Fanfiction: Staying overnight

[higure]

Title: Staying overnight
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: There is a word sex in there; does that make it PG 13?
Summary:  Tatsuya is on his way to Osaka, and Ryo … well he is waiting for him. The fic has kind of two shorter parts: one is Ueda´s take on things, the other one is Ryo´s take on things.
Disclaimer: I do not own these two crazy man, who love each other so much, but I used to travel by train a lot, I still do time to time, and believe me, taking a bus from Brno to Prague is like riding a train, the high way is waaaay to bumpy, so the story is mine and that road has something to do with it:)
Warning: Cheesy, fluffy, and maybe boring as well … so be gentle.
No beta ...

This is my first time writing also Ryo´s POV, until now he was usually just kind of there, now you know what he thinks, and I am sorry he is quite mushy. You can read Ueda´s or Ryo´s POV first, or you can choose and read just one, since I finally learned how to do two LJ cuts in one post …



  This fiction has been moved to pillow_verse , to read follow the LINK:  Ueda´s POV

 

I did not have a proper paper on my way to Prague, so this is how Ueda´s part looked like. I had a lot of fun trying to encode what I had actually written. Scroll down for Ryo´s thoughts if you want to ...

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for Ryo´s POV go to: Ryo´s POV



So, was it any good? Or was it too boring and the too POV too alike? Did RYo sound at least a bit believable? Comments and constructive criticism are love.
 

Comments

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thank you so much, I am so happy people find these nice:) ♥ Oh and imagining ponytails is nice, isn´t it, I just love them on men:)
and I just loooove I don´t believe you as well, it made my fav songs list the moment I heard it for the first time:)

[cherrylady6.livejournal.com]

Oh, I forgot to ask :D In which language is the thing you've written your notes on? xD It looks familiar 8D Do you speak it? :D
Haha, it is! ♥ I love them too, but the hair shouldn't be too long xD It has to be like the perfect length ♥
I went to her concert, so I'm like in love with all the songs but that's one of my favourites, too :D

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Oh it is in Czech and since I checked and you are from Germany (sorry to be a stalker) it is very likely you have seen it before:) I am Slovak, but technically I do speak (and I for sure do understand) Czech:) I study in Czech Republic and Czech and Slovak are very very similar:)
About the hair ... oh yeah, the leght is crucial, we do not want any Paddy from Kelly family as my sister sais XD
About the concert I am a bit jeaulos ... I actually didn´t get the chance to listen to Madhouse album until recently so right now I have a bit craze XD
Oh and do you consider this to be a conversation long enough for me to add you? As I was lurking on your journal I got the idea, it might be nice ... So let me know XD

[cherrylady6.livejournal.com]

XDD I love stalkers, I'm one myself ^__^
Aw, yes, I guess I've seen it before, and it reminds me of Polish xD I didn't know that it's so much alike :> You're studying law ♥ See, stalker here xD It's sure hard though ~
XDDDDDDDDDD OMG don't remind me of the Kelly Family, I have them somewhere in my memory but tried to forget about them 8D The ponytail should be like Ueda's (I know I'm biased :D) or so, I can't think of anyone else right now? -fail- xD
I went recently .. on the 4.4., I think ^^ I was just lucky she was here and I had my break ~ That's okay, she's a great singer ne ^__^
Aw, yeah, why not? You seem to be nice ;D From what I can tell. But be aware of the stalker and addicted fangirl I am XDD

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Oh, those slavic languages (besides we used to be one country)
You know, I think we all are here (I mean addicted fangirls at least), so I am adding you hapilly.
And law isn´t that hard. Seeing my sister studying japanese I think I won a lottery (or I will think so until exams come)

[cherrylady6.livejournal.com]

Yeah, used to be D; But I fail at geography xD
Haha true, well, everyone should be ♥ They're awesome. And it would be lonely not to know what everyone's speaking of :D
Really? I heard it's pretty hard, a lot of people here are breaking off their studies. Eh, she studies Japanese? Awesome :D ♥ What does she want to do with that? ~ But I guess it's reaaally difficult xD
When do you have exams? ^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

one country - based on your profile you were like 6 months when we split up, so you are forgiven:)
Law - it is hard, but I like it and it is not the hardest one out there - definetly not, it is like with everything else, person has to know her limits and dispositions, someone can do law and someone can do atomic physics:) Exams will start mid May and will last hopefully only until end of June.
Japanese - most likely she will be a translator, she studies it as a double major with English, I have no worries about her, but more than anything, she wants to go to Japan:) And it is pretty crazy, learning kanji seems stresfull :)

[cherrylady6.livejournal.com]

Oh, really? XD 6 months? Ah, I guess I wasn't too much into geography and history back then ^__^
Yeah, that's true. But I guess when you try hard from the beginning and don't let it slide, like just learning before the exams, you can do it. Gosh, I would fail so much at atomic physics D; Don't even want to think of it :D Aw, that's so soon ~
Aw, that's amazing, to fulfull a dream. And it's a great dream :D I want to go there someday, somewhen too. Haha, it is indeed stressful! D; Just too much .__.