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Title:  Of plans and phone calls
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: PG 13
Summary:  Sequel to Staying overnight, as some of you wanted to know what happened in Osaka. Nevertheless I think it can be read without reading the first fic. What can I say, things never go completely smooth with Ryoda. Again, fic has two parts: Ryo´s POV and Ueda´s POV, this time Ryo´s was written first. And you can again choose to read only one of them.

Disclaimer:  I drool over them; I do not own them or anything else for that matter.

Warning: Cheesy, fluffy, and a bit angst too this time, I am sorry but I think I made Ueda overact a bit. Also this time it is looooong, make a coffee to have along with it.
No beta ...

I tried the POVs again, but this time the characters interacted the whole time, so it might overlap too much. On the other hand when I tried to make it into one perspective fitting all the feelings in was impossible. I personaly like Ryo´s POV better now as it is more matter of fact(ish).



this fiction was moved to [livejournal.com profile] pillow_verse , to read follow the link: Ryo´s POV



to read Ueda´s POV, go hereUeda´s POV
Finally, did you get this far? If so please let me know what you think, comments and constructive criticism are love.
I would love to credit the person that uploaded the pic, I just remember I found it at captain u community, if the person reads this, please let me know I will credit you, I just needed something to split the long post ...
 

Date: 2009-04-03 05:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ryunuka.livejournal.com
Kawaaaaaaaaaii~!
They're so sweet, I really liked this, I read both and the details of their emotions is so well written, and I love how they each interpret what the other is doing, then when the POV switched you tell what's actually going on from the other side, seeing it from both sides makes it all the sweeter.
This was a brilliant fic, otsukaresama~!

Date: 2009-04-03 10:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you ♥ I did want to get the emotions across, so I am hapy you were able to read the whole thing not minding the lenght and the same situation twice.

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