He knew - chapter 5

[higure]

Title:  He knew
Pairing: Ryoda, Maruda
Chapter: 5
Rating: Safe (for now anyway, and I doubt it will ever be more than PG 13)
Summary:  Ryo mocked Ueda all the time, but time has passed. Ueda got stronger and is in a relationship now. Ryo might not be able to mend what he has broken in the past.

Disclaimer:  It would be really fun, if I could just order them online, and in a week they would arrive in a box all plastered with signs FRAGILE on it.
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I am dead tired, so there might be more mistakes than usual, please forgive me. Also I am back from Paris (which was tiring but great as always:) so I should update faster again. And I have decided about the ending, I think … I hope this chapter wasn´t a letdown, it was a bit of a filler, it´s working title was Ryo lurking around, and I hope I got the point across.

Comments

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

oh well....now this is ...probably my fave chapter until now ...
but you make Jin too clever .... whats up with that ??? hahah

and ... I think I will be kind of sad if this will end ryoda ...I don´t want it to be ryoda ... amru will be hurt ...and you see...thats like ... hmmm I don´t know which ending will be more realistic ..
I guess people leave their loved ones because of other people they might have loved in their pasts too often ...so that ending might be better ...but ...then .... it would be just totally unfair towards maru if ueda would eventually dump him ...coz ... ryo was just one big jerk ...and it doesn´t matter that he didn´t read the black notebook...only the fact that he took it is enough ... I wouldn ´t give him second chance ...

so now ...this fic has become something what I will read only for sake of wanting to know whats gonna be next... and I will dislike ueda is he leaves maru ... that just won´t be fair

weeeeell....keep up your writing is good... I am really jealous of your productivity XD

[sashjun.livejournal.com]

It´s too sad, you will keep reading just because you wanna know what happens next, not because you like it:) I will zipp my mounth about the rest though, you will see ...

Also, didn´t you just write exactly the same as what Ueda said to Maru, that it didn´t really matter, wheteher Ryo had read the notebook or not, that it was enough he treated him poorly? See, you think the same way...

I am suprised, that people like this chapter, because i was afraid it will be chaotic, and I had trouble writing it ...
Lol, my productivity is a mystery to me too:) I wonder how long it will last, well it should until the end of this multichap:)

btw look at the icon I am going to use, i made it, it sucks, but lol my own ryoda manip:)

[chivakaza.livejournal.com]

no no I really like this fic ... if I wouldn´t I wouldn´t want to read it believe me ....but the need of wanting to know how this will end is the strongest ...

and don´t worrz the chapter is not chaotic ..or I don´t think so
and wow you need to teach me how to do that manipulation .... I waaaannaaaaaaaa