One shot: Of plans and phone calls
Apr. 3rd, 2009 05:04 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Title: Of plans and phone calls
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Sequel to Staying overnight, as some of you wanted to know what happened in Osaka. Nevertheless I think it can be read without reading the first fic. What can I say, things never go completely smooth with Ryoda. Again, fic has two parts: Ryo´s POV and Ueda´s POV, this time Ryo´s was written first. And you can again choose to read only one of them.
Disclaimer: I drool over them; I do not own them or anything else for that matter.
Warning: Cheesy, fluffy, and a bit angst too this time, I am sorry but I think I made Ueda overact a bit. Also this time it is looooong, make a coffee to have along with it.
No beta ...
I tried the POVs again, but this time the characters interacted the whole time, so it might overlap too much. On the other hand when I tried to make it into one perspective fitting all the feelings in was impossible. I personaly like Ryo´s POV better now as it is more matter of fact(ish).
this fiction was moved to
pillow_verse , to read follow the link: Ryo´s POV

to read Ueda´s POV, go here: Ueda´s POV
Finally, did you get this far? If so please let me know what you think, comments and constructive criticism are love.
I would love to credit the person that uploaded the pic, I just remember I found it at captain u community, if the person reads this, please let me know I will credit you, I just needed something to split the long post ...
Pairing: Ryoda
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Sequel to Staying overnight, as some of you wanted to know what happened in Osaka. Nevertheless I think it can be read without reading the first fic. What can I say, things never go completely smooth with Ryoda. Again, fic has two parts: Ryo´s POV and Ueda´s POV, this time Ryo´s was written first. And you can again choose to read only one of them.
Disclaimer: I drool over them; I do not own them or anything else for that matter.
Warning: Cheesy, fluffy, and a bit angst too this time, I am sorry but I think I made Ueda overact a bit. Also this time it is looooong, make a coffee to have along with it.
No beta ...
I tried the POVs again, but this time the characters interacted the whole time, so it might overlap too much. On the other hand when I tried to make it into one perspective fitting all the feelings in was impossible. I personaly like Ryo´s POV better now as it is more matter of fact(ish).
this fiction was moved to
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to read Ueda´s POV, go here: Ueda´s POV
Finally, did you get this far? If so please let me know what you think, comments and constructive criticism are love.
I would love to credit the person that uploaded the pic, I just remember I found it at captain u community, if the person reads this, please let me know I will credit you, I just needed something to split the long post ...
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Date: 2009-04-03 04:26 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-03 10:22 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-03 05:10 am (UTC)They're so sweet, I really liked this, I read both and the details of their emotions is so well written, and I love how they each interpret what the other is doing, then when the POV switched you tell what's actually going on from the other side, seeing it from both sides makes it all the sweeter.
This was a brilliant fic, otsukaresama~!
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Date: 2009-04-03 10:32 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-03 05:11 am (UTC)And it's fun to read about their fight.
Thanks for the fic. ^^
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Date: 2009-04-03 10:33 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-03 05:28 am (UTC)I love it, really a great sequel for the previous one ^^
I like both parts, but I love Tat-chans even more because it's so fluffy hehe..
thanks for this~
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Date: 2009-04-03 10:36 am (UTC)But seeing someone read it at the same time as a bedtime story and was able to get through it makes it worth it:)
... ne, we should sleep some more:)
So thank you for reading and commenting ♥
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Date: 2009-04-03 03:00 pm (UTC)haha oh yeah we should get some sleep, but then again it's spring break here for students =3
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Date: 2009-04-03 05:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-03 05:58 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-03 05:46 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-03 10:43 am (UTC)about the sequel, I do not think so, this was a sequel of its own and a long one at that, so I think I did all I could for this fic.
Just imagine them having a lazy, sweet weekend enjoying each other:) doing things Ueda said he wanted to do with Ryo in the first fic (but I swear I reallly want to write them playing the guitar together, I will have to think of a situation for that)XD
So, sorry for the repetition (and now a looong ranting reply:), I was aware of it, but just couldn´t write it otherwise and thanks for finding the time to read and comment.
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Date: 2009-04-03 12:16 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-03 12:22 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-03 01:28 pm (UTC)thank you very much for the sequel!^^
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Date: 2009-04-03 01:32 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-03 03:38 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-03 05:50 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-04 01:53 am (UTC)its kinda sweet, too.
thanks for sharing.
liked it a l0t..:)
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Date: 2009-04-04 07:39 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-07 04:00 am (UTC)omg i cant believe how hard they r at expressing their thougts, well, they r ryoda for sure
but at last, they made it ^^ thank goodness!
thanks for this wonderful fic,i really lk how they try to understand each other, although some of the efforts failed hehe~
hope u will write more in future!
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Date: 2009-04-07 07:42 am (UTC)And I should be thanking you for reading even this long one:) will try to write again:)
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Date: 2009-04-10 06:04 pm (UTC)I think I like Ryo's better too, but I Ueda's one is so HIM! Okay a bit overreacted but that's how he is, at least in fics. SO, no worries.
I felt the tension growing when they were staring at each other while eating! Fun!
I wished to see Eito's reactions, must have been priceless!
I like POVs. I didn't know I liked them before, now I do.
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Date: 2009-04-10 08:38 pm (UTC)I know Ueda was overreacting, and after I wrote it I thought it was too much, so I was really afraid I ruined it, because I believe he is not like that at all:) Hmm, will have to learn how to tame my imagination.
Oh, sorry for a long reply ... again, I just loooove your comments very much, and I always wanna react properly. Thank you for giving them so generously and for always taking time to read my frail attemps on Ryoda love:)
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Date: 2009-04-10 08:50 pm (UTC)HUm hum, mom? Wow that thought is scary! But I understand, you're the mom of these characters. Okay okay.
Don't worry about being it long, that's how we got to know each other and added each other too right? I love it.
Don't say that! You're almost new (not so new now ;p) to the RyoDa loving but you're managing very well! Don't refrain yourself!