He knew - chapter 2

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 2
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta
this fic was moved to pillow_verse, to read follow the link: ( and so there are the days we fight )




I did my best on this one, rewrote it twice, but I am still not happy. It didn´t turn out how I imagined. I still don´t like it. 

As I said, the middle part of this multichap has been written and most of it has been at least sketched and so the updates will be quite fast. But I still have no idea how it will end. Also first 3 chapters were supposed to be just small flashbacks in the original oneshot and it is because they got so long, it became a multichap. I hope I am not stretching this too much, please bear with me.

Comments

[brown-cinnamon.livejournal.com]

Hmmm~
I'm being in reading fic mode atm, so I comment pretty fast :3

So, I was reminded how epic Ryo!Mr. X was. The bald baby ♥
And Tatchan came out of nowhere, curses, etc ♥
Lol!

Anyhow, I love how this fic turns into. Misunderstanding and such lead to dramas, and tragically that's what people are waiting for or else most Ryoda fics won't be full of angsty dramas.

I enjoy the update so much! Thanks for this :))

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

sorry to disturb your work :)
Hmmm ... I think Ueda will say it for me later on, but this one misunderstanding isn´t a cause of all bad and good to come, although yes, it had an impact...
"the drama need" - I tend to wirte those two all sweet and fluffy and I just felt like writing something else for a change, hopefully I won´t over do it ...
Anyways, thanks for stalking me:)