One shot: Of plans and phone calls

[higure]

Title:  Of plans and phone calls
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: PG 13
Summary:  Sequel to Staying overnight, as some of you wanted to know what happened in Osaka. Nevertheless I think it can be read without reading the first fic. What can I say, things never go completely smooth with Ryoda. Again, fic has two parts: Ryo´s POV and Ueda´s POV, this time Ryo´s was written first. And you can again choose to read only one of them.

Disclaimer:  I drool over them; I do not own them or anything else for that matter.

Warning: Cheesy, fluffy, and a bit angst too this time, I am sorry but I think I made Ueda overact a bit. Also this time it is looooong, make a coffee to have along with it.
No beta ...

I tried the POVs again, but this time the characters interacted the whole time, so it might overlap too much. On the other hand when I tried to make it into one perspective fitting all the feelings in was impossible. I personaly like Ryo´s POV better now as it is more matter of fact(ish).



this fiction was moved to pillow_verse , to read follow the link: Ryo´s POV



to read Ueda´s POV, go here:  Ueda´s POV
Finally, did you get this far? If so please let me know what you think, comments and constructive criticism are love.
I would love to credit the person that uploaded the pic, I just remember I found it at captain u community, if the person reads this, please let me know I will credit you, I just needed something to split the long post ...
 

Comments

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

Of course I went this far. And as I told you, I'm late but now it's read!

I think I like Ryo's better too, but I Ueda's one is so HIM! Okay a bit overreacted but that's how he is, at least in fics. SO, no worries.
I felt the tension growing when they were staring at each other while eating! Fun!

I wished to see Eito's reactions, must have been priceless!
I like POVs. I didn't know I liked them before, now I do.

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

I like POV´s too, but I think this one tired me out:) I am glad someone is there with me, loving Ryo´s side of the story:) Am I a bad mom for loving one of her children more than the other?
I know Ueda was overreacting, and after I wrote it I thought it was too much, so I was really afraid I ruined it, because I believe he is not like that at all:) Hmm, will have to learn how to tame my imagination.
Oh, sorry for a long reply ... again, I just loooove your comments very much, and I always wanna react properly. Thank you for giving them so generously and for always taking time to read my frail attemps on Ryoda love:)

[creamy-amande.livejournal.com]

Yes obviously, they were very long, so yes tiring....but for us it's good, we get to know their emotions the most.
HUm hum, mom? Wow that thought is scary! But I understand, you're the mom of these characters. Okay okay.

Don't worry about being it long, that's how we got to know each other and added each other too right? I love it.
Don't say that! You're almost new (not so new now ;p) to the RyoDa loving but you're managing very well! Don't refrain yourself!