He knew - chapter 6
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Title: He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 6
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: the mirror stays silent, and your eyes are weary
I think you have realized that we changed POVs. I found it appropriate for this chapter. I came up with the mirror scene in order to keep up with my good tradition of jumping straight into a conversation. By the way, how are you all liking that.(And yes I know this sentence is complete grammatical mess) Ryo is a bit girlish here, however this chapter takes place another half a year after the last one, so he was struggling for quite some time. I just wanted to show how whipped up he is, how badly he needs to let out his emotions by now. I hope you will forgive him for being selfish and jerk. By the way, I think with this chapter, the fic has moved into it´s second half.
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 6
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta
This fic was moved to my writing community
pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: the mirror stays silent, and your eyes are weary
I think you have realized that we changed POVs. I found it appropriate for this chapter. I came up with the mirror scene in order to keep up with my good tradition of jumping straight into a conversation. By the way, how are you all liking that.(And yes I know this sentence is complete grammatical mess) Ryo is a bit girlish here, however this chapter takes place another half a year after the last one, so he was struggling for quite some time. I just wanted to show how whipped up he is, how badly he needs to let out his emotions by now. I hope you will forgive him for being selfish and jerk. By the way, I think with this chapter, the fic has moved into it´s second half.
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Date: 2009-04-30 08:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-01 03:44 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-30 11:28 pm (UTC)I hope the two face each other again soon...
and...poor Maru... T__T
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Date: 2009-05-01 03:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-30 11:30 pm (UTC)I had to stop myself from crying while reading Ryo's letter. And somehow I've never felt so bad for Ryo before because usually it's Ueda but now *wants to huggles Ryo so badly*...
I'll surely be waiting for the next chapter! ^_^
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Date: 2009-05-01 03:46 pm (UTC)Thank you for reading and liking ♥
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Date: 2009-04-30 11:38 pm (UTC)This chapter is waay too awesome.
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Date: 2009-05-01 03:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-01 01:22 am (UTC)*hugs*
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Date: 2009-05-01 03:49 pm (UTC)Thank you for reading ♥
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Date: 2009-05-01 01:52 am (UTC)I like how you said Ryo was teached something from witnessing Maru and Ueda's relationship; yes the sweet relationship.
But Marus is being mature. He knows, lol...won't say much.
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Date: 2009-05-01 03:51 pm (UTC)I thinks so too:) And I will use the soncept again, I think, but maybe more cheerfull girly Ryo will come next?
Thank you for keeping up with my story:)
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Date: 2009-05-01 04:20 pm (UTC)And I mean taught, not teached. Geez my grammar sucks these days
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Date: 2009-05-01 04:39 pm (UTC)And no worries as long as you get the message across XD
I just got awsome banners from okimiyage ... sooooo happy, gonna use one of them right away:)
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Date: 2009-05-01 04:43 pm (UTC)I want to change my layout....I will later when i found one that suits my actual mood.
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Date: 2009-05-01 02:45 am (UTC)finally...finally ryo confessed to tat-chan.
now,i wonder what will tat-chan do?
and poor maru too *pouts*
why oh why maru is so nice letting tat-chan keep the letter?
oh,well...if not tat-chan won't know ryo's feeling towards him rite..
thanks for this.love this chapter ^^
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Date: 2009-05-01 03:53 pm (UTC)I think Maru is an adult big way, I think he knows Ueda would always wonder what was in the letter. It´s better he knows:)
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Date: 2009-05-01 03:14 am (UTC)I wonder what happens now. What will Ueda do?
I wonder why Maru told Ueda to keep the letter. Is it because in his heart he knows Ueda still loves Ryo or that he believes in the strength of Ueda's love for him?
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Date: 2009-05-01 03:54 pm (UTC)Thanks for reaing :)
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Date: 2009-05-01 04:18 am (UTC)FINALLY. THE RYODA HAS STARTED.
ILU!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. ITS OFFICIALLY MY FAVEORITE.
now Uebo's confused.
make the right decision! Go for ryo!!!LOL XD.Im wondering who Maru's going to be with this o.O
but then he's still kind. Probably if Uebo was my boyfriend and a person I know suddenly confessed to him with a letter, i'd help Ueda tear it, burn it and throw it away o.O But Maru's still kind-hearterd~
I really can't wait for the next~!! it's getting super interesting~!! :)
*sorru for the uber long comment. XD It was just too amazing HAHA.
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Date: 2009-05-01 03:57 pm (UTC)Thanks for keeping up with me:)
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Date: 2009-05-01 05:53 am (UTC)poor selfish ryo~
thats a really great chap you know~
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Date: 2009-05-01 04:01 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-01 06:22 am (UTC)i l0ve ry0's confession..:)
cant wait for more..:)
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Date: 2009-05-01 04:02 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-01 06:42 am (UTC)Finally Ryo had confessed his feelings towards Tatchan..
that's good even though it was late..
Maru was very nice here.. :)
Make up your mind Tatchan!!
both Maru and Ryo are good, but who's the one can completed you??
Waiting for the next dear~~
Thanks!!
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Date: 2009-05-01 04:04 pm (UTC)Thank you for reading:)
I like Maru, I like writing him nice, I guess.
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Date: 2009-05-01 03:22 pm (UTC)Go , Go, GO!!!
hopefully tatsuya will fall asleep very soon !!!! XD
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Date: 2009-05-01 04:05 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-01 03:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-01 04:11 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading though.
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Date: 2009-05-01 04:22 pm (UTC)this chap is awesome... so much that can be understood from this...
thank you so much for the chap :D
Looking forward to the next one :DDD
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Date: 2009-05-01 04:40 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-10 03:45 pm (UTC)gahhhhhh I was right drama starts!!
omg that love letter was just one of the best! owh gawd it made me squeal likecrazy that I woke up my sister xD
I got hit on the head later when she came bursting into my room >__<
thanks~
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Date: 2009-05-10 05:41 pm (UTC)I am soooo glad you like this letter:) so thanks again ...