He knew - chapter 10 ( last one? YOU DECIDE!)

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 10
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
Beta-ed by chivakaza, thanks a lot:) 


This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link:  you still knew and I was left behind, wondering

[Poll #1396734][Poll #1396734] (beta for this chapter): Thank you for this, I am sorry I gave up on it myself. But you know, maybe we should start using a different color. Blue, or green, or just something not red!!! It might lessen the shock. And thanks for supporting my “evil idea”.

Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.
 
* edit: just letting you know, looking at the results, the final verdict is out, I will continue, thanks for voting :)

Comments

[miruiki.livejournal.com]

FIRST!!! *reads*

[miruiki.livejournal.com]

YES YOU SHOULD CONTINUE.

HOMG~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
PLEASE UEDA PLEASE.
OPEN YOUR HEART TO RYO PLEASEEEEE. XD

[resha-hime.livejournal.com]

Hahahaha. There's no way I'm going to let you end it here! We still haven't seen Ryo's side of things!

Ueda is really stubborn here. I suppose it's something that happens naturally when you've been through so many things. He needs to learn how to be the innocent Ueda he used to be and Ryo just totally needs to make amends by nurturing Ueda's true self, or so I think anyway. XD Maru... made the right choice. I see where he's coming from, and although I strongly believe there are more ways than one to love a person, it doesn't mean anything unless it's the way I want to be loved?

Anyway, I'm totally rooting for the classic ending. MORE I SAY! =D

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

:) I tried:) But it seems not a lot of people are fond of open endings:)
I like what you said about Ueda going back to being innocent an about Ryo nurturing his feelings. You have a point there.
But I get why Ueda is clinging so. That was a long relationship and he liked it, he felt good in it and he worked on it, to be that way. It´s hard to give up on something like that:)
And I really wanted to make people understand why is Maru doing it, so ...
anyway thanks for reading and giving me a piece of your mind:)

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

I knew that!! I knew that!!
I told you what the result of this poll is going tobe like...and you didin´t believe me
haaaaaaaaaa XD but whatever ...

but still I think there is no point in reading something when you actually know the ending ... I mean ....you understnad what I mean, ne? XDDD

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Unless you like the story (or the writer XD) so much, that you want to know, how will the caracters get there:) But I get what you are saying ... I wonder if we find at least one more person going for no:)

[red-aka-merah.livejournal.com]

Really really really hope you'll continue........~pretty pretty pretty please~
It's really sad when two person in love couldn't be together...................
Anyway thanks for sharing this one..........hope i could have a friend like Maru~so understanding~

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading and supporting me, it seems by the poll results, I will finish this off after all. I wonder what even made me ask ...

[shobe12.livejournal.com]

please continue..:)

tat-chan should really open his heat to ryo
and he should stop being stubborn..

i really find maru sweet in here..
his so unselfish..

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Is he? Even if he is saying he is doing this because of him? Oh well:)
Thanks for reading:) by the way the poll is going, I will finish this, or so it seems:)

[alaruber.livejournal.com]

aaawwww...
even though the ending is expected but i also wanna just wanna see it :)

thanks for the fic

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Yeah, and that should make me happy, right. You wondering how it will be written. Thanks for reading:)

[mizzakachan.livejournal.com]

i really love to know the ending from ur pov. i can do my imagination later... but I'm reading ur fic and it is no fun for me to put my crappy idea in ur lovely fic...

dakara, onegaishimasu...!!! *bowing 90 degrees*

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

LOL you actually seemed a bit mad about me even suggesting it. You sounded like one of my friends when she is is explaining something completely obvious to someone completely oblivious and she is loosing her temper:) I might be wrong though:)
But I am honored, you still wanna know, so thank you and thank you for reading.

sumimasen deshita ... it seems I will continue:)

[jindaluver.livejournal.com]

i voted for...RYODA!
eh,there is no such a poll abt them?
hehe XD

do continue...onegai~

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

well it doesn´t really need to be one now, does it? XD
Thanks for reading and voting:)

[gaillen.livejournal.com]

Hi, sorry I haven't commented before but I really do love this story. It makes so much sense and I'm sad about MaruDa breaking up...which was my first OTP before RyoDa. I love them just as much as RyoDa. But I understand now why Maru did what he did.

And I voted for YES! More! But I don't think they actually have to get together in the end at least you don't have to say it but I really think Ryo and Ueda should make amends and at least "apologize" to each other. Make sure none of this is hanging over them anymore.

I hope you understand. There just needs to be more but it doesn't necessarily have to be them getting together at the end. Just some kind of....conclusion between them that isn't like this. That's why I voted YES. Just wanted to tell you what I think. :P

And thanks again for the story...I really like it.

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I am blushing... you have been reading this story? I am honored ´cause I adore your stories ... Also I am relieved it makes sense and that I was able to explain why the break up happened. I was sad about it too. But ...

I do realize there is still so much hanging in the air between Ryo and Ueda, just that with this chapter, maybe because this was a MaruDa story too, I felt like it could end. Like what happens after this is a new begining, new story in it´s own way. hence the new notebook.

But I will wrap it up properly, so those two can finaly sort their relationship out a bit.
So thank you so much for letting me know what you think, for giving me an extra reason to continue. And of course for reading:)

[yamapi-konkon.livejournal.com]

Aww... I love it.



AWWW.. It's ending?! :(



thank you~

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

really? ... then awww Thank you:)
yes it´s slowly ending but looking at the poll, this chapter is not a complete end just yet. So please keep up with me for a little longer.

[pwoth.livejournal.com]

CONTINUE! PLEEASSE!
and great chappie ^w^

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

oh thanks and the poll is saying I will:))

[lil-brooke.livejournal.com]

rooting for a classical ending...
i wanna know how it's all gonna end..
and damn ueda 4 being so stubborn...LOL!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I like stubborn people:)
Tahnks for reading and rooting.)

[brown-cinnamon.livejournal.com]

So, honestly speaking, I chose the second option.
But then, i'm ok with both, sice I want the author herself to make the choice, since well... It's nice to read an unpredictable thing, nott he predictable one :)

Thanks for the update, and glad that you have a beta reader now :p

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Beta - yeah my sister have volonteered for this chappie, I don´t think it´s permanent, but i may "use" her again.:)
About the ending, I really was tempted to finish it, but I wasn´t 100% sure, so that´s where the poll came from. and people apparently want to see this through, so I will.
But I found someone who wants an open ending, nice to know, next time (if there is ever a next time) i won´t be hesitating with an open ending if I feel like it:)
Thanks for reading and letting me know by the way :)

[messyboo.livejournal.com]

uwaaa!!!!
ur killing me!!!!
don't stop now!!!
bring the classical ending~~~

anyway, thanks ne for the update~~~

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

you are welcome, thanks for reading:)
And once again, I love your choice of icon, especialy because I hit snooze like 10 times today.)
the poll sais ... the classical ending it is ...

[lunatic-wing.livejournal.com]

please continue please please!!!
it's now for Ryo turn to fight for his love ne ><

i really love this fic ne.

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Oh thank you for loving it and reading it in the first place ... I love you back.)

[isodia.livejournal.com]

Sucks that I have to leave and not be able to read TWO chapters on time!! *cries*
But alas... I'm sorry but you're gonna have to write more~ ^_^;;
I hope that you'll continue this because I won't be able to get over this fic if it ends like this.. ^_^;;

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

well, your wish was granted actually, since the next chapter is out allready.)
thanks for reading and come back when you have time, there is no need to rush.)

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

Well thank god the poll went well I would have been so sad to see it ending like that!
Of course we know where it's going, but it's not where it's going that matters! It's HOW it's going! Can't you see the difference! My heart aches so much but you described it so well and I love you for writing this so well (yeah abuse of same words) cause now I feel like after an actual good break up. I mean when Ueda finally stopped trying to reason Maru, when he realized they were over but could still be friends, you know that feeling of letting go, almost peacefully? Well that's the one feeling I get. Amazing beyond words can properly explain.
And adding a follw up to the break up, why do you apologize for that? It was really nice, Maru could finally break it smoothly with Ueda, and rectify the thing about the notebook. And I adOre when they're talking in riddles!!
He had a tour to attend and a heart to catch I loved that phrase so much! So beautiful! I think your thesis will go smoothly your english is just awesome!
/runs off again to read the next part\

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

aahhhh ... *blushing now* ...

I get what you are saing about the ending, and maybe I just didn´t explain it properly ... It was not because we all know where it´s headed I wanted to finish this now ... anyway ... I think it was just a writer´s whimp:)
And thank you for all those small compliments:) I hope my english won´t let me down during the thesis writing:)
*runs of to read your next comment:)*

[oxokawaiiox.livejournal.com]

ohhhh - emmmmm - GEEEEEEEE~!
omg, omg, *breathes* so? so? so!!!! Tat-chan is going to get things clear w/ ryo rightttt???? omg hopefully!!!
ahhhh~~~ imma stop here for today, b/c i cant too much in one day x___X

it still sucks that tat-chan is still mad at ryo. and he even hates him!!! rawr! now im starting to change the my decision from before. instead of wanting maru and tat-chan to not seperate, i thinks it's best for him to have a stronger boyfriend!
man if this (above) is what you wanted to reach out to readers, you TOTALLY nailed the thing! hahahahha, yeyeyeyeyeyy!!! hopefully drama soon ends x____X

LOL, oh yeah i did the poll even though i knew that there are still a few chapters for me to read xDDD i still want you to end w/ a classical ending xD it's b/c now i OFFICIALLY love your writing, mannn i dun wanna miss any more of your updates!

anyways jyaaa~~~
see you when i get back to this series : )

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

*blushes madly all the way up to ear lobes*
Anyway I am officially very happy you like my writing:) You really read a lot yesterday ...:) Looking forward to you coming back allready:) ♥

Btw do you think he really hates Ryo? *winks*
again thank you for reading this and never forgetting to comment and "see you" soon:)