One shot: Here with you

[higure]

Title: Here with you
Pairing: Sho/Aiba (established)
Rating: PG 13 (?)
Summary: Sho gets a little too comfortable in Aiba´s living room and their relationship.

No beta
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.

Requested by/ for resha_hime

 

Through the storm we reach the shore
You give it all but I want more
And I'm waiting for you
U2, With or Without you

This fic was moved to my writing community pillow_verse, to read the fic, follow the link: maybe daydreaming, maybe planning their free time activities


IDEK!!! As my sister put it, nothing is sacred for me anymore (now this is totally Slovak idiom and I can´t for my life recall some English equivalent). And it´s been a while since I wrote in the past tense, so it might be a mess, especially the section with Sho alone n Aiba´s apartment. I apologize.

Also other than the first sentence that says “Sho-chan …” I am really doubtful about this. I can´t grasp Arashi, I think. That´s why I was so reluctant to write them. Also this is the first thing in several days that didn´t get deleted before it was finished or afterwards. It took a loads of will power to not hit Ctrl+A and Delete. But I kind of got affectionate towards this at the end so I am posting it and I hope it is not a total miss. Also I think the household rules thing might be completely unnecessary but I didn´t want to leave that piece of paper unattended. I should write one more Sakuraiba, and I will because I have an idea for it but I might butcher them again.

Yeah, I would appreciate someone telling me how much off I am with this. I won´t mind at all, au contraire!

Comments

[resha-hime.livejournal.com]

You ROCK, girl. For someone who has never even READ Arashi before this, you did a VERY GOOD JOB. I love how you weave that teensy bit of almost-angst into the story but not actually address it? Subtle, that's what your fics are, they're subtle but hold a lot of meaning at the same time. Do I even make sense? Does it even matter?! You just need to know that you're an awesome writer! I'm not going to lie and say your English was perfect but then again, there is no such thing as perfect. For someone who isn't a native speaker, you've done very well and it's nothing a little practice can't fix. I love you so much for writing this for me and you totally didn't butcher anyone. Your Sho and Aiba surprisingly turned out very real. Aiba is just so tolerant and Sho is such an ignorant workaholic. I can just totally imagine something like this happening. I really love the household rules and it totally made up for Sho's neglect of Aiba in the first half of the fic. He couldn't have been sweeter and I don't think there would have been a better way to apologize than what he did. And I'm ECSTATIC that you want to write one more Sakuraiba. Don't write just one, write 19248120834102 more &hearts:

Thank you so very much for writing this. You're too kind to me. Is there anything I could do for you in return? D: And please do write more Sakuraiba~ XD Just tell me what to bribe you with. And with this, I can sleep and have sweet Sakuraiba dreams~! =D

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

You know I have read some for the past few days :D

And you are responsible for the almost angst and subtle, that´s what I got out of your request. I am happy you liked this, you don´t even know how much.

I love you back for loving on my fics :D, for thinking I didn´t butcher them, for being able to imagine this ♥(well I actually love you no matter what, but you get the message)

English - we talked about this, I try, I know I am far from perfect, but you know me I am too stuborn to get a beta, I feel this way I learn more.

I do want you to go back to writing, you know that, but I don´t want you to do it because I asked, or because you need to bribe me. I don´t want to get bribed into writing fics for you, there will be a request post again, hopefully, sometimes in the future :) And you never know when you´ll say something that will have me typing away the moment I see it on MSN or in a comment. So no bribing, my fictions are for free. Just I need time with Arashi.

Again I am greatfull and happy you like this, hope you do have those sweet SakurAiba dreams of yours. ♥