One shot: Of plans and phone calls

[higure]

Title:  Of plans and phone calls
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: PG 13
Summary:  Sequel to Staying overnight, as some of you wanted to know what happened in Osaka. Nevertheless I think it can be read without reading the first fic. What can I say, things never go completely smooth with Ryoda. Again, fic has two parts: Ryo´s POV and Ueda´s POV, this time Ryo´s was written first. And you can again choose to read only one of them.

Disclaimer:  I drool over them; I do not own them or anything else for that matter.

Warning: Cheesy, fluffy, and a bit angst too this time, I am sorry but I think I made Ueda overact a bit. Also this time it is looooong, make a coffee to have along with it.
No beta ...

I tried the POVs again, but this time the characters interacted the whole time, so it might overlap too much. On the other hand when I tried to make it into one perspective fitting all the feelings in was impossible. I personaly like Ryo´s POV better now as it is more matter of fact(ish).



this fiction was moved to pillow_verse , to read follow the link: Ryo´s POV



to read Ueda´s POV, go here:  Ueda´s POV
Finally, did you get this far? If so please let me know what you think, comments and constructive criticism are love.
I would love to credit the person that uploaded the pic, I just remember I found it at captain u community, if the person reads this, please let me know I will credit you, I just needed something to split the long post ...
 

Comments

[4evamangafan.livejournal.com]

Loved it ^_^ I've always been a fan of knowing what both people think and you've written it in such a way that reading both accounts was very interesting despite having the same storyline!!

[ryunuka.livejournal.com]

Kawaaaaaaaaaii~!
They're so sweet, I really liked this, I read both and the details of their emotions is so well written, and I love how they each interpret what the other is doing, then when the POV switched you tell what's actually going on from the other side, seeing it from both sides makes it all the sweeter.
This was a brilliant fic, otsukaresama~!

[hanny2luv.livejournal.com]

So cute.
And it's fun to read about their fight.

Thanks for the fic. ^^

[oxokawaiiox.livejournal.com]

oh gosh it is late here, and I'm just reading this last fix for my bedtime story xD
I love it, really a great sequel for the previous one ^^
I like both parts, but I love Tat-chans even more because it's so fluffy hehe..
thanks for this~

[resha-hime.livejournal.com]

Hmm, can't say I didn't think it was repetitive, but I guess its a style on its own. ^_~ Both Ryo and Ueda should just be honest with their feelings. And is there going to be a sequel? (since they have lists now) And that picture of Ueda is so provocative. If Ryo saw Ueda like that, I bet he'll have a hard time NOT jumping him. XO

[sono-kiseki.livejournal.com]

fldksf;ls It was sweet. :DDD Thought the part where they were like, fighting, made me go AWWWW. DDD: But it's okay! Cute ending! :3 *goes off to fangirl land*

[raixas.livejournal.com]

thats really sweeet! love love and love it!

thank you very much for the sequel!^^

[roughmetal2.livejournal.com]

aaah, it's really funny how people interpret things differently that's why a lot of couples break up. i like both their POVs. the combination of angst and fluff is very good, it made my heart ache and swell at the same time XD.

[shobe12.livejournal.com]

that was cute, i l0ve it.
its kinda sweet, too.

thanks for sharing.
liked it a l0t..:)

[allboutp.livejournal.com]

this one made me read each of the word!
omg i cant believe how hard they r at expressing their thougts, well, they r ryoda for sure
but at last, they made it ^^ thank goodness!
thanks for this wonderful fic,i really lk how they try to understand each other, although some of the efforts failed hehe~
hope u will write more in future!

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

Of course I went this far. And as I told you, I'm late but now it's read!

I think I like Ryo's better too, but I Ueda's one is so HIM! Okay a bit overreacted but that's how he is, at least in fics. SO, no worries.
I felt the tension growing when they were staring at each other while eating! Fun!

I wished to see Eito's reactions, must have been priceless!
I like POVs. I didn't know I liked them before, now I do.