He knew - chapter 10 ( last one? YOU DECIDE!)

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 10
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
Beta-ed by chivakaza, thanks a lot:) 


This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link:  you still knew and I was left behind, wondering

[Poll #1396734][Poll #1396734] (beta for this chapter): Thank you for this, I am sorry I gave up on it myself. But you know, maybe we should start using a different color. Blue, or green, or just something not red!!! It might lessen the shock. And thanks for supporting my “evil idea”.

Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.
 
* edit: just letting you know, looking at the results, the final verdict is out, I will continue, thanks for voting :)

Comments

[resha-hime.livejournal.com]

Hahahaha. There's no way I'm going to let you end it here! We still haven't seen Ryo's side of things!

Ueda is really stubborn here. I suppose it's something that happens naturally when you've been through so many things. He needs to learn how to be the innocent Ueda he used to be and Ryo just totally needs to make amends by nurturing Ueda's true self, or so I think anyway. XD Maru... made the right choice. I see where he's coming from, and although I strongly believe there are more ways than one to love a person, it doesn't mean anything unless it's the way I want to be loved?

Anyway, I'm totally rooting for the classic ending. MORE I SAY! =D

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

:) I tried:) But it seems not a lot of people are fond of open endings:)
I like what you said about Ueda going back to being innocent an about Ryo nurturing his feelings. You have a point there.
But I get why Ueda is clinging so. That was a long relationship and he liked it, he felt good in it and he worked on it, to be that way. It´s hard to give up on something like that:)
And I really wanted to make people understand why is Maru doing it, so ...
anyway thanks for reading and giving me a piece of your mind:)