One shot: The one with cliché and ponytails

[higure]

Title: The one with cliché and ponytails
Pairing: Jin/Ueda
Rating: PG -13
Summary: Jin wants to prove he looks just fine, despite people noticing the trails of his recent influenza. Most of all he needs to show Ueda just how fine he can be.
Written for pipsqueaks , I am kind of very late. I hope you´ll find it at least a bit enjoyable.

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Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.




This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: are you trying to get me a black eye?


I am kind of presuming that CTKT is shot quite ahead and that they kind of shoot the episodes in one go even if it gets split in two weeks for the viewers. You know … And Jin practically asked for the ending. The screen cap from CTKT 139 has done it. Now, excuse me I am going to contemplate about how to really write a proper JinDa next time I attempt.

Comments

[space-sick.livejournal.com]

I just....what.... JINDA *___* I have been in need of some good Jinda. Youuuu <3

I don't think I can give you constructive criticism. I think all your writing is amazing. I really liked the flow of this. The transitions between scenes was perfect and the way you wrote the boxing with such detail. Even the kiss, so little words but so much imagery. I like that you show through writing rather than just telling.

btw, I hope you don't mind if I add you? I'd like to receive updates on when you post fics and I want to read your personal entries too because I think you're awesome and we've talked other places and I think 'she is so nice, I should ask to friend her'. We have common interests (and mutual friends) so maybe be can friends? :3

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

♥♥♥♥♥

glad I wrote this when you were in need and thank you for all those nice words *is blushing*

Anyway about friending you, sure no problem, am adding you as I type this XD I think we were "friends" when you had toastypineapple journal for a while ... so again, Hi! I´m Alex. Nice to meet you!

[space-sick.livejournal.com]

ah yay~! :D oh right, I remember I friended you on my fic journal but I never use that journal anymore XD;; Anyway, I will add you right now.

Nice to meet you too, Alex! I'm Tally.