Oneshot: Darkness

[higure]

This is probably the most I have ever spammed my f-list in a day, since I am posting for the 3rd time today. I am sorry. This fic is long overdue, it is actually the first ever request I received. But as it is Dir en Grey and totally not my fandom it took long. Thanks sis for waiting patiently. I did research still I can´t probably do these "hard core dudes"! XD And it is not long either, I still hope you will find at least something you like in the weirdness this has become.

Title: Darkness
Pairing: Kaoru/Die
Rating: PG
Summary: prompted with: “Sometimes the sky looks like the sea. Sometimes the sea looks like the sky. Sometimes I am you. And sometimes. You are me.” and this picture

No beta
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.

Requested by/written for chivakaza



This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: did you forget your contact lenses then?


Do not kill me please! *goes to hide*

Comments

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeels*

this was goooooooooood

you go!!!!!!!
I loved it!!!
kind of .....too romantic...but I liked it...
omg and fun ... such fun ... this was great .. (contact lenses rule the world)
honestly for someone who doesn´t know them almost at all... this was perfect.. I dearly love it ..
gonna pimp it everywhere ...
I am sure many people will appreciate this ..

I especially loved this:

Die shrugs and looks ahead.
“Are you sure you didn´t forget to put you contact lenses on?” He asks again, spinning to look at Kaoru who still studies the skies. He tugs at him, so that the older faces him and looks him right into the eyes. They stare at each other, Die following the other´s pupil until he forgets to and then he just slowly drowns in the darkness, in the shinning of Kaoru´s orbs, he sees only himself in them and he likes it selfishly.


&

but then eyes shine in that darkness, sleepy, familiar, glowing, deep, dim and he can see only himself in them again … and he likes it selfishly.

&


he palm on his shoulder doesn´t disappear. Die closes his eyes and just breathes. Kaoru does the same, time doesn´t exist, space doesn´t either, just two mingling breaths, two beings connected through a warm flowing in their veins. There is no Kaoru, there is no Die, in the dark you are me and me is you and then the palm moves upwards, caressing the neck, slowly holding a jaw, a cheek and Die curls from inside and his body follows, leaning into the touch, and then forward, his head falls on Kaoru´s chest and a heartbeat tells him that there is still world around them.

yaaaaaaaaay
thanks sis..
this was definitely worth waiting for!!!!!

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

lol I mean LOL
and yeah I know it was totally romantic, but seriously, you wanted romance so there you go:)

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

glad you enjoyed it, i blame the fact that every info I read about them had to mention both of them being nearsighted and Kaoru needing total darkness to sleep, I just could not resist!

*oh wait, you quoted!!!! OMG now I flail back at you vbfdjkvcnxcnasbcy THANK YOU!!!
also obviously you like the parts where I went, OMG what am I trying to do here? you always pick up on stuff I feel most insecure about XD


anyway sorry it is short and you had to wait like forever ♥

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

I totally liked it, seriously.. I love that with die selfishly likng his own reflection in kao´s eyes... that was gooooood......

anyway I myslef didn´t even know that kaoru can sleep only in total darkness...so ... here I go... so lame ..
you are the best
hahahah XD

[rheakurokawa.livejournal.com]

holy shit are you crazy? how can anyone kill you this was perfect. PERFECT. omg PERFECT. i am not coherent. i apologize beforehand. i adore this. they're not even my otp and i adore it. ADORE YOU HEAR ME? holy shit my poor little heart goes bumping into everything, all directions. this was utterly gorgeous and so them. going 6 star rated into memories right now. do you know how much it's been since i've read something like this?


don't you dare stop writing deg. please?

holy kao. wow

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

Ehm ... *flushes some deep shades of red*

I ... thank you? I frankly don´t know what to say, because this took forever to write and really I did it just because my sister asked me to and I was totaly scared of butchering those two (which would be shame really, since Kaoru became somehow alluring in the process)

again thank you and I am happy you liked this, as for more deg, my sister is evil and has me firmly in her grasps so nothing is impossible. Also given that I have read your works before and thought they are amazing, I am honored ... very, very much.

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

haaaaaaaaaa
thank you rhea for assuring her this was epic awesomness!!!!

you see, sis!!
it IS AWESOMNESS!!!

anyway....bwuahaha.. I am going to remeber this:
(which would be shame really, since Kaoru became somehow alluring in the process)

again thank you and I am happy you liked this, as for more deg, my sister is evil and has me firmly in her grasps so nothing is impossible.

XDXDXD

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

LOL you stalker!!!
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oh no! I am doomed!!!!

[rheakurokawa.livejournal.com]

kaoru has this gift. i wasn't such a kaoru girl but then he kinda snuck up on me and now i'm all oh aoru oh kaoru all the time ahahaahah

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I should have been warned! let´s add it do the list of things for which I blame chiva! Well it seems something a little good came out of it so it is ok:)

[rheakurokawa.livejournal.com]

sister!blaming. i love it :))

have you put it on diexkaorulove? People there would love it :)

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

No I haven´t posted it anywhere so far, sis said maybe she will (since it is kind of hers), I have to ask her if she did so, if not I´ll consider it:)
and again thank you so much for showing your love for this fic:)

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

gonna post it there now...
XD

[fonulyn.livejournal.com]

Aw, I really think that this was good! I enjoyed reading it, and it brightened my morning a lot! :) Thank you for sharing ♥

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I am glad to make your morning a little better:) and thank you very much for reading, liking, letting me know .... ♥

[jikhyun.livejournal.com]

awww die can be kao's seeing eye man lol that was sweet.

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

yeah it probably was, I still have doubts about these guys (the rockers they are) being able of sweet ... but maybe it worked this time ...

Thank you for reading and commenting

[serpentia99.livejournal.com]

alright:

this.
was.
great.

really. an unusually good piece of work =) I can't compare it to any other stuff you've got written, so I can't say it's your best, and I wouldn't necessary say it's Die and Kaoru of Dir en grey, but this does not mean it is not well written. propably one of the best poetic stuff I've been reading on an LJ for a very long time.

loves:

There is no Kaoru, there is no Die, in the dark you are me and me is you and then the palm moves upwards, caressing the neck, slowly holding a jaw, a cheek and Die curls from inside and his body follows, leaning into the touch, and then forward, his head falls on Kaoru´s chest and a heartbeat tells him that there is still world around them.

that switch from narrative perspective into personal narration is nice. you could have used this more often, because it is good. not everyone knows how to do it.

all in all your style reminds me of an quite famous german author. christina wolf is her name. maybe you take a look at her work to improve your own =) just a suggestion

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

THANK YOU

Anyway they are not my fandom, and that´s why this is a little different from other stuff I write and I admit they are probably out of character, as really I did research but hardly enough ...

as for writing I usually go with my guts, I am not professional and am not really aimig to be one, it is a way to filter my emotion really. Hence the switching and that it doesn´t happen enough, I have to wip my emotions into that state to be able to switch smoothly if you know what I mean ....

Comparing me to Christina Wolf is kind of ... too much (even though only in style), as I said I write for fun and she is great writer -a pro.

anyway I am glad you liked my imaginery in this despite them not being deg kaoru and die, on the other hand, in certain moments they might have not wanted to be that (in my imagination at least)

♥

[serpentia99.livejournal.com]

well there not too much ooc, because you didnt do enough research (there surely isnt a fixed version of their characters anyways), but its like your text isnt exactly fixed on special character traits. its nice, because one can use the own imagination

sry... it shouldnt been a comparision, rather an assiciation, because I've been reading her some while ago. she is much more confusing than you anyways. =) i just thought it might be interesting you as writing styles always develop