Title: Keeping me happy
Pairing: KoKame (AU, established)
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Written in the For the love of the game verse intimately and affectionately known as "that baseball AU", using a prompt of New year´s resolution. Koki keeps his promise, though he might have overdone it.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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chivakaza who has the advantage of being able to detail her request anytime. Basically she said: “I want more of that baseball AU.” I complied. Also this is how she likes her Kame, ok? Or at least I hope so … It was about time, I posted something else than meme ;D
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Pairing: KoKame (AU, established)
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Written in the For the love of the game verse intimately and affectionately known as "that baseball AU", using a prompt of New year´s resolution. Koki keeps his promise, though he might have overdone it.
Disclaimer: It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
No beta
Requested by/for
This fic was moved to my writing community
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Date: 2010-01-04 01:00 am (UTC)this is how she likes her Kame, ok? XDDD
You like him to be a good boy ;D
about the beginning, glad you liked it ...
the pathetic Japanese man, frankly I didn´t even realize, I was just referring to a scene from the first installment and back then they were just lazying around there ...
Lol, obviously, you like my angry.
haha I like my scary staircase, I totally think that is where the fic finally gets any good ;D
And excuse me, what fluff? It is supposed to be a little serene in a way, the fact that he kind of just curls against him, because he wants him, needs him there that night, before he questions why the hell he is there ... pfff ;D
this saved that, as you call it, "declaration" scene before
I know, that´s why it is there. I don´t use the "l word" much myself and you should know it. But Koki deserves to get one after year and a half of caring ...
and I am glad you liked the ending, I couldn´t resist reviving my old line ;D
send me the mistakes! and I didn´t realize I used the word cute more than twice ... is there really so much of it there? Hmmm *hits Crtl + F*
I am glad you liked this, uff it was pretty hard to decide what I´ll write about with them already so ... together XD
Also send me the song, lol Kagra (Utakata) is playing on my PC right now
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Date: 2010-01-04 01:12 am (UTC)And excuse me, what fluff?hahah yeah FLUFF!!! But I liked it so... save your pfffts XDDD
hh I will tell you about ypos tomorrow ok?? I am too tired now and want to finish reading a fic i started before you send me a link to this
well, you used "cute" like 4 or 5 times, but I don´t find it too disturbing, so leave it like it is
this was really a great fic as usual!!! I want to remember this verse, I love it !!! my baseball AU is getting better and better ...need more of it XDDD
and Utakata is great song XD I don´t think you will like Uta and you certainly won´t feel the attachement of the song to that fic
but it has the same kind of refrain as Utakata has - in my terminology so called running refrain XD