Fanfiction: Staying overnight

[higure]

Title: Staying overnight
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: There is a word sex in there; does that make it PG 13?
Summary:  Tatsuya is on his way to Osaka, and Ryo … well he is waiting for him. The fic has kind of two shorter parts: one is Ueda´s take on things, the other one is Ryo´s take on things.
Disclaimer: I do not own these two crazy man, who love each other so much, but I used to travel by train a lot, I still do time to time, and believe me, taking a bus from Brno to Prague is like riding a train, the high way is waaaay to bumpy, so the story is mine and that road has something to do with it:)
Warning: Cheesy, fluffy, and maybe boring as well … so be gentle.
No beta ...

This is my first time writing also Ryo´s POV, until now he was usually just kind of there, now you know what he thinks, and I am sorry he is quite mushy. You can read Ueda´s or Ryo´s POV first, or you can choose and read just one, since I finally learned how to do two LJ cuts in one post …



  This fiction has been moved to pillow_verse , to read follow the LINK:  Ueda´s POV

 

I did not have a proper paper on my way to Prague, so this is how Ueda´s part looked like. I had a lot of fun trying to encode what I had actually written. Scroll down for Ryo´s thoughts if you want to ...

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for Ryo´s POV go to: Ryo´s POV



So, was it any good? Or was it too boring and the too POV too alike? Did RYo sound at least a bit believable? Comments and constructive criticism are love.
 

Comments

[nagtatagosaulap.livejournal.com]

it's cute! not boring at all. make a sequel! =)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading ... hmmm ... sequelXD will think about itXD