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Title:  Of plans and phone calls
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: PG 13
Summary:  Sequel to Staying overnight, as some of you wanted to know what happened in Osaka. Nevertheless I think it can be read without reading the first fic. What can I say, things never go completely smooth with Ryoda. Again, fic has two parts: Ryo´s POV and Ueda´s POV, this time Ryo´s was written first. And you can again choose to read only one of them.

Disclaimer:  I drool over them; I do not own them or anything else for that matter.

Warning: Cheesy, fluffy, and a bit angst too this time, I am sorry but I think I made Ueda overact a bit. Also this time it is looooong, make a coffee to have along with it.
No beta ...

I tried the POVs again, but this time the characters interacted the whole time, so it might overlap too much. On the other hand when I tried to make it into one perspective fitting all the feelings in was impossible. I personaly like Ryo´s POV better now as it is more matter of fact(ish).



this fiction was moved to [livejournal.com profile] pillow_verse , to read follow the link: Ryo´s POV



to read Ueda´s POV, go hereUeda´s POV
Finally, did you get this far? If so please let me know what you think, comments and constructive criticism are love.
I would love to credit the person that uploaded the pic, I just remember I found it at captain u community, if the person reads this, please let me know I will credit you, I just needed something to split the long post ...
 

Date: 2009-04-03 04:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 4evamangafan.livejournal.com
Loved it ^_^ I've always been a fan of knowing what both people think and you've written it in such a way that reading both accounts was very interesting despite having the same storyline!!

Date: 2009-04-03 10:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading and commenting, and I am glad that even like this, you found it interesting.

Date: 2009-04-03 05:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ryunuka.livejournal.com
Kawaaaaaaaaaii~!
They're so sweet, I really liked this, I read both and the details of their emotions is so well written, and I love how they each interpret what the other is doing, then when the POV switched you tell what's actually going on from the other side, seeing it from both sides makes it all the sweeter.
This was a brilliant fic, otsukaresama~!

Date: 2009-04-03 10:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you ♥ I did want to get the emotions across, so I am hapy you were able to read the whole thing not minding the lenght and the same situation twice.

Date: 2009-04-03 05:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hanny2luv.livejournal.com
So cute.
And it's fun to read about their fight.

Thanks for the fic. ^^

Date: 2009-04-03 10:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
thanks for reading and commenting, ... happy you had fun reading:)

Date: 2009-04-03 05:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oxokawaiiox.livejournal.com
oh gosh it is late here, and I'm just reading this last fix for my bedtime story xD
I love it, really a great sequel for the previous one ^^
I like both parts, but I love Tat-chans even more because it's so fluffy hehe..
thanks for this~

Date: 2009-04-03 10:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
I wrote it through the night. Right now, I am so regretting that as I fishided it at like 5:30am and slept like for 3 hours max.
But seeing someone read it at the same time as a bedtime story and was able to get through it makes it worth it:)
... ne, we should sleep some more:)
So thank you for reading and commenting ♥

Date: 2009-04-03 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oxokawaiiox.livejournal.com
hehe, well I wanted to read RyoDa, then I saw your fic, so then I read it~ ^^
haha oh yeah we should get some sleep, but then again it's spring break here for students =3

Date: 2009-04-03 05:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
spring break, now I am jealous, no spring break for me:( On the contrary it will get bussier and bussier as the second half of the semester is slowly approaching:( So have your fun, while it lasts:)

Date: 2009-04-03 05:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oxokawaiiox.livejournal.com
awehhh >___< ganbatte ne! hehe and yes i will ^^

Date: 2009-04-03 05:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] resha-hime.livejournal.com
Hmm, can't say I didn't think it was repetitive, but I guess its a style on its own. ^_~ Both Ryo and Ueda should just be honest with their feelings. And is there going to be a sequel? (since they have lists now) And that picture of Ueda is so provocative. If Ryo saw Ueda like that, I bet he'll have a hard time NOT jumping him. XO

Date: 2009-04-03 10:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
XO the picture is cool, I just hope i will not anger the person who scanned it:)
about the sequel, I do not think so, this was a sequel of its own and a long one at that, so I think I did all I could for this fic.
Just imagine them having a lazy, sweet weekend enjoying each other:) doing things Ueda said he wanted to do with Ryo in the first fic (but I swear I reallly want to write them playing the guitar together, I will have to think of a situation for that)XD
So, sorry for the repetition (and now a looong ranting reply:), I was aware of it, but just couldn´t write it otherwise and thanks for finding the time to read and comment.

Date: 2009-04-03 12:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sono-kiseki.livejournal.com
fldksf;ls It was sweet. :DDD Thought the part where they were like, fighting, made me go AWWWW. DDD: But it's okay! Cute ending! :3 *goes off to fangirl land*

Date: 2009-04-03 12:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
good ... the fight was ment to be just AWWWWWWWWW :D thanks for reading, and have fun in a fangirl land, might join you later:)

Date: 2009-04-03 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raixas.livejournal.com
thats really sweeet! love love and love it!

thank you very much for the sequel!^^

Date: 2009-04-03 01:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
you are welcome, love love love you for loving it:)

Date: 2009-04-03 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roughmetal2.livejournal.com
aaah, it's really funny how people interpret things differently that's why a lot of couples break up. i like both their POVs. the combination of angst and fluff is very good, it made my heart ache and swell at the same time XD.

Date: 2009-04-03 05:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
Misunderstandings - yeah, I am glad that "my" Ryoda made it through:) thank you for reading and commenting and I loooove your icon:)

Date: 2009-04-04 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shobe12.livejournal.com
that was cute, i l0ve it.
its kinda sweet, too.

thanks for sharing.
liked it a l0t..:)

Date: 2009-04-04 07:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
happy to share:) thanks for reading and commenting ...

Date: 2009-04-07 04:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] allboutp.livejournal.com
this one made me read each of the word!
omg i cant believe how hard they r at expressing their thougts, well, they r ryoda for sure
but at last, they made it ^^ thank goodness!
thanks for this wonderful fic,i really lk how they try to understand each other, although some of the efforts failed hehe~
hope u will write more in future!

Date: 2009-04-07 07:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
what can I say, they do have some communication problems:) But they have their own ways of getting around it, rigth:)
And I should be thanking you for reading even this long one:) will try to write again:)

Date: 2009-04-10 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] creamy-amande.livejournal.com
Of course I went this far. And as I told you, I'm late but now it's read!

I think I like Ryo's better too, but I Ueda's one is so HIM! Okay a bit overreacted but that's how he is, at least in fics. SO, no worries.
I felt the tension growing when they were staring at each other while eating! Fun!

I wished to see Eito's reactions, must have been priceless!
I like POVs. I didn't know I liked them before, now I do.

Date: 2009-04-10 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sashjun.livejournal.com
I like POV´s too, but I think this one tired me out:) I am glad someone is there with me, loving Ryo´s side of the story:) Am I a bad mom for loving one of her children more than the other?
I know Ueda was overreacting, and after I wrote it I thought it was too much, so I was really afraid I ruined it, because I believe he is not like that at all:) Hmm, will have to learn how to tame my imagination.
Oh, sorry for a long reply ... again, I just loooove your comments very much, and I always wanna react properly. Thank you for giving them so generously and for always taking time to read my frail attemps on Ryoda love:)

Date: 2009-04-10 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] creamy-amande.livejournal.com
Yes obviously, they were very long, so yes tiring....but for us it's good, we get to know their emotions the most.
HUm hum, mom? Wow that thought is scary! But I understand, you're the mom of these characters. Okay okay.

Don't worry about being it long, that's how we got to know each other and added each other too right? I love it.
Don't say that! You're almost new (not so new now ;p) to the RyoDa loving but you're managing very well! Don't refrain yourself!

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