He knew - chapter 10 ( last one? YOU DECIDE!)

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 10
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
Beta-ed by chivakaza, thanks a lot:) 


This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link:  you still knew and I was left behind, wondering

[Poll #1396734][Poll #1396734] (beta for this chapter): Thank you for this, I am sorry I gave up on it myself. But you know, maybe we should start using a different color. Blue, or green, or just something not red!!! It might lessen the shock. And thanks for supporting my “evil idea”.

Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.
 
* edit: just letting you know, looking at the results, the final verdict is out, I will continue, thanks for voting :)

Comments

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

hh I couldn´t resist and I just have to answer this XD
I was the other one choosing the NO option....
I just love open endings...I mean .. there is no point in reading predictable things XD

and I think you don´t need to worry about your grammar much ...mine isn´t great as well....coz obviously I am also not a native speaker

[brown-cinnamon.livejournal.com]

Omgggg~
You are? Kyaaa~
Why did I squeal like this? lol

It's not like there's not point, but reading an open ending looks...fun. At leadt for me it is. Haha...

Omg, I'm gladddd knowing there's at least another person thinking the same as I do. My buddy ♥

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

haha
sometimes its good to squeal XD
*squeals too*

and yeah,you are probably right ....I will probably continue reading this and it won´t be becasue I may be beta again or that the writer is actually my sister, but I want to know what´s going to happen next
...but still....now ..it´s just totally obvious that it´s going to be ryoda XD

with open ending everyone could think about own fave ending ....so yeah ...exactly like you said . its more fun XD

I write open endings often XD they are just better I guess

[brown-cinnamon.livejournal.com]

Lololol~
For me, I don't really write open ending for my fics, but I'd rather make it a bit vague. Like the final pairing is clearly seen, but how they'll turn into? It's pretty vague. I don't know to explain it more, uh... Hahaha... XD

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

uhum... I know what you mean .... but I still consider that an open ending ... XD
it doesn´t really matter if you determine some particular pairing or not with your writing but if someone can contemplate what could be next is enough to make it open ending XD

oh, well..... I think I am going to check your fics XD

[brown-cinnamon.livejournal.com]

Haha, right... :p
Omg, I love this, it's rare to have someone having that kind of thought, so it's asfdgfhgj ♥

Hoho... Mind me warn you that the list is...long. and heck I have a fic which isn't posted here too. It's..long. Lol.

Ok, I'd better stop spamming this page.. *runs*

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

haha, yeah that´s really nice to meet someone similar ...
but I am with all five for unusual and open endings XD

and yeah .. I have already seen the list of your fics ...and I must say : WOW.... so many .. I am really jealous .. I am really slow writer ... and strange so I don´t write much ...
also to be honest I don´t really read Johnny´s fic ..that´s not my former fandom ... I like Johnnys though XD
I read only my sis´s fics coz I am curious how she writes XD
but I am curious about yours so maybe you could reccomend me some ...

and don´t worry I am sure my sister doesn´t mind if we spam a little like this XD

[brown-cinnamon.livejournal.com]

Lol, I might fail you with what I've written.
Honestly speaking, I'm such a bad updater. There were times when I update real fast. And on the other time I don't update for almost 3 motnhs WHUT?. Haha...
I don't know which one to recommend, really. Or rather, I don't know which one to recommend ^^;;

Oh, and mind if I add you? With my other journal, not this one.

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

hh don´t worry about updates ..
I have my OF running ...or better to say ...it´s running in my head
I have written only 2 prolouges up till now but I have so many ideas and still.. I am not able to write and update anything XD

OK so I will choose randomly and make sure to comment .. XD I am really curious I am sure they are all very good !!! I will try some with those guys I like the most from Johnnys XD

and YAY for a new friend .. go ahead adding me
... I will gladly add you back ... but be warned : I ramble a lot ! XD
hopefully you will endure it

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

lol What the hell just happened here? that´s funny your little talk. I don´t mind you spamming, so don´t take me wrong,it was actually pretty amusing, because your entire conversation showed on my email:)

Glad you and my sister klicked, and welcome to our litle world:)

Besides, she managed to ask you about friending before I did, and I wanted to, ´cause we had some nice conversations during this fic, I just don´t know which one to add :)
Hmmm .... should I be jealous? XO

[dephi.livejournal.com]

Hiohoho..
And that's the essence of spamming one's entry ;)

And about adding, of courseee~
Better adding this account, maybe? Since brown_cinnamon is where I keep my fics, so usually the one adding there is the one watching over my fics, I guess? hahaha... XDDD

Added, anyway :3