He knew - chapter 2

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 2
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta
this fic was moved to pillow_verse, to read follow the link: ( and so there are the days we fight )




I did my best on this one, rewrote it twice, but I am still not happy. It didn´t turn out how I imagined. I still don´t like it. 

As I said, the middle part of this multichap has been written and most of it has been at least sketched and so the updates will be quite fast. But I still have no idea how it will end. Also first 3 chapters were supposed to be just small flashbacks in the original oneshot and it is because they got so long, it became a multichap. I hope I am not stretching this too much, please bear with me.

Comments

[dayenniez.livejournal.com]

Hi, I think this is good..
and glad you'll post the updates soon..

"It was very hard to fall out of love, when the other person is so high in your eyes"
I love this!!

waiting for the next 1, thanks!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Thank you ... that sentence is so true (I know it´s weird to say that when I wrote it but ...)
I won´t keep you waiting (much)