He knew - chapter 10 ( last one? YOU DECIDE!)

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 10
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
Beta-ed by chivakaza, thanks a lot:) 


This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link:  you still knew and I was left behind, wondering

[Poll #1396734][Poll #1396734] (beta for this chapter): Thank you for this, I am sorry I gave up on it myself. But you know, maybe we should start using a different color. Blue, or green, or just something not red!!! It might lessen the shock. And thanks for supporting my “evil idea”.

Comments are love, constructive criticism even more.
 
* edit: just letting you know, looking at the results, the final verdict is out, I will continue, thanks for voting :)

Comments

[gaillen.livejournal.com]

Hi, sorry I haven't commented before but I really do love this story. It makes so much sense and I'm sad about MaruDa breaking up...which was my first OTP before RyoDa. I love them just as much as RyoDa. But I understand now why Maru did what he did.

And I voted for YES! More! But I don't think they actually have to get together in the end at least you don't have to say it but I really think Ryo and Ueda should make amends and at least "apologize" to each other. Make sure none of this is hanging over them anymore.

I hope you understand. There just needs to be more but it doesn't necessarily have to be them getting together at the end. Just some kind of....conclusion between them that isn't like this. That's why I voted YES. Just wanted to tell you what I think. :P

And thanks again for the story...I really like it.

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I am blushing... you have been reading this story? I am honored ´cause I adore your stories ... Also I am relieved it makes sense and that I was able to explain why the break up happened. I was sad about it too. But ...

I do realize there is still so much hanging in the air between Ryo and Ueda, just that with this chapter, maybe because this was a MaruDa story too, I felt like it could end. Like what happens after this is a new begining, new story in it´s own way. hence the new notebook.

But I will wrap it up properly, so those two can finaly sort their relationship out a bit.
So thank you so much for letting me know what you think, for giving me an extra reason to continue. And of course for reading:)