Title: He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 10
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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chivakaza, thanks a lot:)
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pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: you still knew and I was left behind, wondering
[Poll #1396734][Poll #1396734] (beta for this chapter): Thank you for this, I am sorry I gave up on it myself. But you know, maybe we should start using a different color. Blue, or green, or just something not red!!! It might lessen the shock. And thanks for supporting my “evil idea”.
Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.
* edit: just letting you know, looking at the results, the final verdict is out, I will continue, thanks for voting :)
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 10
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary: Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
Beta-ed by
This fic was moved to my writing community
[Poll #1396734][Poll #1396734] (beta for this chapter): Thank you for this, I am sorry I gave up on it myself. But you know, maybe we should start using a different color. Blue, or green, or just something not red!!! It might lessen the shock. And thanks for supporting my “evil idea”.
Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.
* edit: just letting you know, looking at the results, the final verdict is out, I will continue, thanks for voting :)
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Date: 2009-05-13 10:00 am (UTC)I get what you are saing about the ending, and maybe I just didn´t explain it properly ... It was not because we all know where it´s headed I wanted to finish this now ... anyway ... I think it was just a writer´s whimp:)
And thank you for all those small compliments:) I hope my english won´t let me down during the thesis writing:)
*runs of to read your next comment:)*