He knew - chapter 6
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Title: He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 6
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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I think you have realized that we changed POVs. I found it appropriate for this chapter. I came up with the mirror scene in order to keep up with my good tradition of jumping straight into a conversation. By the way, how are you all liking that.(And yes I know this sentence is complete grammatical mess) Ryo is a bit girlish here, however this chapter takes place another half a year after the last one, so he was struggling for quite some time. I just wanted to show how whipped up he is, how badly he needs to let out his emotions by now. I hope you will forgive him for being selfish and jerk. By the way, I think with this chapter, the fic has moved into it´s second half.
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 6
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta
This fic was moved to my writing community
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I think you have realized that we changed POVs. I found it appropriate for this chapter. I came up with the mirror scene in order to keep up with my good tradition of jumping straight into a conversation. By the way, how are you all liking that.(And yes I know this sentence is complete grammatical mess) Ryo is a bit girlish here, however this chapter takes place another half a year after the last one, so he was struggling for quite some time. I just wanted to show how whipped up he is, how badly he needs to let out his emotions by now. I hope you will forgive him for being selfish and jerk. By the way, I think with this chapter, the fic has moved into it´s second half.
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Date: 2009-05-01 06:22 am (UTC)i l0ve ry0's confession..:)
cant wait for more..:)
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Date: 2009-05-01 04:02 pm (UTC)