He knew - chapter 2

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 2
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta
this fic was moved to pillow_verse, to read follow the link: ( and so there are the days we fight )




I did my best on this one, rewrote it twice, but I am still not happy. It didn´t turn out how I imagined. I still don´t like it. 

As I said, the middle part of this multichap has been written and most of it has been at least sketched and so the updates will be quite fast. But I still have no idea how it will end. Also first 3 chapters were supposed to be just small flashbacks in the original oneshot and it is because they got so long, it became a multichap. I hope I am not stretching this too much, please bear with me.

Comments

[brown-cinnamon.livejournal.com]

Hmmm~
I'm being in reading fic mode atm, so I comment pretty fast :3

So, I was reminded how epic Ryo!Mr. X was. The bald baby ♥
And Tatchan came out of nowhere, curses, etc ♥
Lol!

Anyhow, I love how this fic turns into. Misunderstanding and such lead to dramas, and tragically that's what people are waiting for or else most Ryoda fics won't be full of angsty dramas.

I enjoy the update so much! Thanks for this :))

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

sorry to disturb your work :)
Hmmm ... I think Ueda will say it for me later on, but this one misunderstanding isn´t a cause of all bad and good to come, although yes, it had an impact...
"the drama need" - I tend to wirte those two all sweet and fluffy and I just felt like writing something else for a change, hopefully I won´t over do it ...
Anyways, thanks for stalking me:)

[ramadiii.livejournal.com]

I really like it, it has a nice feeling to it when you realize that Tatsuya got stronger from the whole thing ;)
Can't wait to read the rest <3

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading and commenting ... I don´think you will have to wait for a long time.

[dayenniez.livejournal.com]

Hi, I think this is good..
and glad you'll post the updates soon..

"It was very hard to fall out of love, when the other person is so high in your eyes"
I love this!!

waiting for the next 1, thanks!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Thank you ... that sentence is so true (I know it´s weird to say that when I wrote it but ...)
I won´t keep you waiting (much)

[meikoxlove.livejournal.com]

I wonder if and how Ueda will find out that Ryo-chan hasn't read his notebook...

I liked it! Looking forward to the next chapter!! ^__^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading and commenting ... and for liking it of course ... the note will be "lost" for quite some time ... (sorry for a teaser)

[jindaluver.livejournal.com]

*ueda!!ryo didn't read ur book yet!he didn't know.*
i really want to tell tat-chan that.
anyway,thanks for updating,really like ur story.
will be waiting for next ^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading:) I am sorry, I am beeing mean to Tat-chan ...

[raixas.livejournal.com]

ahhh~
hanging~ pleaseeeeeeeee update soon ne? *puppy eyes*
i'll be waiting patiently for the next chap then!
thank you very much for updating!^^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Did I leave you hanging? I am sorry then? I didn´t mean to. Thanks for reading this and I promise I will update soon (like tomorow?)

[raixas.livejournal.com]

it feel like hanging to me *bricked*
no no no~ don't be sorry~
a cliffhanger is a need for a multichap? *smacked head*
i'll wait for tomorrow then~ :DD

[miruiki.livejournal.com]

waaa~ Ueda's giving up on Ryo??
NUU~~~~~

waaa~ this was good~
im waiting for the next ;)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Ueda and Ryo have a long way to go ... thanks for reading and commenting:) next should be up tomorrow, or I hope so:)

[red-aka-merah.livejournal.com]

Really nice story...
Thanks for sharing....;)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

really nice of you to read ... thank you

[oxokawaiiox.livejournal.com]

ne, dun be that hard on yourself bout this chapter, it's fine really, I like this chapter ^^
awehh Tat-chan, has become stronger ne? awesome : )
hehe thanks and will read your next update when I can!!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thnak you for reading and liking it :)

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

every problem in relationship is caused by the lack of communication ...
I think this is true!!! oh well...let´ ssee whats gonna happen in 3rd chapter

btw: do you want that antique and kiiroi namida osts ??

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

hmmm ... haven´t thought about it, I guess, just not right now, I need to clean up my computer a bit, will you keep it for me for a while?
And you know, if someone lacks communication it´s those two:)