Various drabbles II . . . and the train ride strikes again ;D

[higure]

Moving on, two more drabbles from THE meme, a series of snippets from the “fic never to be written" and a KoyaShige that I was asked for ;D Enjoy!

Yet another pet fic, Jin/Nakamaru, PG, 814 words
requested by crystallekil



This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: ... though this probably isn´t how a pet fic is supposed to look like

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The death of one kitchen table, Koki/Kame, NC-17!, "that baseball AU" verse, 1007 words
requested by pipsqueaks



This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: Kame is ~eager~ as one might say


Baby alert, Ryo/Ueda and a baby, PG, 895 words
finished in comments for beltenebra



This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: I would appreciate if you read the AN for this

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Shoujo manga, Koyama/Shige, NC-17 (pwp), 1293 words
written for tokeruyouna and it´s all her fault!!!



This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: Do people still warn for rimming? And if the whole fic is just that?

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This ^^ might be the most graphic thing I have ever written. @__@ I´m sorry? I am on my way to apologize to KoyaShige.

Comments are love, constructive criticism even more. I wanna see you try with the last one :p

Comments

[pipsqueaks.livejournal.com]

I still love mine to bits!!! I'm really glad you reposted it so now I can link my friend here instead \8D/

And ryoda and Rie... TT______TT SO MUCH LOVE hjughju I totally "awwwwhh!!"'d out loud and you totally know Ueda WOULD be able to tell whether a baby is a girl or boy! XD; So much love ;_; <3333333333 I'll try to read the KoyaShige for Rin asap too (I know you will say 'there's no rush' but I want to XD) ♥!!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

XXDDD I saw the post where you linked it btw, and K3U!!!

There´s no rush, though she calls it "crack rimming".

I am glad baby fic was aaaaaawwwwwwwwwh material, because babies should be awwwh material ♥!

[tokeruyouna.livejournal.com]

massages his butt cheeks with vigor
ROFL. Is this a veiled attempt at reminding me of our favorite line that includes the word “madly”?

ROFL again at this whole thing. And I haven’t even gotten to the rimming yet.

Shige´s eyes get all big and googly
ROFL THANK YOU!

Shige thinks they glow a little and look as if cut out of some true shoujo manga.
I was wondering where the title came from. It is entirely your fault that I will now associate Shige’s rimming-induced googly eyes with shoujo manga eyes! XD

I was slightly disappointed because I was entirely serious when I said I wanted nothing but rimming, but I will forgive you because you just wrote CRACK RIMMING! This was hilarious! Thank you so much!


And the baby fic, I think I have already been clear about the opening line, so.

“And she has some serious sucking power,” Ueda chuckles as his finger is pulled into the baby´s mouth and used as a very effective pacifier.

“What the hell, Ueda! It´s just a baby!”
Oh no, it is still funny. Ryo in here is just . . . IDEK but I like it.

I loved the ideas of this whole thing. It would definitely have been a monster to write well though. Anyway, I am happy I got to find out what the moral dilemma and ending were. Thanks for the snippets; I enjoyed them very much!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I swear, it´s the tram! All of it!!! The crack I mean. Ok, maybe the first one you chose was still on the train. When I opened it in my computer afterwards I almost died. And that "mad hump" has probably scarred and altered? me for life.

And sorry to disappoint you. Hmmm maybe next time. It´s pretty hard to sit down and be like, ok, rimming, now, actually That would end up like this:

Koyama kisses his but cheek, and before Shige can even blush, Koyama´s tongue slips in. Shige shivers, and Koyama takes it as a sign of encouragement and pushes in again. This time Shige´s eyes get all big and googly. Koyama can´t possibly see that, but the smirk Shige feels, as the older man´s tongue keeps on flicking in and out, is a sign he knows. When Shige moans properly for the first time, the tongue is replaced by a well lubed finger. Shige doesn´t stop moaning, and Koyama hums smugly and scrapes his teeth along Shige´s spine.
The end

OMG is that cracky again? Oo

Should I be sorry for that image? and how often do you have a chance to associate Shige´s rimming-induced eyes with something?

About he baby fic, that is exactly why I didn´t want to do it (I would kill myself over it and it would end up a monster in size as well), and why it is left like this. and rofl at my lame humour still being considered funny XDDD


I feel bad discussing serious baby fic and crack rimming in one comment
<3 you are welcome?

[tokeruyouna.livejournal.com]

that "mad hump" has probably scarred and altered? me for life
You have no idea how wrong that sounds. Though probably not as wrong as the original line. I need to find that and save it.

Haha! More crack rimming FTW!

how often do you have a chance to associate Shige´s rimming-induced eyes with something?
Let's just say it is probably fortunate that I do not read much shoujo manga. Come to think of it, any recommendations? XD

I feel bad discussing serious baby fic and crack rimming in one comment
Balance is a (the?) key to life.

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I think I do actually ... (wasn´t it something like: his cheek was pressed into the pillow, his ass high in the air (see above btw), and he was being humped, rather madly, by his boyfriend. I think I could recite it if you woke me up in the middle of the night. Something is clearly wring with me.

XDDDDD

I guess rimming that is not cracky requires background ... or so it seems given the result of this experiment.

And no recommendation. I have read one shoujo manga only. Wait was Nodame shoujo? I think not, therefore Hanadan is still the only one. So yeah, wrong address ...sorry?

a - I choose you! just like in that subtitle ...

[tokeruyouna.livejournal.com]

I found the line I copy pasted into chat by searching for "madly" and have been continuously laughing ever since. I am undecided on whether I should post our remarks related to it (preserving all fic exchange related anonymity) to share the wealth or keep the joke to ourselves. Thoughts?

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

LMAO (this too suddenly sounds weird)

I do have some ...

[tokeruyouna.livejournal.com]

What do you mean you do have some? THAT too suddenly sounds weird. I just wanted to know if you minded me reposting clips of our chats related to it (flocked) as long as no fic exchange details are revealed?

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I know. Check your email? I was a bit slow. Sorry

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

I'm not into baby fiction but I liked that one. Sorry I only read RyoDa, I have full hands with only them.

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

XD I am glad you liked it, the baby´s not theirs (yet) and so maybe it´s not that crazy?

As for the rest, I don´t think you´d like them that much anyway, so no loss XD

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

AH it's not about that, I just am not fond about babies in fictions that's all

thank you ^_^

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

HA !!!
so I finally read it !!
HA !!!

don´t as kwhy I am up at 8 46 reading fanfiction when I am dead sick and can´t even go to school
OK, OK, so if you ask I couldn´t sleep all night, I got only like 3 hours of sleep and now it´s really bright ...
I am gonna die for sure .....

anyway back to commenting on the right things

even though I know this is not a fic for me but for Pix, I still kind of consider it also written for me and I will consider all fics in that verse being also for me, because simply this is my verse, that baseball verse and that pairing I only can take (Ok and a few others but this one is like my Johnny´s OTP ?? XDDD)

so thank you too!!! and omfg you got dirty in this one, it was a real quicky and omfg so hot and all....
but I couldn´t help remembering how you were claiming never to write any smut .... *bursts out laughing*

also this Koki counters, trying to get his cool back as he wraps a hand around Kame´s waist

I totally expected something else for Koki to wrap his hand around lol.... I am so predictable ....or maybe you are so unpredictable XDDD
IN SMUT EVERYTHING IS ALLOWED
right???!!!! XDDD

so in other words I am looking forward to some other stories in this verse
also I hope you don´t mind me using it .... I hope I can pull that one drabble in it and I won´t ashame you

*thumbs up*

and look I even mamde myself a lame icon !!!!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Rofl, poor you, I am sending you my positive energy so that you get better soon!

Rofl at you having Johhny´s OTP. I see the icon, do you know how many icons with that picture is floating around? And lol at your text XDDDD

I couldn´t help remembering how you were claiming never to write any smut .... *bursts out laughing*
Joins you ... yeah, just, never say never ...

And I said I don´t mind! Stop asking and write it already!!!
And ahahhaha "quicky" !!!! Dirty *snorts* seriously it´s kitchen table sex what did you expect?

And I am glad I can still surprise you with Koki´s "motions"

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

hahah yeah, really having Johnny´s OTP ...who would have thought that I ....of all people ....have one XDDDD

anyway I knwo the icon is lame, but I actually liked that pic very much XD .... XD and I just got these text textures and this was fitting so.... XDD I used it ...might try something else next time ... I had one with "so we play a game of hide and seek" or something like that.. I can get rid of the "of hide and seek" and it would fit perfectly to our beloved verse

XDDDD

yeah, never say never .... look at me too..even though for me writing smut is always very painful XDDD

yeah, I will write it I will do.... I promise ... I won´t to write them all soon, I want to post them together

ahahaha ...motions.....god, motions.....yeah that´s the word *dies*

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

and I JUST HAD TO READ THE BABY ONE

*dies laughing*

you managed to kill me before my illness did

you win at life !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so much cheese that I couldn´t handle it ....

still I think it has some freaking funny moments

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

YAY I AM THE WINNER !!!!

and then you say it´s cheesy. It´s not! at least not in my head, like I actually felt a little sad writing the last two parts because of how I know they´d be much more complicated if the thing got written properly. But ok ... as long as it kept you entertained XDDD

[zheinpathos.livejournal.com]

;A; RyoDa with baby is adorable! And I love that cat!Maru fic ;A; So sweet and lovely.

But damn, the KoyaShige was hot. Unhygienic it may be, it's fic and it's hot. XD <3333333

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

XD agh everyone seems to like pet!Maru. So strange, I wasn´t sure at all about that one ♥


XD Crack rimming is crack rimming, what can I say XDDD sorry this might be a little cryptic, I wanted to say, thank you!
♥

[miss-jelly.livejournal.com]

ryoshige one was too too cute, at the end, I like how they both pushed each other around a bit :>

and dayum, the koyashige *_*

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I am always scared to write ryoshige because there is so many good fics about them out there and i feel inadequate even trying. (Ok that came out all kinds of wrong, I just have respect) I am so happy there are people who still enjoy it anyway.

Yeah that koyashige @__@

btw: Is it possible that I have "seen you around"? When I saw you commented, I went like,, awwww comment from miss_jelly, but then I couldn´t "place" you ...
Ok this sounds stalker-ish, sorry, just I am happy you like those XD

[miss-jelly.livejournal.com]

yeah, there are quite a few good ryoshige fics out there that kinda set the bar, but I always like the way you write ryoshige, even if it's only been a few times :)

I'm not totally sure where, but I'm pretty sure I've seen you around, too :| maybe on some one's flist?

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

<3 <3 <3

Probably, we might have few friends in common XD So I guess I´ll see you "around" XDDD

[miss-jelly.livejournal.com]

♥

That;s prolly the case, lol, I'll see you around, then xDD

[haruka21.livejournal.com]

Sorry, I only read the Koyashige, but Woah it was hot!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

XDDD It´s ok, that´s why there are separate cuts XD

Glad the hotness was there ... <3

[mighty-angel.livejournal.com]

nice drabbles<3

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thank you <3

[yamapiislove.livejournal.com]

“And she has some serious sucking power,” Ueda chuckles as his finger is pulled into the baby´s mouth and used as a very effective pacifier.

“What the hell, Ueda! It´s just a baby!”
Ryo is such a perv. Hahaha XD

Oh, the KoyaShige one...
...
...
What should I say? It's so...graphic?
Lol.
But, in a way, I quite liked it.
blame my pervy mind

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

XDDD I guess Ueda talking about sucking makes him that way <3

HAHA I KNOW I have never written anything like that and I hope i won´t ... but I am glad it was still enjoyable in a way ♥