Fanfiction: Staying overnight

[higure]

Title: Staying overnight
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: There is a word sex in there; does that make it PG 13?
Summary:  Tatsuya is on his way to Osaka, and Ryo … well he is waiting for him. The fic has kind of two shorter parts: one is Ueda´s take on things, the other one is Ryo´s take on things.
Disclaimer: I do not own these two crazy man, who love each other so much, but I used to travel by train a lot, I still do time to time, and believe me, taking a bus from Brno to Prague is like riding a train, the high way is waaaay to bumpy, so the story is mine and that road has something to do with it:)
Warning: Cheesy, fluffy, and maybe boring as well … so be gentle.
No beta ...

This is my first time writing also Ryo´s POV, until now he was usually just kind of there, now you know what he thinks, and I am sorry he is quite mushy. You can read Ueda´s or Ryo´s POV first, or you can choose and read just one, since I finally learned how to do two LJ cuts in one post …



  This fiction has been moved to pillow_verse , to read follow the LINK:  Ueda´s POV

 

I did not have a proper paper on my way to Prague, so this is how Ueda´s part looked like. I had a lot of fun trying to encode what I had actually written. Scroll down for Ryo´s thoughts if you want to ...

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for Ryo´s POV go to: Ryo´s POV



So, was it any good? Or was it too boring and the too POV too alike? Did RYo sound at least a bit believable? Comments and constructive criticism are love.
 

Comments

[kat-tunatic.livejournal.com]

umai!..
it's really good..

thanks for posting it up!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

You are faaaast.) thanks for reading:)

[isodia.livejournal.com]

I like it a lot!!! ^___^
Nicely written and done~
more? ^_^;;

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading. More? Like in: you want more? Hmmm ... you want to know what they ended up doing, don´t you:)

[isodia.livejournal.com]

I think I have the an idea of what they might end up doing *nosebleed* But it's more of the what happens before that I want to know~

But that's just me~ ^_^;; gomen gomen~

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

... right I know, and I would only write what happens before:) I do not know how to write the "nosebleed" material:)
I will think about it, something is swirling around me again,so give it a time and you might get to know, although I am afraid I might no do them justice ...

[isodia.livejournal.com]

LOL~ I'm sorry just take your time, I hope I'm not adding to the pressure of writing something. Just do it at your own pace, I wouldn't want you to feel some kind of "pressure" or something. It's just me wanting to read more. And to be honest, it doesn't really matter if you write "what happens before" or if you write another RyoDa...

I'm just glad to read RyoDa fics that's all~ ^_^
♥

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

no no no preasure at all, I like to write these two, and i also like to read them:) so no preasure, I just ment to say, that it will take some time (but not much I am sure) till the idea is formed completely:)
♥

[isodia.livejournal.com]

lol~ then I'll be waiting for more of your fics!
Especially RyoDa! ^_^v

[oxokawaiiox.livejournal.com]

awehhhhh so fluffy; I love it, i love you for sharing sucha great fic ^^
thanks for sharing&hearts

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

♥ love you back for loving it:) I like fluffy, you can tell, right:)

[messyboo.livejournal.com]

ahahahaha~
*can't stop laughing*
these are too cute!!
thanks ne for sharing~

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

ne laugh is good, I am glad this made someone laugh:) They are a bit bakas aren´t they ... well, my friend would say, typical men!!!
Thanks for reading:)

[yamapi-konkon.livejournal.com]

WELCOME TO OSAKA, TAT-CHAN!!! :)

so cute. :) i love it. :D

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

XD thanks for loving, reading and commenting on it:)

[nagtatagosaulap.livejournal.com]

it's cute! not boring at all. make a sequel! =)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading ... hmmm ... sequelXD will think about itXD

[sufafiori.livejournal.com]

I really loved this, so gentle but both of them being so anxious. The stop starts to any romance between two people wanting to make it right. Very beautiful. And yes, I want to know how it turned out. More POV's????

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading, glad you liked it:) I might think of how it turned out:) more POV´s ? Hmmm ... I think it would be jsut two of them again. Or maybe should I write it from a point of view of someone, who is just a neutral observer? Will see, will see ...

[spread-da-love.livejournal.com]

this is so cute...

I like it...

I would like to see what they do at Osaka more... 'cause by reading what Ryo planned for them, it was too tempting... ^^

Anyway, it's just my "wild wish"

Glad that you wrote this cute piece.. ^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

what ryo planned for them or what Ryo wanted for them? ... just teasing:)
Glad you liked it and thanks for reading and commenting XD

[chiyo-tsuki.livejournal.com]

Wow! I thought I am one "hopelessly sad" writer, but it seems you've won! Just look at what you wrote on, I take my hat off now!
^_^ Thanks for sharing!
That was yummy!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

oh the sad part goes to what I wrote on:) it was an old cinema program:) I did not destroy anything, but yeah it is sad I did not have a paper on me, I guess i am not writer just yet:)
thanks for reading:) I am happy it was good for your taste buds XD

[raixas.livejournal.com]

OMG~
*massive sweeeeeeetness loading*
thats really kawaii~

thank you for sharing!^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

:) I really like them all sweet and cute :) thanks for reading XD

[ajas874.livejournal.com]

sweet....

ryo n ueda just sweet and adorable trying to ignore their desire to be with each other more and be more intimate.
wonder what ryo plan for those 3 days...

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

... isn´t it:) Hmmm Ryo just wants to be with Ueda some more, (and let´s face it he si the more horny one here ... )
*runs away to hide from shamefull thoughts*

[hanny2luv.livejournal.com]

Aww, so cute.
I love it.

Thanks for sharing. ^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading and commenting:)

[shobe12.livejournal.com]

its really good~
i like a lot..
i like both POV's :)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

glad you like it:) thanks for taking your time to read and comment ...

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

I just felt soooo good!
My heart is sending me some vibes I can't describe!
Thank you so much it's the first RyoDa I'm reading in 4 days!! Really I missed some and thank god I started again with you.
I love this cuteness! RyoDa Rabu forever!!!!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

LOL it is an honnor to hear this from a Ryoda lover like you ♥
thanks for reading and commenting, I am happy you like them like this :)

[chika1611.livejournal.com]

It's good! I like it! Keep up the good work ne?

By the way, I added you as my friend. You don't mind, do you?

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for giving my writing a shot:)
Friend - no I do not mind at all, I might add you back:)

[chika1611.livejournal.com]

Arigatou~!! *huggles* XD

[allboutp.livejournal.com]

sorry i didnt realize this fic sooner, gone for a trip huhu~
but a great fic from u!
n i lk the flow of the story ^^
thanks for this!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

:) no reason to appologize:) I am glad you came back to it:) thanks a lot ...

[cherrylady6.livejournal.com]

Aw, I liked this ♥ It's great. They both want the same but aish, they're just too dumb xDD I'm so glad Ryo made a move :D
I really loved reading their thoughts :) And I totally imagined their looks like you described them XD Ponytail, sunglasses, cap .. everything. Thank you for writing this! :D
And completely random, but homg I love the song you were listening to ^__^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thank you so much, I am so happy people find these nice:) ♥ Oh and imagining ponytails is nice, isn´t it, I just love them on men:)
and I just loooove I don´t believe you as well, it made my fav songs list the moment I heard it for the first time:)

[cherrylady6.livejournal.com]

Oh, I forgot to ask :D In which language is the thing you've written your notes on? xD It looks familiar 8D Do you speak it? :D
Haha, it is! ♥ I love them too, but the hair shouldn't be too long xD It has to be like the perfect length ♥
I went to her concert, so I'm like in love with all the songs but that's one of my favourites, too :D

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Oh it is in Czech and since I checked and you are from Germany (sorry to be a stalker) it is very likely you have seen it before:) I am Slovak, but technically I do speak (and I for sure do understand) Czech:) I study in Czech Republic and Czech and Slovak are very very similar:)
About the hair ... oh yeah, the leght is crucial, we do not want any Paddy from Kelly family as my sister sais XD
About the concert I am a bit jeaulos ... I actually didn´t get the chance to listen to Madhouse album until recently so right now I have a bit craze XD
Oh and do you consider this to be a conversation long enough for me to add you? As I was lurking on your journal I got the idea, it might be nice ... So let me know XD

[cherrylady6.livejournal.com]

XDD I love stalkers, I'm one myself ^__^
Aw, yes, I guess I've seen it before, and it reminds me of Polish xD I didn't know that it's so much alike :> You're studying law ♥ See, stalker here xD It's sure hard though ~
XDDDDDDDDDD OMG don't remind me of the Kelly Family, I have them somewhere in my memory but tried to forget about them 8D The ponytail should be like Ueda's (I know I'm biased :D) or so, I can't think of anyone else right now? -fail- xD
I went recently .. on the 4.4., I think ^^ I was just lucky she was here and I had my break ~ That's okay, she's a great singer ne ^__^
Aw, yeah, why not? You seem to be nice ;D From what I can tell. But be aware of the stalker and addicted fangirl I am XDD

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Oh, those slavic languages (besides we used to be one country)
You know, I think we all are here (I mean addicted fangirls at least), so I am adding you hapilly.
And law isn´t that hard. Seeing my sister studying japanese I think I won a lottery (or I will think so until exams come)

[cherrylady6.livejournal.com]

Yeah, used to be D; But I fail at geography xD
Haha true, well, everyone should be ♥ They're awesome. And it would be lonely not to know what everyone's speaking of :D
Really? I heard it's pretty hard, a lot of people here are breaking off their studies. Eh, she studies Japanese? Awesome :D ♥ What does she want to do with that? ~ But I guess it's reaaally difficult xD
When do you have exams? ^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

one country - based on your profile you were like 6 months when we split up, so you are forgiven:)
Law - it is hard, but I like it and it is not the hardest one out there - definetly not, it is like with everything else, person has to know her limits and dispositions, someone can do law and someone can do atomic physics:) Exams will start mid May and will last hopefully only until end of June.
Japanese - most likely she will be a translator, she studies it as a double major with English, I have no worries about her, but more than anything, she wants to go to Japan:) And it is pretty crazy, learning kanji seems stresfull :)

[cherrylady6.livejournal.com]

Oh, really? XD 6 months? Ah, I guess I wasn't too much into geography and history back then ^__^
Yeah, that's true. But I guess when you try hard from the beginning and don't let it slide, like just learning before the exams, you can do it. Gosh, I would fail so much at atomic physics D; Don't even want to think of it :D Aw, that's so soon ~
Aw, that's amazing, to fulfull a dream. And it's a great dream :D I want to go there someday, somewhen too. Haha, it is indeed stressful! D; Just too much .__.

[grashiya01.livejournal.com]

fluffy~fluffy~~
love it!! :)
and yeah, more!!

thanks for sharing the love~~

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

This actually has "more" I wrote a sequel for this one, I think it´s called Of plans and phone calls ... if you want to read it, go to my ficlist, it´s there somewhere!

And this one was totally fluffy! Argh ... they don´t do them like that anymore ...

Thank you again for leaving me comments on these!!!