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Title: He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 10
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: you still knew and I was left behind, wondering
[Poll #1396734][Poll #1396734] (beta for this chapter): Thank you for this, I am sorry I gave up on it myself. But you know, maybe we should start using a different color. Blue, or green, or just something not red!!! It might lessen the shock. And thanks for supporting my “evil idea”.
Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.
* edit: just letting you know, looking at the results, the final verdict is out, I will continue, thanks for voting :)
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 10
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
Beta-ed by
chivakaza, thanks a lot:) This fic was moved to my writing community
pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: you still knew and I was left behind, wondering
[Poll #1396734][Poll #1396734] (beta for this chapter): Thank you for this, I am sorry I gave up on it myself. But you know, maybe we should start using a different color. Blue, or green, or just something not red!!! It might lessen the shock. And thanks for supporting my “evil idea”.
Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.
* edit: just letting you know, looking at the results, the final verdict is out, I will continue, thanks for voting :)
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Date: 2009-05-12 01:22 am (UTC)Of course we know where it's going, but it's not where it's going that matters! It's HOW it's going! Can't you see the difference! My heart aches so much but you described it so well and I love you for writing this so well (yeah abuse of same words) cause now I feel like after an actual good break up. I mean when Ueda finally stopped trying to reason Maru, when he realized they were over but could still be friends, you know that feeling of letting go, almost peacefully? Well that's the one feeling I get. Amazing beyond words can properly explain.
And adding a follw up to the break up, why do you apologize for that? It was really nice, Maru could finally break it smoothly with Ueda, and rectify the thing about the notebook. And I adOre when they're talking in riddles!!
He had a tour to attend and a heart to catch I loved that phrase so much! So beautiful! I think your thesis will go smoothly your english is just awesome!
/runs off again to read the next part\
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Date: 2009-05-13 10:00 am (UTC)I get what you are saing about the ending, and maybe I just didn´t explain it properly ... It was not because we all know where it´s headed I wanted to finish this now ... anyway ... I think it was just a writer´s whimp:)
And thank you for all those small compliments:) I hope my english won´t let me down during the thesis writing:)
*runs of to read your next comment:)*