-10 06:53 pm (UTC)Nice to meet you too, Alex! I'm Tally.
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Date: 2009-12-10 10:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-11 02:47 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-11 03:07 am (UTC)Been a while I've read some GOOD JinDa. Very GOOD.
I can't say much, 4am already but wow! I haven't watched any ctKT recently so I don't know, just saw some caps but you really made a good use of his looks. I loved your story and I think they have to compete in RL and in fictions.
I'm amazed and I'm happy I read it. Thank YOU
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Date: 2009-12-11 06:11 am (UTC)and i can say i loved it!
the way Jin was watching Ueda boxing was just *_____*
i can totally imagine him!
and...ponytail...kiss..*flails* xD
thnks for sharing~ :)
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Date: 2009-12-11 11:55 am (UTC)God that dog just killed me!
Well I will just I can do JinDa in small doses only, so hmmmmm... remind me of the promise in few weeks or so XD
Or wait till my next request post so you can allegedly make me do it XD
But oh god that dog is cute!
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Date: 2009-12-11 11:56 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-11 11:57 am (UTC)and thanks for a nice and flaily comment ♥
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Date: 2009-12-11 02:45 pm (UTC)No pressure on writing or anything O:-) but I'll definitely wait for the request post XD and definitely grab the opportunity :D