Drabbles: Airport kisses
Dec. 30th, 2009 01:49 amTitle: Airport kisses
Pairings: Jin, Kame, Pi, Ueda, Ryo in various combinations XD
Rating: G to R
Summary: Series of drabbles connected by a prompt of airport kisses
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
A/N: For Tally. This was fun to write and so I hope you are not disappointed too much. I almost managed to avoid pron this time, almost being the key word here. Skip the last one if you are not in the mood, the rest of them is quite safe. And every author has to have "Jin leaving to US fic", sorry mine happened for your request …
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Comments? Remarks?
Pairings: Jin, Kame, Pi, Ueda, Ryo in various combinations XD
Rating: G to R
Summary: Series of drabbles connected by a prompt of airport kisses
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
A/N: For Tally. This was fun to write and so I hope you are not disappointed too much. I almost managed to avoid pron this time, almost being the key word here. Skip the last one if you are not in the mood, the rest of them is quite safe. And every author has to have "Jin leaving to US fic", sorry mine happened for your request …
This fic was moved to my writing community
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Comments? Remarks?
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Date: 2009-12-30 05:24 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-30 06:03 am (UTC)okay, I'll just start with first to the last. JIN AND KAME. I swear, you like read my mind or something. I was just thinking about how I wanted to read/maybe write something with Jin going to America and include some Akame.
What I like about this is that it's cute and hints at their feelings but has some angst-y undertones (Kame kicking the sign).
KAT-TUN´s next single still makes it to number one with no problem. Jin´s English classes are the most entertaining lectures he has ever taken. I'm not sure why I like this so much. I'll just go with this the perfect ending for that drabble.
OMG RYO/JIN *______* with Ryo kissing Jin's cheek but is still snarky. I was not expecting this but I love it.
then reaches for his head holding it in place while he place big loud kiss on his cheek.
“Here, a welcome from the entire fandom pining after you.."
excuses~ oh Ryo, you know you love Jin JUST ADMIT IT XDDD
a figure with a hat, overgrown hair and huge pants
even if I didn't know this would be Ryo & Jin before reading, I would be able to tell it's Jin that Ryo is meeting. this sentence is so wonderfully descriptive with so little words. You and your descriptions are so great~ *clings*
RYODA OH MY GOD I FLAILED WHEN BOTH OF THEIR NAMES. I GET A RYODA DRABBLE FROM MY FAVOURITE RYODA AUTHOR SQUEEEE!
aklsjd and Kanjani was sort of in it. RYODA BEING SNEAKY :D
“I didn´t miss you at all,” Ryo tells him before pressing a fleeing kiss into his hair.
so. cute.
Once in the car Ueda kisses Ryo properly.
8DDDD
I love their dialogue in the car. I just...I love this.
more flail; PIN ♥ This was soo them. And Jin dragging Pi into the bathroom for some (PG13) sexy times. I think this one was one of the longest? YAY~ I especially loved this part:
“You should probably go before your manager gets angry and sets the entire airport security into frenzy of looking for you. Yamashita Tomohisa is never late,” he says and smiles contently.
“And whose fault is it that this time I am?” Yamapi barks out but more pleased than angry.
askjklfjskl I love the characterisation :)
CAPSLOCK AGAIN BECAUSE OH MY GODDDDDD JINDA PORN AND BLOWJOBS AND DOING IT IN A PUBLIC BATHROOM. I am so glad you didn't avoid writing this. You know I love how you write Jinda (or well...now you do XD)
Jin presses a bit but then his hair are pulled painfully and Ueda´s ragged voice reaches him, dangerous.
“Don´t you dare.”
*flail*
“I just had nothing better to do today. Besides Nakamaru is my friend. And I want him to bring me a souvenir from Korea.”
favourite line ♥
I love how Jin and Ueda are the ones to see Nakamaru off
and then almost do it in the bathroomXD♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ you are amazing I love youuuu~ and I am sooo happy these drabbles are for me and that you choose the airport prompt!! Sorry about my comment being mostly capslock and a lot more flail then pointing out the parts I liked of your writing style. I LOVE ALL OF THESE SO MUCH.
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Date: 2009-12-30 07:13 pm (UTC)adsfghjksdfghjklsôfd
Thank you ♥ and I love you too!!! and this comment is pure love, really I am grinning so wide right now!!! ♥
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Date: 2009-12-30 03:49 pm (UTC)they are great as everything
I especially like first two, they are honestly the best, even though Akame isn´t really my cup of tea ... but ish good
I just hope I won´t end up like you ....having this weird relationship with Jin ... as much as I love to have "fangirling obsessions" I still like to keep my "targets of disapproval" as well
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Date: 2009-12-30 07:15 pm (UTC)I am glad you like these .... and you know Akame isn´t my cup of tea either but for an airport drabble with a bit of angst they sounded just right!
And Jin still gets most of my harsh criticism, don´t you worry, just that I now give him more love as well, and I have told you many times, I like to write him, because there is so many ways of doing it!!!
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Date: 2009-12-31 01:17 am (UTC). *grins* Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 2009-12-31 12:49 pm (UTC)About Okhura he actually had his luggage broken recently - according to what he said on SDK - I do like stupid small things like that XD
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Date: 2009-12-31 07:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-31 02:03 am (UTC)I love the sweetness and the snark in RyoDa and the JinDa = HOT!!
LOL!!! absolute win!! Thank you! :)
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Date: 2009-12-31 12:53 pm (UTC)Though I am glad you liked at least though you read ♥
Thank you
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Date: 2009-12-31 06:44 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-31 12:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-12-31 11:19 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-01-01 10:57 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-01-01 02:54 am (UTC)I think it's nice you wrote like each a point of view for a few persons, about the LA issue.
Akame, well I haven't read any Akame in such a long time, unless it's sided with RyoDa of course.
They are so grown up in this one!
JinRyo, lol at the friendship. Some things never change, indeed. Fat guy and snarky one. The talk about Jin's mother and Johhny was smart!
RyoDa, of course I liked it. Ueda without Ryo=no life. Pfff muwa ha hahahah!
PiJin : lol Subway...I never read YamapiJin but why not?
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Date: 2010-01-01 10:59 pm (UTC)I am glad you enjoyed my RyoJin XDDDD
As for the rest, Ryoda are bored without each other, clearly *winks*
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Date: 2010-01-02 10:57 am (UTC)especially ryoda and jinda!! :DD
HOT~!
thanks for sharing the love!!
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Date: 2010-01-02 07:01 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-01-02 09:21 pm (UTC)Pin was adorable, the one with Kame made my heart ache... but I have to admit the RyoDa was my favorite, I just love their dynamic.
“I didn´t miss you at all,” Ryo tells him before pressing a fleeing kiss into his hair. He then pulls him into standing and they stride to the parking lot as fast and as inconspicuously as possible. Once in the car Ueda kisses Ryo properly.
“You are such a bother. I guess my free time is going back to nonexistent again.”
“I always knew you had no life when I´m not around,” Ryo grins as him, puts his seatbelt on and Ueda stirs the car away from the airport.
Looooooove their interactions. Boys, you are fooling no one. Thank you for sharing!!!!
<3
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Date: 2010-01-02 10:24 pm (UTC)And then, ♥ Amy, you keep me happy all day long today!
As for the drabbles, they were written one right after another, in that order ... just saying XD
Kame one is probably as close as I get to "angst" which is sad in its own way XD
And well RyoDa is what I "do" and really it shows ... and this is how I like them most, most of the time anyway XD
But thank you for reading and commenting, as I said <3