One shot: Keeping me happy (baseball verse)

[higure]

Title: Keeping me happy
Pairing: KoKame (AU, established)
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Written in the For the love of the game verse intimately and affectionately known as "that baseball AU", using a prompt of New year´s resolution. Koki keeps his promise, though he might have overdone it.

Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta

Requested by/for chivakaza who has the advantage of being able to detail her request anytime. Basically she said: “I want more of that baseball AU.” I complied. Also this is how she likes her Kame, ok? Or at least I hope so … It was about time, I posted something else than meme ;D




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[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

intimately and affectionately known as "that baseball AU"
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also wth is meaning of this??
this is how she likes her Kame, ok? XDDD

Kame knows where Koki is pulling the glasses from, which shelf the popcorn is on, which cabinet hides the big bowl that Koki will put it into. He watches him in anticipation anyway, almost holding his breath when Koki reaches for a totally different handle. He releases the same breath when Koki just pulls some chocolate out of there. Kame wants to know all these details, wants to be sure of them, almost needs to.
I totally loved this opening scene <3

and always implementig almost our prototype of Pathetic Japanese Man XD
He ends up sitting on a bench that overlooks the baseball field. The same bench where Koki kissed him for the first time. So pathetic for a guy.


Koki sounds a bit like a mother hen in the beginning XDDD

aaaah I really liked this scene: “What is bothering you?” He asks, schooling himself to not sound as menacing as he could. “I can see you are tired and stressed. Something is wrong but you just won´t tell me. You shut me out, saying all is fine, saying all that matters is my contentment. That is not how a relationship works. You need to let me help you sometimes too. So what is bothering you?”

Koki sighs but shakes his head.

“It´s nothing, I can handle it, I don´t want to …”

Kame kicks the door.

“Don´t come to pick me up tomorrow,” he says, low, dangerous, warning and slams the door closed.
<3

The stairwell to the apartment is dark, and the dust whirls around him as he climbs the stairs. Kame thinks it looks like no one was here in ages but he remembers Koki telling him he hates cleaning this part of the house, telling him he likes it this way. It´s manly, little scary, little intriguing. It´s just dust …


THIS was totally AMAZING!!!! especially that part about Koki liking it that way <3

As he crosses the apartment and opens the door to his bedroom, the small suitcase by his coffee table never catches his eyes. Only when he wraps his arms around Kame and buries his head into his hair, does his mind provides the essential feedback. Kame should be far away. And they should be angry at each other. As he closes his eyes, the last thing he sees is the message from the New Years Eve. You. And he figures this too is one way to start a brand new year.


I am seriously not keen on much fluff, but you are making me love at least yours *flails*

Kame forgets to continue and Koki finally snaps his teeth at the finger still pressing against his lips.

“I hate when you do that,” he says but ducks his head to hide a blush that has decided to betray him.


this saved that, as you call it, "declaration" scene before


“I am renovating,” Koki answers.

LOL THE BEST REASON EVER!!!!

“Sure, but I am paying, you are celebrating.”

“That is not …” Kame´s eyebrows shoot up.

“Fine, you are paying,”

nyahahaaa :3

OMFG THE BEST POSSIBLE ENDING, seriously
“What do you want to eat?” Kame asks him from across the apartment. Koki is suddenly shaking with laughter, clutching at his stomach as he turns and starts to descent the stairs. Kame still hears the You that spills from his boyfriend´s lips in between fits of laughter. That is never getting old. He smirks, the tides are turning but he is not the one to complain. And the kitchen table might come handy tonight.

statistics: 4 typos, some missing commas, overusage of the word cute

I LOVED IT, THANK YOU!!!!! 3

ps: I found a song to this fic...well, actually it´s only a refrain of it, it´s called Uta by Kagrra, XDDDDD

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

also wth is meaning of this??
this is how she likes her Kame, ok? XDDD
You like him to be a good boy ;D

about the beginning, glad you liked it ...
the pathetic Japanese man, frankly I didn´t even realize, I was just referring to a scene from the first installment and back then they were just lazying around there ...

Lol, obviously, you like my angry.

haha I like my scary staircase, I totally think that is where the fic finally gets any good ;D

And excuse me, what fluff? It is supposed to be a little serene in a way, the fact that he kind of just curls against him, because he wants him, needs him there that night, before he questions why the hell he is there ... pfff ;D

this saved that, as you call it, "declaration" scene before
I know, that´s why it is there. I don´t use the "l word" much myself and you should know it. But Koki deserves to get one after year and a half of caring ...

and I am glad you liked the ending, I couldn´t resist reviving my old line ;D

send me the mistakes! and I didn´t realize I used the word cute more than twice ... is there really so much of it there? Hmmm *hits Crtl + F*

I am glad you liked this, uff it was pretty hard to decide what I´ll write about with them already so ... together XD

Also send me the song, lol Kagra (Utakata) is playing on my PC right now

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

but he IS a good, diligent boy XDDDDDDD

And excuse me, what fluff?hahah yeah FLUFF!!! But I liked it so... save your pfffts XDDD

hh I will tell you about ypos tomorrow ok?? I am too tired now and want to finish reading a fic i started before you send me a link to this
well, you used "cute" like 4 or 5 times, but I don´t find it too disturbing, so leave it like it is

this was really a great fic as usual!!! I want to remember this verse, I love it !!! my baseball AU is getting better and better ...need more of it XDDD

and Utakata is great song XD I don´t think you will like Uta and you certainly won´t feel the attachement of the song to that fic
but it has the same kind of refrain as Utakata has - in my terminology so called running refrain XD